sara aalam uska diwana hai

by samnoj on October 22, 2007, 07:52:28 AM
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bahut din baad is section me aaya hu.. koshish ki hai kuch likhne ki

bardasht kar lena

haseen shaam hai aur mousam bhi aashikana hai
saamne phir wahi chaand sa mukhda suhana hai

chalak raha hai un aankho se maikada yaaro
kareeb honto ke mere, honto ka paimana hai

bichad ker unse jo guzra hai kya kahu
bada udaas, bada talkh wo zamana hai

husn masoom hai per kiya rahta hai pagal
uska her andaaz katil hai mastana hai

raat bher jalte rahe hum dono tanha tanha
husn shama hai uska, dil mera perwana hai

main hi akela nahi hu shaher me yaaro uske
mera siwa sara aalam uska diwana hai
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2007, 08:09:00 AM »
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nice samnoj!! accha likha hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2007, 08:34:29 AM »
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thanx Tosha
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2007, 08:36:26 AM »
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thanx Tosha
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2007, 12:22:43 PM »
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Nice one...acha likha hai
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«Reply #5 on: October 28, 2007, 08:14:00 PM »
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Nicely Written!
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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2007, 09:50:33 AM »
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lagta hai kisi ne ye padha hi nahi tha
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2008, 01:12:35 PM »
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Quote from: samnoj on October 22, 2007, 07:52:28 AM
bahut din baad is section me aaya hu.. koshish ki hai kuch likhne ki

bardasht kar lena

haseen shaam hai aur mousam bhi aashikana hai
saamne phir wahi chaand sa mukhda suhana hai

chalak raha hai un aankho se maikada yaaro
kareeb honto ke mere, honto ka paimana hai

bichad ker unse jo guzra hai kya kahu
bada udaas, bada talkh wo zamana hai

husn masoom hai per kiya rahta hai pagal
uska her andaaz katil hai mastana hai

raat bher jalte rahe hum dono tanha tanha
husn shama hai uska, dil mera perwana hai

main hi akela nahi hu shaher me yaaro uske
mera siwa sara aalam uska diwana hai

Waah waah... As beautifully written as ever..
Too Good Job Samnoj..

Last line mein "mera siwa" ki jagah "mere sang" ya "mere saath" shayad jyada theek rahega... Just my view, please don't mind.
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2008, 01:13:56 PM »
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thanks shikha

aap ki baat me bhi dum hai
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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2008, 12:24:28 AM »
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bahoot khoob samnoj ji!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2008, 06:51:07 AM »
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wow... well written Sam.. its realy Good one.. keep writing ..
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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2008, 02:49:18 PM »
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thanku pooja ji n dipika ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 29, 2008, 07:59:12 PM »
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bohot ache sam!!

parwane ka shama bin guzara nahi hota
jisey hum chaahe woh kabhi humara nahi hota
ashk bahaa deney se bhi woh laut kar na aaye
aur jo pyar unse humne kiya woh ab dobara nahi hota..
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«Reply #14 on: January 31, 2008, 10:10:08 AM »
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thanx n umda sanya

jab koi khayl dil se takrata hai
dil na chah ker bhi khamosh rah jata hai
koi sab kuch kah ker pyar ko jatata hai
koi kuch na keh ke bhi pyar nibhata hai
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