Sambhle Honge, Bikhar Gaye Honge....!!

by Talat on August 15, 2009, 11:49:19 PM
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«Reply #30 on: August 18, 2009, 05:33:09 PM »
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wah wah, bahut khoob celmira ji



jasbir singh

Thanks so much Jasbir Ji
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«Reply #31 on: August 19, 2009, 06:35:32 PM »
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Thanks so much Repear Ji...waise to zyadatar meri ghazlon main asaan urdu lafz hi hote hain..lekin kabhi kabhi kuch thode mushkil lafz bhi shamil ho jaate hain...!!

Alaalat ka matlab hai beemari, Being ill.

Rabt ka matlab yahan Rishte se hai ya connection se hai.

Hope ab aap ko samajhne main koi pareshani nahin hogi..

Thanks so much Usual Smile

shukriya Celmira ji
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«Reply #32 on: August 20, 2009, 08:19:40 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Poetry At It's Best!!!!

Excellent Talat Dost!!!

Itni Gehri Aur Dil Ko Chuu Jaane wale Baatein ki hai aapne..

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause  Applause


Thanks so much Khwaish Dost  icon_flower Thanks a lot....aap ko ye pasand aaya, isse badh ke aur kya chahiye.
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«Reply #33 on: August 20, 2009, 01:51:28 PM »
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Talat Dost, Bin Likhe Yahan Se Jaana,Na-mumkin Sa Ho Gaya Hai..Gustaaki Maaf Kijiyega...Ek Koshish Kar raha Hoon!!

Meri Yaadon Se Ashq Unki Aankhon Mein Kuch Tham Gaye Honge..
Inn Raahon Mein Unke Kadamo Ke Nishaan Se Kuch Jam Gaye Honge...

Eh Hawa!! Mujh Par Itna Saa Ehsaan kar Ke Unhe Sirf Yeh Khabar De!!
Jahan Par Woh Gaye Hai, Hum Bhi Udhar Gaye Honge...

Na-Mumkin Sa Tha Mera Yuh Kaanton Ke Beech mein Basar Karna!!!
Par Unki Mohabbat Mein Hum Kaanton Ke Beech mein Reh kar Bhi Sawar Gaye Honge...

Jitna Unhe Chaaha Usse Bhi Zyaada Unhe jaana!!
Unki Ek nazar Ke Sadke raah Ke Pathar Bhi Nikhar Gaye Honge...

Eh Khayal-E-Yaar Tujhe Salamaat Humesha Khuda Rakhe!!
Tere Ek Tasavuur Se Naa Jaane Kitne Gham Mere Be-Maut Hi mar Gaye Honge..

"Khwaish" Ab Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hai Ke Zindagi Mein Mohabbat Ki Ehmiyat Kya Hai??
Saath Ho Hum-Kadam To Hum kitne Baar Giir Kar Phir Sambhal Gaye Honge...


Bohot bohot khoob Khwaish Dost...lajawb kar diya aapne....is ka kya jawab doon...koshish zaroor hogi kuch likhun par abhi to aapne bilkul lajawab kar diya...Bohot Khoob Dost  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #34 on: August 20, 2009, 01:52:05 PM »
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Waah Di Kya baat hai bahoot bahoot Khoob aur bahoot Khubsoorti se aapne isse pesh kiya hai .. Bahoot Khoob!


Thanks so much dear Divs
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«Reply #35 on: August 20, 2009, 01:53:03 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:bahut aacha likha hai aap nae...bahut dard hai is main

Thanks Komal Ji....though I was not sure ye aapne mere liye hi likha tha kya ? tongue3 tongue3
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«Reply #36 on: August 20, 2009, 01:53:32 PM »
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Wonderful creation Talat sis... Applause


Thanks a lot Roja dear
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«Reply #37 on: August 20, 2009, 01:54:34 PM »
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Wowwwwwwwwwwww Talat Ji.. Bahut Hi Jabardast Peshkash Hai aapki.. Mohabbat Bhari Yeh Rachna Dil Ko Chhooo gai..!!

Aapki Qalam se Nikle Alfaaz Humesha Hi Kuch Khaas hote Hain.. aur Is baar Bhi aapki Qalam Ne Kamaal kar diya Hai.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


Is Mann Ki Mann se Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**

Aapki taareef to khud padhne laaiq hoti hai....jitni khoobsurat ghazal nahin, usse kahun zyada khoobsurat alfaaz hain aapke....Thanks a lot Vicky
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«Reply #38 on: August 20, 2009, 01:55:12 PM »
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Jasbir Paaji..

Meri iss Rachna Mein Bhi Tareef Talat Ki Hai..Talat Ne likha Hi Itna Acha Hai Ke bas Ek Choti koshish Hum bhi Kar Gaye..

Thanks A Lot!!! Usual Smile


LOL Khwaish Dost...ek baar phir tah-e-dil se shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #39 on: September 24, 2009, 02:22:21 PM »
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Wah Wah Celmira Ji... Bahut he khoobsurati se alfaazon ko piroya hai!  Bahut Bahut khoob! Applause

Thanks a lot Deepati
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«Reply #40 on: September 24, 2009, 02:23:42 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
behtreen aur nayab peshkash ke liye meri taraf se hazaron daad kabul ho talat..


Thanks so much Sanjeev Ji..aapka bohot bohot shukriya, aapne pasand kiya is ghazal ko.
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