~ ~ * * Sardi Ki Dhoop Main ~ ~ * *

by Pooja on December 31, 2008, 09:37:04 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 01, 2009, 12:22:22 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 31, 2008, 10:55:08 PM
wah kaya baat hai... Apki aise koshishe real life main kisi ko bhi ghayal kar jaaye Pank ji... bahoot khoob.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

dhoop ke inderdhanush sa ab yah jeevan lagne laga
sung sung tere sanam, her pal mera chalne laga

chan chan karti dhoop main, yaad teri sataye
tanhaai main bhi mare, pyar ka rang bharne laga

madhoshi ke alam main, her baat tumse kahne dil laga
jab yah utare sardi ki dhoop, tujhse phir laaz karne laga

kuch madhoshi tere naino ki, kuch sard dhoop ka sung dasne laga
dil ki baat lubo per aai, sajna tu mere man main basne laga 
Shukriya Poojaji
Aapne Bahoot hi Khoobsurat likha hai
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«Reply #16 on: January 01, 2009, 03:04:54 AM »
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bahut khoob poojaji...

sardi ke doop mein ,mera sanam jo aajaye,
bahoon me le jo muje ,garmi ka ehsaas ho jaye.
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«Reply #17 on: January 01, 2009, 03:20:24 AM »
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shukaria Pank ji and cara ji

Nice lines cara ji
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«Reply #18 on: January 01, 2009, 04:45:09 AM »
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shukaria Kaash ji
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«Reply #19 on: January 01, 2009, 05:25:08 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 31, 2008, 09:37:04 PM
Ek bahoot he payari Yo-sathi ne Sardi ki dhoop per khumar-e-ishaq main likhne ko kaha.. kuch khas nahi likh saki, magar likhe bina rah bhi nahi saki... so jo man mai ayya, app sabke samne hai:


sardi ki dhoop main, gun gun, man mera gaaye
ajj ja sanam kahin se, bahon mai lo mujhe chupaye

madhoshi is sard dhoop main, man main agan lagaye
aise main aa ja sanam, dil ko kahin chain na aaye

meethi meethi ninia main, dhadkan behaki jaaye
de kar sanso ki apni garmi, le mohe ajj bachaye

adh-khule in naino main, ek teri tasveer hu sajaye
aa kar kar de poori mujhko, adhurepan main, man ghabraye

sardi ki dhoop main, gun gun, man mera gaaye
ajj ja sanam kahin se, bahon mai lo mujhe chupaye

Wah! Pooja kamaal ka likha hai
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«Reply #20 on: January 01, 2009, 05:34:09 AM »
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shukaria Rajesh ji...
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«Reply #21 on: January 01, 2009, 11:15:30 AM »
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Bohat khoob POOJA JEE ek mithe folk song sa ehsas hua. Aapka yeh naya andaz bohat pasand aaya.  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: January 01, 2009, 11:56:16 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 31, 2008, 09:37:04 PM
Ek bahoot he payari Yo-sathi ne Sardi ki dhoop per khumar-e-ishaq main likhne ko kaha.. kuch khas nahi likh saki, magar likhe bina rah bhi nahi saki... so jo man mai ayya, app sabke samne hai:


sardi ki dhoop main, gun gun, man mera gaaye
ajj ja sanam kahin se, bahon mai lo mujhe chupaye

madhoshi is sard dhoop main, man main agan lagaye
aise main aa ja sanam, dil ko kahin chain na aaye

meethi meethi ninia main, dhadkan behaki jaaye
de kar sanso ki apni garmi, le mohe ajj bachaye

adh-khule in naino main, ek teri tasveer hu sajaye
aa kar kar de poori mujhko, adhurepan main, man ghabraye

sardi ki dhoop main, gun gun, man mera gaaye
ajj ja sanam kahin se, bahon mai lo mujhe chupaye

Delhi ki Sardi aur Sardiyon ki Dhoop.. Aur us par aapka pyaara sa kalaam..  Kya baat hai Pooja di.. Bahut Bahut khoobsoorat likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: January 01, 2009, 12:02:01 PM »
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Ek Chhoti si Koshish Hamari Bhi..   drunken_smilie

Dhoop ki chaadar mein chhupa ho jaise sajila khohra,
Kuch yunhi dil ki sarzameen pe, Yaadon ka kafila thehra…

Tere aane ki khabar bikhri, Hazaaron phool mehke se,
Dil chala hai tumhe milne ko, Sharm ka todd kar pehra…

Sambhaalo koi humko toh, kahin hum doob naa jaaye,
Nazar mein unki dikhta hai, Samundar pyaar ka gehra…

Samaa jaadu bhara sa hai, Muhabbat hi muhabbat hai,
Chura kar le gaya dil se, Yeh har ek shikwa gila mera…
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«Reply #24 on: January 01, 2009, 01:04:18 PM »
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Bohat bohat khoob Mahiya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Choti si koshish itni khoobsurat hain to badi koshish kaisi hogi.
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«Reply #25 on: January 01, 2009, 05:22:44 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 01, 2009, 11:15:30 AM
Bohat khoob POOJA JEE ek mithe folk song sa ehsas hua. Aapka yeh naya andaz bohat pasand aaya.  Clapping Smiley

Apko pasand aii yah kavita, yah jaan kar mujhe khushi hui SG jee.
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«Reply #26 on: January 01, 2009, 05:24:00 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on January 01, 2009, 12:02:01 PM
Ek Chhoti si Koshish Hamari Bhi..   drunken_smilie

Dhoop ki chaadar mein chhupa ho jaise sajila khohra,
Kuch yunhi dil ki sarzameen pe, Yaadon ka kafila thehra…

Tere aane ki khabar bikhri, Hazaaron phool mehke se,
Dil chala hai tumhe milne ko, Sharm ka todd kar pehra…

Sambhaalo koi humko toh, kahin hum doob naa jaaye,
Nazar mein unki dikhta hai, Samundar pyaar ka gehra…

Samaa jaadu bhara sa hai, Muhabbat hi muhabbat hai,
Chura kar le gaya dil se, Yeh har ek shikwa gila mera…


 Applause Applause Applause

App aise choti koshish roj do - char kar he liye kare... kamal ka likha hai Mahiya... bahoot khoob baar baar parrne ko man chahta hai... bahoot khoob
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«Reply #27 on: January 01, 2009, 05:29:18 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on January 01, 2009, 12:02:01 PM
Ek Chhoti si Koshish Hamari Bhi..   drunken_smilie

Dhoop ki chaadar mein chhupa ho jaise sajila khohra,
Kuch yunhi dil ki sarzameen pe, Yaadon ka kafila thehra…

Tere aane ki khabar bikhri, Hazaaron phool mehke se,
Dil chala hai tumhe milne ko, Sharm ka todd kar pehra…

Sambhaalo koi humko toh, kahin hum doob naa jaaye,
Nazar mein unki dikhta hai, Samundar pyaar ka gehra…

Samaa jaadu bhara sa hai, Muhabbat hi muhabbat hai,
Chura kar le gaya dil se, Yeh har ek shikwa gila mera…

Nice one Mahiya Ji
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«Reply #28 on: January 03, 2009, 07:24:01 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 31, 2008, 09:37:04 PM
Ek bahoot he payari Yo-sathi ne Sardi ki dhoop per khumar-e-ishaq main likhne ko kaha.. kuch khas nahi likh saki, magar likhe bina rah bhi nahi saki... so jo man mai ayya, app sabke samne hai:


sardi ki dhoop main, gun gun, man mera gaaye
ajj ja sanam kahin se, bahon mai lo mujhe chupaye

madhoshi is sard dhoop main, man main agan lagaye
aise main aa ja sanam, dil ko kahin chain na aaye

meethi meethi ninia main, dhadkan behaki jaaye
de kar sanso ki apni garmi, le mohe ajj bachaye

adh-khule in naino main, ek teri tasveer hu sajaye
aa kar kar de poori mujhko, adhurepan main, man ghabraye

sardi ki dhoop main, gun gun, man mera gaaye
ajj ja sanam kahin se, bahon mai lo mujhe chupaye

Aaye Haye Kya Baat Hai Pooja Ji.. Sardi Me Mausam Me Itni Pyaar Bhari Baaten.. tongue3
Waqai ek ek Lafz Bahut Pyaara Likha Hai.. Ishq-e-Khumar Lagta hai Zoron Par Hai.. Applause Applause

Haan haan Mujhe pata Hai Ki Aap Shikayat karengi Ki Kuch Likh kar nahi Gaye.. Jaldi Hi Kuch Likhunga..!!

**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #29 on: January 03, 2009, 08:03:43 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on January 03, 2009, 07:24:01 AM
Aaye Haye Kya Baat Hai Pooja Ji.. Sardi Me Mausam Me Itni Pyaar Bhari Baaten.. tongue3
Waqai ek ek Lafz Bahut Pyaara Likha Hai.. Ishq-e-Khumar Lagta hai Zoron Par Hai.. Applause Applause

Haan haan Mujhe pata Hai Ki Aap Shikayat karengi Ki Kuch Likh kar nahi Gaye.. Jaldi Hi Kuch Likhunga..!!

**~** Mann **~**

bahoot bahoot shukaria mann ji and

waiting......
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