Sambhle Honge, Bikhar Gaye Honge....!!

by Talat on August 15, 2009, 11:49:19 PM
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2009, 01:01:40 AM »
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bahut khoob


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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2009, 08:12:23 AM »
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sodton aap logon ne yahan comments nahin diye is baat ka mujhe shakht afsos hai
itni khoobsurat ghazal ko agar daad na di toh phir hudd hai bhai

ishq karne wale dekh mera hashra dar gaye honge
le k khanjar qatl karne khud ka nikal gaye honge
bach gayi hongi saansein toh oonhe roka hoga
phir le kar naam mehboob ka gujar gaye honge
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2009, 11:57:54 AM »
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bahut hi accha likha hai Celmira ji   icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
sach kahein, to itni kathin urdu pehli baar padne par samajh nahi aayi lekin dhyaan se dobara pada tab ehsaas hua ki kitna accha likha hai

but could yopu please tell d meaning of alaalat and RABT, i am not exactly sure
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2009, 12:15:49 PM »
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wah wah, bahut khoob celmira ji



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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2009, 12:16:34 PM »
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sodton aap logon ne yahan comments nahin diye is baat ka mujhe shakht afsos hai
itni khoobsurat ghazal ko agar daad na di toh phir hudd hai bhai

ishq karne wale dekh mera hashra dar gaye honge
le k khanjar qatl karne khud ka nikal gaye honge
bach gayi hongi saansein toh oonhe roka hoga
phir le kar naam mehboob ka gujar gaye honge


wah wah sahil ji... bahut khoob

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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2009, 12:46:00 PM »
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Poetry At It's Best!!!!

Excellent Talat Dost!!!

Itni Gehri Aur Dil Ko Chuu Jaane wale Baatein ki hai aapne..

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause  Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2009, 01:03:04 PM »
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Talat Dost, Bin Likhe Yahan Se Jaana,Na-mumkin Sa Ho Gaya Hai..Gustaaki Maaf Kijiyega...Ek Koshish Kar raha Hoon!!

Meri Yaadon Se Ashq Unki Aankhon Mein Kuch Tham Gaye Honge..
Inn Raahon Mein Unke Kadamo Ke Nishaan Se Kuch Jam Gaye Honge...

Eh Hawa!! Mujh Par Itna Saa Ehsaan kar Ke Unhe Sirf Yeh Khabar De!!
Jahan Par Woh Gaye Hai, Hum Bhi Udhar Gaye Honge...

Na-Mumkin Sa Tha Mera Yuh Kaanton Ke Beech mein Basar Karna!!!
Par Unki Mohabbat Mein Hum Kaanton Ke Beech mein Reh kar Bhi Sawar Gaye Honge...

Jitna Unhe Chaaha Usse Bhi Zyaada Unhe jaana!!
Unki Ek nazar Ke Sadke raah Ke Pathar Bhi Nikhar Gaye Honge...

Eh Khayal-E-Yaar Tujhe Salamaat Humesha Khuda Rakhe!!
Tere Ek Tasavuur Se Naa Jaane Kitne Gham Mere Be-Maut Hi mar Gaye Honge..

"Khwaish" Ab Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hai Ke Zindagi Mein Mohabbat Ki Ehmiyat Kya Hai??
Saath Ho Hum-Kadam To Hum kitne Baar Giir Kar Phir Sambhal Gaye Honge...
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2009, 01:05:44 PM »
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Talat Dost, Bin Likhe Yahan Se Jaana,Na-mumkin Sa Ho Gaya Hai..Gustaaki Maaf Kijiyega...Ek Koshish Kar raha Hoon!!

Meri Yaadon Se Ashq Unki Aankhon Mein Kuch Tham Gaye Honge..
Inn Raahon Mein Unke Kadamo Ke Nishaan Se Kuch Jam Gaye Honge...

Eh Hawa!! Mujh Par Itna Saa Ehsaan kar Ke Unhe Sirf Yeh Khabar De!!
Jahan Par Woh Gaye Hai, Hum Bhi Udhar Gaye Honge...

Na-Mumkin Sa Tha Mera Yuh Kaanton Ke Beech mein Basar Karna!!!
Par Unki Mohabbat Mein Hum Kaanton Ke Beech mein Reh kar Bhi Sawar Gaye Honge...

Jitna Unhe Chaaha Usse Bhi Zyaada Unhe jaana!!
Unki Ek nazar Ke Sadke raah Ke Pathar Bhi Nikhar Gaye Honge...

Eh Khayal-E-Yaar Tujhe Salamaat Humesha Khuda Rakhe!!
Tere Ek Tasavuur Se Naa Jaane Kitne Gham Mere Be-Maut Hi mar Gaye Honge..

"Khwaish" Ab Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hai Ke Zindagi Mein Mohabbat Ki Ehmiyat Kya Hai??
Saath Ho Hum-Kadam To Hum kitne Baar Giir Kar Phir Sambhal Gaye Honge...






wah wah wah khwaish ji... wab bahut hi khoob, wah wah wah


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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2009, 01:34:32 PM »
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Waah Di Kya baat hai bahoot bahoot Khoob aur bahoot Khubsoorti se aapne isse pesh kiya hai .. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2009, 01:35:34 PM »
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Talat Dost, Bin Likhe Yahan Se Jaana,Na-mumkin Sa Ho Gaya Hai..Gustaaki Maaf Kijiyega...Ek Koshish Kar raha Hoon!!

Meri Yaadon Se Ashq Unki Aankhon Mein Kuch Tham Gaye Honge..
Inn Raahon Mein Unke Kadamo Ke Nishaan Se Kuch Jam Gaye Honge...

Eh Hawa!! Mujh Par Itna Saa Ehsaan kar Ke Unhe Sirf Yeh Khabar De!!
Jahan Par Woh Gaye Hai, Hum Bhi Udhar Gaye Honge...

Na-Mumkin Sa Tha Mera Yuh Kaanton Ke Beech mein Basar Karna!!!
Par Unki Mohabbat Mein Hum Kaanton Ke Beech mein Reh kar Bhi Sawar Gaye Honge...

Jitna Unhe Chaaha Usse Bhi Zyaada Unhe jaana!!
Unki Ek nazar Ke Sadke raah Ke Pathar Bhi Nikhar Gaye Honge...

Eh Khayal-E-Yaar Tujhe Salamaat Humesha Khuda Rakhe!!
Tere Ek Tasavuur Se Naa Jaane Kitne Gham Mere Be-Maut Hi mar Gaye Honge..

"Khwaish" Ab Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hai Ke Zindagi Mein Mohabbat Ki Ehmiyat Kya Hai??
Saath Ho Hum-Kadam To Hum kitne Baar Giir Kar Phir Sambhal Gaye Honge...



Kya baat hai Khwaish ji.. Yea khumaar yea ishq ?? bahoot bahoot Khoob likha hai .. Bahoot Umda !
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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2009, 01:39:56 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:bahut aacha likha hai aap nae...bahut dard hai is main
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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2009, 04:10:36 PM »
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bahut khoob


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Bohot shukriya Javed Sb hausla afzaai ka..ummeed hai aage bhi isi tarah nigah-e-karam rahegi...
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«Reply #13 on: August 16, 2009, 04:12:46 PM »
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Wonderful creation Talat sis... Applause
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Meri Yaadon Se Ashq Unki Aankhon Mein Kuch Tham Gaye Honge..
Inn Raahon Mein Unke Kadamo Ke Nishaan Se Kuch Jam Gaye Honge...

Eh Hawa!! Mujh Par Itna Saa Ehsaan kar Ke Unhe Sirf Yeh Khabar De!!
Jahan Par Woh Gaye Hai, Hum Bhi Udhar Gaye Honge...

Na-Mumkin Sa Tha Mera Yuh Kaanton Ke Beech mein Basar Karna!!!
Par Unki Mohabbat Mein Hum Kaanton Ke Beech mein Reh kar Bhi Sawar Gaye Honge...

Wah khwaish bhaiya....aapka is sher ka kya kehna. Superb  Thumbs UP
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