Saqiyaa! teyree deed mein suroor hai may kaa!

by abdbundeli on May 28, 2008, 07:37:55 AM
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 Shokh aankhoun mein bahr-e-jaw zaroor hai may kaa!
 Saqiyah! teyree deed mein, suroor hai may kaa!!

 Chamak-damak hai barq kee mahaj lamhey bhar kee:
 Tabassumoun mein teyrey, koh-e-noor hai may kaa!!
 
 Teyrey jalwon mein mujhey noor-e-toor dikhtaa hai!
 Mein gunahgaar naheen hoon; qusoor hai may kaa!!

 Muskuraatey huye, noor afza uyoonon mein bhee,
 Shafaq hai surkhgoon: tohfa, huzoor, hai may kaa!!

 'Abd' to peetaa hai har roz, nigaahoun sey, sharaab;
 Aap kah leejiye, 'Yeh to futoor hai may kaa!!'

                                     - abd bundeli

 

  

 
 
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«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2008, 11:14:15 AM »
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Shokh aankhoun mein buhr-e-juw zaroor hai may kaa!
 Saqiyaa! teyree deed mein, suroor hai may kaa!!

 Chamak-damak hai burq kee mahaj lumhey bhar kee:
 Tabassumoun mein teyrey, koh-e-noor hai may kaa!!
 
 Teyrey julwon mein mujhey noor-e-toor dikhtaa hai!
 Mein gunahgaar naheen hoon; qusoor hai may kaa!!

 Muskuraatey huye noor afza uyoonon mein bhi,
 Shafuq hai surkhgoon: tohfa, huzoor, hai may kaa!!
'Abd' to peetaa hai hur roz nigaahoun sey sharaab;
 Aap kuh leejiye, 'yeh to futoor hai may kaa!!' - abd bundeli
 

 

 
 

good one sirji
aap kamaal ka likhte hain
its an honour to have you on yoindia.

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«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2008, 01:33:13 PM »
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Muhtarmah diya786 Ji,

    Itney meethey alfaaz ataa kareyngeen to shukriya adaa karney key liye mujhey alfaaz ki kamee parh jayegee! Shukraguzaar hoon! Khush rahiye!

 Khudaa karey ki aap khush rahain hameysha hii;
 Jo umar baaqii hai meyree, woh aapko lag jaaye!

                                      - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2009, 07:09:19 AM »
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good one sirji
aap kamaal ka likhte hain
its an honour to have you on yoindia.

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Thanks a lot Kashish ji! Nazar-e-inaayat banaaye rakhiyegaa!
           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2009, 11:12:21 AM »
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bhut khooob abd ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2009, 12:45:44 PM »
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bhut khooob abd ji
Thanks a lot aaina j!
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«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2009, 06:14:09 AM »
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 Shokh aankhoun mein bahr-e-jaw zaroor hai may kaa!
 Saqiyah! teyree deed mein, suroor hai may kaa!!

 Chamak-damak hai barq kee mahaj lamhey bhar kee:
 Tabassumoun mein teyrey, koh-e-noor hai may kaa!!
 
 Teyrey jalwon mein mujhey noor-e-toor dikhtaa hai!
 Mein gunahgaar naheen hoon; qusoor hai may kaa!!

 Muskuraatey huye, noor afza uyoonon mein bhee,
 Shafaq hai surkhgoon: tohfa, huzoor, hai may kaa!!

 'Abd' to peetaa hai har roz, nigaahoun sey, sharaab;
 Aap kah leejiye, 'Yeh to futoor hai may kaa!!'

                                     - abd bundeli

 

  

 
 

Bahut khoobsurat hai, Abd Ji! Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 11, 2009, 06:41:19 AM »
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Laajawaab Bahoot Bahoot umda likha hai ABD ji.. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #8 on: July 11, 2009, 07:19:13 AM »
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Bahut khoobsurat hai, Abd Ji! Applause Applause
Thanks a lot Deepati!
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«Reply #9 on: July 11, 2009, 07:21:00 AM »
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Laajawaab Bahoot Bahoot umda likha hai ABD ji.. Bahoot Khoob!
Thanks a lot Sophi!
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«Reply #10 on: July 11, 2009, 03:31:33 PM »
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Tu sharaab hain main rind hu

Tu mujh me hain, main karu guroor may ka.......

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«Reply #11 on: July 11, 2009, 04:27:27 PM »
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Wah wah Bundeli Saheb
Subhanallah
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2009, 07:26:37 AM »
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Tu sharaab hai to main rind hun

Tu mujh me hai, main karu guroor may ka.......



Mein maykhaanah pee gayaa:
Saaqee hai hairaan!
Kyoun barpaa hai, par, 'abd',
Duniyaa mein toofaanaan?

            - abd bundeli

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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2009, 07:29:19 AM »
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Wah wah Bundeli Saheb
Subhanallah
SARVESH RASTOGI
Thanks a lot Rastogi ji!
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«Reply #14 on: July 13, 2009, 02:42:13 AM »
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Bahut khoob.... lajawab as usual.... Uncle ji daad kabul kijiyega  Usual Smile
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