~ * Sachi Gazal * ~_DeV

by thinkhattk on August 07, 2010, 08:20:09 AM
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Me sabdo ke bandhan me nahi manti "DEV",
dil ki boli se jo likhi jaye wahi sachi gazal,

jaruri nahi, ho apne dilbar ya dilrubba ka didar usme,
dard dil ka bayan ho wahi sachi gazal he,

maykhane me nasha ho kis kaam ka?
chhalak jaye anshuo ke jamm wahi sachi gazal,

fariyado ka yaha koi kaam nahi,
'yoga' nu yog fariyad me gari-yaad aaye wahi sachi gazal,

peshkas nahi he mehfilo ki koi gazal me,
yogi bane patnge jale, sarjay wahi sachi gazal,

baki 'dev' ki kya himmat ki wo banaye aesa naam gazal me,
"dev" likhte hi tasvir teri bane wahi sachi gazal....
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2010, 09:40:14 AM »
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hey nice yar
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2010, 09:43:45 AM »
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Quote from: Muzammil, on August 07, 2010, 09:40:14 AM
hey nice yar


sukriya..
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2010, 09:47:48 AM »
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wah ji wah....hat ke he..

geet likh gazal likhi likh dale sare khwab bhi
geet bhi tanha gazal bhi tanha or tanha nazme chhod gaye
apna kehkar mujhko tum kyun apna muh mod gaye
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2010, 09:52:28 AM »
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sukriya abhi ji....


Ye to galat femi he ki hamne muhh ferr liya,
tum ne pichhe muddkar dekha hi nahi ham sahi khade tera laut aane ka intezar kar rahe the....
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2010, 09:57:04 AM »
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hmm
intezar to jhuta sahara hota he
warna ab talak unhe laut ana tha
khade hoge shayad kisi or kinare par
is kinare se to unhe bahut door jana tha
me yahi khada hu khada rahuga hamesha
unhe milna anhi tha warna ab tak to hame mil jaan tha~
 
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«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2010, 10:01:34 AM »
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kinare par hi khada rehna tha to kyu milne ka wada kiya,
milna tha isliye to sagar me doob gaye tera paas aane ke liye,
par afsosh tu to kisi or ke sath chal nikla tha....
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2010, 10:06:44 AM »
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ek hi dil tha mere pas jo de chuka hun
kisi or ke sath chalne ke liye kuchh bacha na tha
ye to aap he jo samajhte rahe mujhe bewafa
warna wafa ke siva mere pas kuchh bacha na tha~
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2010, 10:09:45 AM »
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Wafa kya hoti he hamse behtar or kon janta he,
tu bewafa hoke bhi ham bewafa keh na sake....
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2010, 10:13:24 AM »
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kehen ko to duniya bhi mujhe samajh na payee
tum bhi na samjhoge to meri wafa par daag hoga~
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2010, 10:17:16 AM »
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samajne ko tumhe aapna sab kuch samja,
tune tab sath chhoda jab kisne bhi sath diya....
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«Reply #11 on: August 07, 2010, 10:21:40 AM »
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tahe dil se sukriya shihab ji....

Quote from: Shihab on August 07, 2010, 10:20:20 AM
Mohtarma Think Ji
Aapne Bahut Achchi Koshish Ki Hai
Haal e Dil Ko Lafzon Mein Pirone K.


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2010, 05:19:43 PM »
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Wah wah Devangi su vaat chhe........mast batting kari chhe.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Su fataafat lakhyu chhe baku
Saras mazaa padi gayee....

Achhee he teri Gazal......
Sachi he teri lagan....

Chhupee rustam hai tu
Likhteee mastam hai tu....
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wah Devangi ji wah... kya kehne... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2010, 07:30:05 PM »
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superbbbbbb gazal devangi ji.....
dil se nikle alfaaz hi sachchi gazal hoti hai maan gaye ji.....
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