Sard Mausam ki Pehli Bharish

by deepika_divya on January 03, 2010, 01:52:10 PM
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Aaj Delhi mea Iss sard mausam ki Pehli bharish hui hai…shayad aur bhi kahi jagah hui hai... aaj Mausam itna suhana ho gaya hai mano darti pe swarg utar aaya ho…

Sard Mausam ki Pehli Bharish
Bahaar ban Mere angan aai hai
Fizaao Mea chaya hai jadu aisa
mano Pariya zameen pe utar aai hai

Gunjane lagi hai khilkhilahat ab
Dil mea saugaat sajne lagi hai
Jaise liya ho tumne  Bahoon mea
Aisi halki ki Halchal hone lagi hai

Bheega lun Main khud ko aise sanam
Ki Man ki tamamma puri ho jaaye
Beh Jaun Main teri Bahoon mea iskadar
Tere Aks mea meri ruh kho jaaye

Ab Na der Karo Tum Aane Mea "Sanam"
Kahin Yea Root Pyaar ki chali na jaaye
Taraste reh Jaaye ak dujhe ki chahat ko
Aur Bahaar Gul khila kar chali Na jaaye


Divya
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«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2010, 06:50:16 PM »
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Excellent,bahut khoob Divya ji.great creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2010, 09:22:02 PM »
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Bahut khoob Divya Ji
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Sager4u
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2010, 11:19:04 PM »
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D bahut accha
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riyaz106
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2010, 03:30:55 AM »
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Wow bahot khoob. barish bhi khuda ki nemat hai.
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2010, 05:11:24 AM »
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Excellent Divya ji,

Some addition from my side

Jo baat mere dil mein thi
Wo lafzon mein aapne sajaai hai
Bahut dinon baad aapka kalaam padhkar
Is bezaan murde mein jaan aayee hai

Kaun kehta ye barsaat hai
Jo dharti pe gir aayee hai
Ye to pyaar ki daulat hai
Jo aasmaanon ne chhalkaai hai

Jism-o-rooh donon bheegein aur mehkein
Aisi bepanah is mein khushnumaai hai
Jo is daulat ka lutf uthaana jaan le
Usne duniya ki behatreen cheez payee hai

Ae kaale baadal, ae neele aasmaan
Sab kuchh hai achchha par buri ye tanhaai hai
Us pari ko aaj mujha se mila do
Jiske liye "Karndhar" ne dil se aawaaz lagai hai !

- Sanjay Karndhar
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2010, 06:36:15 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on January 03, 2010, 06:50:16 PM
Excellent,bahut khoob Divya ji.great creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank you so so much Madhu Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2010, 06:36:49 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 03, 2010, 09:22:02 PM
Bahut khoob Divya Ji

Bahoot shukriya Rajesh ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2010, 06:37:30 AM »
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Quote from: Sager4u on January 03, 2010, 11:19:04 PM
D bahut accha

Thank you Jitu Bhai !
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2010, 06:38:10 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on January 04, 2010, 03:30:55 AM
Wow bahot khoob. barish bhi khuda ki nemat hai.

Thank you so much Riyaz !
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2010, 06:40:15 AM »
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Quote from: karndhar on January 04, 2010, 05:11:24 AM
Excellent Divya ji,

Some addition from my side

Jo baat mere dil mein thi
Wo lafzon mein aapne sajaai hai
Bahut dinon baad aapka kalaam padhkar
Is bezaan murde mein jaan aayee hai

Kaun kehta ye barsaat hai
Jo dharti pe gir aayee hai
Ye to pyaar ki daulat hai
Jo aasmaanon ne chhalkaai hai

Jism-o-rooh donon bheegein aur mehkein
Aisi bepanah is mein khushnumaai hai
Jo is daulat ka lutf uthaana jaan le
Usne duniya ki behatreen cheez payee hai

Ae kaale baadal, ae neele aasmaan
Sab kuchh hai achchha par buri ye tanhaai hai
Us pari ko aaj mujha se mila do
Jiske liye "Karndhar" ne dil se aawaaz lagai hai !

- Sanjay Karndhar



Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Sanjay ji..

Kya kahe Aapne itni tareef kar di hai .. Aap Ne addition ne tho Meri kavita mea aur jaan daal di hai... Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat likha hai aapne !

Thank you !
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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2010, 06:42:34 AM »
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Quote from: karndhar on January 04, 2010, 05:11:24 AM
Excellent Divya ji,

Some addition from my side

Jo baat mere dil mein thi
Wo lafzon mein aapne sajaai hai
Bahut dinon baad aapka kalaam padhkar
Is bezaan murde mein jaan aayee hai

Kaun kehta ye barsaat hai
Jo dharti pe gir aayee hai
Ye to pyaar ki daulat hai
Jo aasmaanon ne chhalkaai hai

Jism-o-rooh donon bheegein aur mehkein
Aisi bepanah is mein khushnumaai hai
Jo is daulat ka lutf uthaana jaan le
Usne duniya ki behatreen cheez payee hai


Ae kaale baadal, ae neele aasmaan
Sab kuchh hai achchha par buri ye tanhaai hai
Us pari ko aaj mujha se mila do
Jiske liye "Karndhar" ne dil se aawaaz lagai hai !

- Sanjay Karndhar


BAHOT KHOOB DIVYA.....WO TERA AKS MERI ROOH BAN JAAYE...LAJAWAAB THI...
AUR KARNDHAR JI,,,,JO KAALE BAADAL ME NILE AASMAA KO DHOONDE USE SAPNO KI PARI TO MIL HI JAAYEGEE.....
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2010, 07:07:07 AM »
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Quote from: karndhar on January 04, 2010, 05:11:24 AM
Excellent Divya ji,

Some addition from my side

Jo baat mere dil mein thi
Wo lafzon mein aapne sajaai hai
Bahut dinon baad aapka kalaam padhkar
Is bezaan murde mein jaan aayee hai

Kaun kehta ye barsaat hai
Jo dharti pe gir aayee hai
Ye to pyaar ki daulat hai
Jo aasmaanon ne chhalkaai hai

Jism-o-rooh donon bheegein aur mehkein
Aisi bepanah is mein khushnumaai hai
Jo is daulat ka lutf uthaana jaan le
Usne duniya ki behatreen cheez payee hai

Ae kaale baadal, ae neele aasmaan
Sab kuchh hai achchha par buri ye tanhaai hai
Us pari ko aaj mujha se mila do
Jiske liye "Karndhar" ne dil se aawaaz lagai hai !

- Sanjay Karndhar


Nice addition Sanjay Ji
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cara
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«Reply #13 on: January 04, 2010, 01:22:05 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI  SOPHI JI....

SARD MAUSAM KI PEHLI BHARISH AAYI HAI
MANN MEIN SANAM TERI KHWAISH AAYI HAI
AESE MEIN TU AAJAYE JO MERI BHAHON MEH
TERI SAANSON KI GARMI AAJAYE MERE TAN MANN MEH.

JALDI KAR TU--
CHALI JAAYE NA RITU--
MAUSAMI KHUMAR--
AAJA MERE YAAR--

CHAMAKTI HAI BIJILI--
PYAAR KI HORAHI KHUJLI--
AUR NA KARA INTEZAR--
JALDI AAJA MERE YAAR--  --  --.
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