<>*sahi nahin jati tumse duri sanam*<>

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<>*sahi nahinjati tumse duri sanam*<>

aajao baahon me so jao tum .
meri julfon me aaj gum ho jao tum...
main bhar lun teri khushbu saanson me ....
meri ruuh me utar jao tum

chhu lo inn hothon ko apne hothon se....
jhum lo mujhe leke baahon me...
karlo kareeb apne iss kadar tum...
jan na paye koi kaun hai hum kaun ho tum

inn aankhon me jhankon sanam
meri dhadkannon ko badhao tum...
har saans keh rahi pyaar hai tumse...
mujhe sanam apna banalo tum

hamari dil ki baatein yun na zaaya karo
kuch mere jazbaat samjho tum....
durr hain badi der se tumse hum...
sahi nahin jati tumse ye duri sanam
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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2010, 07:18:12 AM »
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Aap ki tehreereN paRhta hooN to bus paRhta hi chala jaata hooN. Khoob likhti haiN. Aap ki baatoN ko maiN is turant kahe sher pe samone ki koshish kar raha hooN:

Chhu lo honton ko apne honto se
Aao ji bhar ke pyaar kar lo gum

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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 19, 2010, 05:35:51 AM
<>*sahi nahinjati tumse duri sanam*<>

aajao baahon me so jao tum .
meri julfon me aaj gum ho jao tum...
main bhar lun teri khushbu saanson me ....
meri ruuh me utar jao tum

chhu lo inn hothon ko apne hothon se....
jhum lo mujhe leke baahon me...
karlo kareeb apne iss kadar tum...
jan na paye koi kaun hai hum kaun ho tum

inn aankhon me jhankon sanam
meri dhadkannon ko badhao tum...
har saans keh rahi pyaar hai tumse...
mujhe sanam apna banalo tum

hamari dil ki baatein yun na zaaya karo
kuch mere jazbaat samjho tum....
durr hain badi der se tumse hum...
sahi nahin jati tumse ye duri sanam
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«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2010, 07:27:30 AM »
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Quote from: waquif ansari on July 19, 2010, 07:18:12 AM
Aap ki tehreereN paRhta hooN to bus paRhta hi chala jaata hooN. Khoob likhti haiN. Aap ki baatoN ko maiN is turant kahe sher pe samone ki koshish kar raha hooN:

Chhu lo honton ko apne honto se
Aao ji bhar ke pyaar kar lo gum

(Waquif Ansari)


waquif ji......aapko itna pasand aa raha hai ye dekhkar hum to khushi se jhum rahe hain...bada ahchca lagta ahi jab koi sachche dil se wahhhhh kahe....
aapne jo sher kaha hai bht hi pyara lagta hai aapka ye andaaz
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«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2010, 12:52:36 PM »
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Kin shabdon me aapki lekhni ki taarif karein soch rahe hain par samajh nahi pa rahe hain.. bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne.. pyaar ke samundar me doobi huyi aapki ye rachna humein khoob lagi.. bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob...!!!

Kuch panktiyaan maine bhi likhne ki koshish ki hain...!!!!

tod do bandhano ko saare,
bediyon ko khol do tum,
rasme saari todake aaj,
baahein faila lo zaraa tum,

pyaar me kho ke mere tum,
jhoom lo ban morni tum,
ye ghatayein baras jaayein,
bheeg lo unme zaraa tum,

adhkhule hontho se apne,
mere hothon ko bheego do,
apni saanso ke mehek se,
meri saanso ko mehka do,

tod ke saari deewarein,
aaj ban jao mere tum,
khud ko bhi tum bhul jaao,
baahon me aake mere tum,

pyaar ka mausam hai aaya,
saath me khushiyaan wo laya,
ab zaraa tum muskuralo,
zindagi ji lo zaraa tum...


*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #4 on: September 09, 2010, 09:56:19 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 19, 2010, 12:52:36 PM
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Kin shabdon me aapki lekhni ki taarif karein soch rahe hain par samajh nahi pa rahe hain.. bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne.. pyaar ke samundar me doobi huyi aapki ye rachna humein khoob lagi.. bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob...!!!

Kuch panktiyaan maine bhi likhne ki koshish ki hain...!!!!

tod do bandhano ko saare,
bediyon ko khol do tum,
rasme saari todake aaj,
baahein faila lo zaraa tum,

pyaar me kho ke mere tum,
jhoom lo ban morni tum,
ye ghatayein baras jaayein,
bheeg lo unme zaraa tum,

adhkhule hontho se apne,
mere hothon ko bheego do,
apni saanso ke mehek se,
meri saanso ko mehka do,

tod ke saari deewarein,
aaj ban jao mere tum,
khud ko bhi tum bhul jaao,
baahon me aake mere tum,

pyaar ka mausam hai aaya,
saath me khushiyaan wo laya,
ab zaraa tum muskuralo,
zindagi ji lo zaraa tum...


*****HRIDAY*****

bht hi khubsurat reply klaskar ji...dil khush khush ho gaya padhke...
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Aaye Haye.. Kya Baat hai Anamika Ji.. Behad hi Rumaani aur Mohabbat se Bhare alfaaz Ko Yahan Bikhera Hai aapne... Lafzon Me Ishq Bharna Koi Aapse Seekhe.. Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


Daad Kubool karen...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kapil Bhai aapne Bhi Zordaar Likha hai.. Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2010, 01:50:14 PM »
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Chahat Ke Parde Me Sada Nafrat Nahi Hogi,
Par Nafrat Ke Parde Me Sada Chahat Hi Hogi..

Agar Hum Khafa Hota Hai Tumhe Apna Samajh Kar,
To Yeh Jaan Lo Hamein Tumse Mohabbat Bepanah Hi Hogi..
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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2010, 02:01:34 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Anamika ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Bahoot Hi Romatic Likha hai hai .. Kya kahunn...

Awesome creation...



@ Rancho --- Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Janab... Bahoot Khoob !

Divya
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2010, 02:39:11 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji....!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 09, 2010, 09:56:19 AM
bht hi khubsurat reply klaskar ji...dil khush khush ho gaya padhke...
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bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji...!!!

Quote from: Mann on September 11, 2010, 12:59:53 PM
Aaye Haye.. Kya Baat hai Anamika Ji.. Behad hi Rumaani aur Mohabbat se Bhare alfaaz Ko Yahan Bikhera Hai aapne... Lafzon Me Ishq Bharna Koi Aapse Seekhe.. Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


Daad Kubool karen...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kapil Bhai aapne Bhi Zordaar Likha hai.. Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause



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Quote from: klaskar on July 19, 2010, 12:52:36 PM
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Kin shabdon me aapki lekhni ki taarif karein soch rahe hain par samajh nahi pa rahe hain.. bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne.. pyaar ke samundar me doobi huyi aapki ye rachna humein khoob lagi.. bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob...!!!

Kuch panktiyaan maine bhi likhne ki koshish ki hain...!!!!

tod do bandhano ko saare,
bediyon ko khol do tum,
rasme saari todake aaj,
baahein faila lo zaraa tum,

pyaar me kho ke mere tum,
jhoom lo ban morni tum,
ye ghatayein baras jaayein,
bheeg lo unme zaraa tum,

adhkhule hontho se apne,
mere hothon ko bheego do,
apni saanso ke mehek se,
meri saanso ko mehka do,

tod ke saari deewarein,
aaj ban jao mere tum,
khud ko bhi tum bhul jaao,
baahon me aake mere tum,

pyaar ka mausam hai aaya,
saath me khushiyaan wo laya,
ab zaraa tum muskuralo,
zindagi ji lo zaraa tum...


*****HRIDAY*****


Wow.... That was Fantastic Creation Kapil ji... Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Aur lajawaab Likha hai... !!!
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bahut bahut shukriya Divya ji... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon...!!!

Quote from: Sophi on September 11, 2010, 02:42:32 PM

Wow.... That was Fantastic Creation Kapil ji... Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Aur lajawaab Likha hai... !!!
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 19, 2010, 05:35:51 AM
<>*sahi nahinjati tumse duri sanam*<>

aajao baahon me so jao tum .
meri julfon me aaj gum ho jao tum...
main bhar lun teri khushbu saanson me ....
meri ruuh me utar jao tum

chhu lo inn hothon ko apne hothon se....
jhum lo mujhe leke baahon me...
karlo kareeb apne iss kadar tum...
jan na paye koi kaun hai hum kaun ho tum

inn aankhon me jhankon sanam
meri dhadkannon ko badhao tum...
har saans keh rahi pyaar hai tumse...
mujhe sanam apna banalo tum

hamari dil ki baatein yun na zaaya karo
kuch mere jazbaat samjho tum....
durr hain badi der se tumse hum...
sahi nahin jati tumse ye duri sanam
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Bahut khoob Anamika Ji
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