*Sanam Mere Us Paar Hai*

by Roja on September 21, 2007, 02:35:11 AM
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Khijaa.n hi khijaa.n hai
Gulshan main ab kahan bahar hai
Jis ko pyar karte hai
wo sanam us paar hai

Zalim zamane ne
Kaat kar fek diye mere per
Ek gira edhar
Aur doosra gira us paar hai

Shikwa mohabbat ka
Kis se kare ye dost
Mere Jaan-e-Jaana sunte  hai
Aaj bhi us paar hai

Gar kal ki fikr karta hai
To kare koyee
Aandhiyan hai is taraf
Barsat to us paar hai

Kaise samet lu khushiyon ko
Dhaman main apne bata
Mere pass to hai katra
Libas mere us paar hai

Shukriya karne ki baat
Ab kahan se ut.ti hai
Es taraf jajbaat hai
Rasm saari us paar hai

Hota hai paresha.n dil
Mushkile hoti hai bahut
Bimar hai is taraf, "Roja"
Dawa-e-dard us paar hai[/color][/size]
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2007, 05:15:32 AM »
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Very nice Roja Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2007, 05:47:24 AM »
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Very Beautifully Compiled... Roja...
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2007, 07:43:55 AM »
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Roja

Bahut khoob ! =D> =D> =D>

Keep writing like this always :D
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2007, 03:26:57 PM »
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Oye Hoye..!! Kya Baat hai ROJA.. !! bahut bahut Khooooob.. Behad Khubsoorat Ehasaason
se saji Rachna Pesh Ki Hai Aapne...!! Padh Kar bahut Acha laga.... Maza aa gaya... Usual Smile Usual Smile

Great Words...!!

=D>  =D>  =D>  =D>

Vicky
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2007, 03:53:47 PM »
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Bhai jaan aap ki kalam ko kya hua hai aaj kal Puzzled !
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2007, 04:43:40 PM »
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You are trying various patterns in all your poems and you are successful in that !
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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2007, 06:33:18 PM »
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VERY NICE ROJA...
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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2007, 11:57:14 PM »
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Thanks for your lovely comments Talat, Shikha & Raj ji
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«Reply #9 on: September 21, 2007, 11:59:02 PM »
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Oye Hoye..!! Kya Baat hai ROJA.. !! bahut bahut Khooooob.. Behad Khubsoorat Ehasaason
se saji Rachna Pesh Ki Hai Aapne...!! Padh Kar bahut Acha laga.... Maza aa gaya... Usual Smile Usual Smile

Great Words...!!

=D>  =D>  =D>  =D>

Vicky


haha.. Bahut khushi huyee aapko hamara likha padkar pasand aaya.
Thank you very much for your lovely comments Vicky ji.
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«Reply #10 on: September 22, 2007, 12:02:34 AM »
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You are trying various patterns in all your poems and you are successful in that !


Thanks Mr Ricky. Your comments always helped me in creating
lines on various issues. Thank you once again
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«Reply #11 on: September 22, 2007, 12:03:48 AM »
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VERY NICE ROJA...


Bahut bahut shukhriya khwaish ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 07, 2012, 05:00:11 PM »
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Bahut umda Applause Applause
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