Sapno ka ghar

by nandbahu on December 03, 2012, 08:25:56 AM
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Banaya maine ek sapno ka ghar
Ek aangan chaubara hai ghar par

Phool se aangan saja sanvara
Mehboob ke swagat mein hai mehka

Kaliya raste pe bichhi huyee
Pav chhone ko machalti huyee

Ghar mein ek aisa kamra bana
Pharsh par sangamarmar laga hua

Chhat nakkashi se sajjit hua
Jhilmil prakash se raushan hua

Kamre mein parde thhe jalidar
Chanda bhi takta thha bar bar

Bistar pe chadar gulabi bichhi
Bela suman se mahakti huyee

Deewar pe tasveer lagi huyee
Mall-i-kaye dil muskurati huyee

Kamre mein sangeet bajta hua
Aalma madhoshi ka banata hua

Darvaje pe ek dastak huyee
Kholne ko lapke hum kundi

Gulabi saree mein vo lipti thhi
Apsara jamee pe utari lagti thhi

Sanam jaise hi andar dakhil huye
Seene se mere lipat hi gaye

Samay ka dhyan na humko raha
Aagosh mein mai unke khoya raha

Sankoch ki seema hum langh gaye
Kaynat ko hum paa thhe gaye

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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2012, 08:44:02 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2012, 09:35:42 AM »
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bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Aasha karte hain aapka sapno ka mahal sahi mein bane
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bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2012, 02:47:32 PM »
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bahut  bahut  khoob , nandji . nice  description .
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very nice....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanx vimmi ji
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bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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thanx
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bahut sunder
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bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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