"safar ja.n sath "

by roy on August 05, 2013, 10:37:15 PM
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note : poem is in punjabi .


"safar ja.n sath "



aakhn     lok    bathere      mainu

deek hai lani  vich  hanere   tenu


yaar hai khada  teri  akhan   ohle

rakhen    tahi.n   kadam  tu   pole


parat  ish'aq  di hta, age  rab  hai

dauga oh tu  chahuna jo   sab hai


na ja wad wich mehbob di bahan

safar hoor hai kinare to.n agahan  !!



.........

JAWAB

..........


rain    gande  jo  kade oo   aa'iine ne

bina   yar  sare   khwab   bena'ine ne


knna  vich mere sda goonj yar di bole

nain  khulan na ho je tswir yar di ohle


vich  prwar de khushia.n sari paal.nga

vand   rotiya.n  do  he  mai   khalanga


vekh shiv nu, sari kr umr , khrab ronda

nal j hunda yar o na saye shrab hunda


lagea khwab nahi khushiyan da lara hai

rab da ditaa menu sab khushgwara hai



beh  k  kinare  yaar  nu  locha.nga'  mai

c  ehna  he  safar  mera sochanga'  mai  !!





RoY (4/8/13) 11:50 pm
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