Sambhle Honge, Bikhar Gaye Honge....!!

by Talat on August 15, 2009, 11:49:19 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 16, 2009, 04:51:27 PM »
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Wowwwwwwwwwwww Talat Ji.. Bahut Hi Jabardast Peshkash Hai aapki.. Mohabbat Bhari Yeh Rachna Dil Ko Chhooo gai..!!

Aapki Qalam se Nikle Alfaaz Humesha Hi Kuch Khaas hote Hain.. aur Is baar Bhi aapki Qalam Ne Kamaal kar diya Hai.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


Is Mann Ki Mann se Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #16 on: August 16, 2009, 05:41:21 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 16, 2009, 01:05:44 PM




wah wah wah khwaish ji... wab bahut hi khoob, wah wah wah


jasbir singh



Bahut bahut Shukriya Jasbir Paaji..

Meri iss Rachna Mein Bhi Tareef Talat Ki Hai..Talat Ne likha Hi Itna Acha Hai Ke bas Ek Choti koshish Hum bhi Kar Gaye..

Thanks A Lot!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: August 16, 2009, 05:49:44 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 15, 2009, 11:49:19 PM

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Wah Wah Celmira Ji... Bahut he khoobsurati se alfaazon ko piroya hai!  Bahut Bahut khoob! Applause
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«Reply #18 on: August 16, 2009, 05:51:35 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 16, 2009, 08:12:23 AM
sodton aap logon ne yahan comments nahin diye is baat ka mujhe shakht afsos hai
itni khoobsurat ghazal ko agar daad na di toh phir hudd hai bhai

ishq karne wale dekh mera hashra dar gaye honge
le k khanjar qatl karne khud ka nikal gaye honge
bach gayi hongi saansein toh oonhe roka hoga
phir le kar naam mehboob ka gujar gaye honge

Waah Saahil Ji... Nice lines! Applause
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«Reply #19 on: August 16, 2009, 05:56:08 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 16, 2009, 01:03:04 PM
Talat Dost, Bin Likhe Yahan Se Jaana,Na-mumkin Sa Ho Gaya Hai..Gustaaki Maaf Kijiyega...Ek Koshish Kar raha Hoon!!

Meri Yaadon Se Ashq Unki Aankhon Mein Kuch Tham Gaye Honge..
Inn Raahon Mein Unke Kadamo Ke Nishaan Se Kuch Jam Gaye Honge...

Eh Hawa!! Mujh Par Itna Saa Ehsaan kar Ke Unhe Sirf Yeh Khabar De!!
Jahan Par Woh Gaye Hai, Hum Bhi Udhar Gaye Honge...

Na-Mumkin Sa Tha Mera Yuh Kaanton Ke Beech mein Basar Karna!!!
Par Unki Mohabbat Mein Hum Kaanton Ke Beech mein Reh kar Bhi Sawar Gaye Honge...

Jitna Unhe Chaaha Usse Bhi Zyaada Unhe jaana!!
Unki Ek nazar Ke Sadke raah Ke Pathar Bhi Nikhar Gaye Honge...

Eh Khayal-E-Yaar Tujhe Salamaat Humesha Khuda Rakhe!!
Tere Ek Tasavuur Se Naa Jaane Kitne Gham Mere Be-Maut Hi mar Gaye Honge..

"Khwaish" Ab Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hai Ke Zindagi Mein Mohabbat Ki Ehmiyat Kya Hai??
Saath Ho Hum-Kadam To Hum kitne Baar Giir Kar Phir Sambhal Gaye Honge...

Wah Wah Khwaish Ji... Behad khoobsurat likha hai! Bahut Bahut khoob! Applause
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«Reply #20 on: August 16, 2009, 06:27:17 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
behtreen aur nayab peshkash ke liye meri taraf se hazaron daad kabul ho talat..
khwaish bro  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahoot achcha likha aapne..khoob andaz raha aapka...daad kabool ho
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«Reply #21 on: August 16, 2009, 06:45:42 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah wah wah bahoot khoob Celmiira and Khwaish ji.. good work....  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: August 17, 2009, 11:50:11 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 15, 2009, 11:49:19 PM

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subhaanAllah waah talt kya kehne hain bhut hi khoob wahi lehja, wahi khaamosh chandni mein chamakti hui shubnam aapki ghazal aapne andaaz ko is tarhan bayaan karti hai ke kya kahiye, hamesha you.n hi likti rahiye Allah aapko hamesha khush rakhe
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«Reply #23 on: August 18, 2009, 07:08:29 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI    CELMIRA JI.......

MUJHPE EHSAAN YEH BHI KAR GAYE HONGE,
SUDHREN HONGE,TOOT GAYE HONGE.

KUCH ZAMANE KI TALKHIYAAN SEH KAR,
PARESHANIYON MAIN ULAJ GAYE HONGE.

MUJHSE PEHLE JO KHWAAB ADHOORE THE,
MUJHSE MIL KAR UN KHWAABON MAIN JEE RAHE HONGE.

YAAD MERI JO KABHI AAYI HOGI UNHE,
KAHIN AUR POORI KARNE, BEWAJAH GAYE HONGE.

MAIN UNKI BAAHON MAIN HUN,HAIRAT HAI,
JUDAAI KI RAAT YEH SOCH KAR DAR GAYE HONGE.

JAB HUI HOGI UNHE MERE ALAALAT KI KHABAR,
MARI HUI ZINDAGI JEE RAHE HONGE.

RABT UNKA TOH UNCHI UDAANON SE THA,
MERE LIYE BHI SOCHNE LAGE HONGE.

TERE BIN AB MAIN JEE SAKUNGA NAHIN,
SOCHA BHI HOGA,AUR BADAL BHI GAYE HONGE.

MERI AANKHON MAIN NAMI?SHAYAD TALAT,
AAYI BHI HOGI,SUKH BHI GAYI HONGI.
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«Reply #24 on: August 18, 2009, 10:28:14 AM »
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Quote from: cara on August 18, 2009, 07:08:29 AM

KYA BAAT HAI    CELMIRA JI.......

MUJHPE EHSAAN YEH BHI KAR GAYE HONGE,
SUDHREN HONGE,TOOT GAYE HONGE.

KUCH ZAMANE KI TALKHIYAAN SEH KAR,
PARESHANIYON MAIN ULAJ GAYE HONGE.

MUJHSE PEHLE JO KHWAAB ADHOORE THE,
MUJHSE MIL KAR UN KHWAABON MAIN JEE RAHE HONGE.

YAAD MERI JO KABHI AAYI HOGI UNHE,
KAHIN AUR POORI KARNE, BEWAJAH GAYE HONGE.

MAIN UNKI BAAHON MAIN HUN,HAIRAT HAI,
JUDAAI KI RAAT YEH SOCH KAR DAR GAYE HONGE.

JAB HUI HOGI UNHE MERE ALAALAT KI KHABAR,
MARI HUI ZINDAGI JEE RAHE HONGE.

RABT UNKA TOH UNCHI UDAANON SE THA,
MERE LIYE BHI SOCHNE LAGE HONGE.

TERE BIN AB MAIN JEE SAKUNGA NAHIN,
SOCHA BHI HOGA,AUR BADAL BHI GAYE HONGE.

MERI AANKHON MAIN NAMI?SHAYAD TALAT,
AAYI BHI HOGI,SUKH BHI GAYI HONGI.



Shukriya Cara Ji,

Aapne jis tarah meri ghazal ke har sher ke pehle misre (pehli line) ko le kar us main  doosra misra joda hai, well....................quite interesting !!!!!
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«Reply #25 on: August 18, 2009, 04:56:01 PM »
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«Reply #26 on: August 18, 2009, 05:13:38 PM »
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Wah Celmira ji......kya kehne....kitni gehraai mein jaakar likha gya hai har alfaaz.....lafj khamosh ho gaye aapki iss rachna k saamne....shikwon me bhi khud ko sukuun dena...kya kahu.......  icon_salut

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #27 on: August 18, 2009, 05:21:02 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 16, 2009, 08:12:23 AM
sodton aap logon ne yahan comments nahin diye is baat ka mujhe shakht afsos hai
itni khoobsurat ghazal ko agar daad na di toh phir hudd hai bhai

ishq karne wale dekh mera hashra dar gaye honge
le k khanjar qatl karne khud ka nikal gaye honge
bach gayi hongi saansein toh oonhe roka hoga
phir le kar naam mehboob ka gujar gaye honge

That's so sweet of you Salil  icon_flower ...Thanks so much for honouring me !

....aur bohot hi khoob !!

Ishq Ke Raahain Bohot Asaan Nahin Hain,
Ishq Waale Isse Par Anjaan Nahin Hain

Ishq Ki Raahon Pe Jab Rakh Liya Qadam,
Shikwa Na Karenge Gar Ho Jaaye Sar Qalam !!
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«Reply #28 on: August 18, 2009, 05:26:04 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 16, 2009, 11:57:54 AM
bahut hi accha likha hai Celmira ji   icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
sach kahein, to itni kathin urdu pehli baar padne par samajh nahi aayi lekin dhyaan se dobara pada tab ehsaas hua ki kitna accha likha hai

but could yopu please tell d meaning of alaalat and RABT, i am not exactly sure

Thanks so much Repear Ji...waise to zyadatar meri ghazlon main asaan urdu lafz hi hote hain..lekin kabhi kabhi kuch thode mushkil lafz bhi shamil ho jaate hain...!!

Alaalat ka matlab hai beemari, Being ill.

Rabt ka matlab yahan Rishte se hai ya connection se hai.

Hope ab aap ko samajhne main koi pareshani nahin hogi..

Thanks so much Usual Smile
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«Reply #29 on: August 18, 2009, 05:27:47 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob Kaash ji, Cara ji and Celmira... good work all!!
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