~ ~ * * Sardi Ki Dhoop Main ~ ~ * * -Panna 3:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

pankshivam

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«Reply #30 on: January 03, 2009, 08:26:50 AM »

Always Welcome Poojaji

Kaisi ye duniya, hai nazaare kitane khoob hain,
Meahakati muskurati, hasti gungunati sardiyo ki kitani khoobsurat ye dhoop hai...

~Pank~


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«Reply #31 on: January 03, 2009, 08:27:18 AM »

Quote from: Mahiya on January 01, 2009, 12:02:01 PM

Ek Chhoti si Koshish Hamari Bhi.. drunken_smilie

Dhoop ki chaadar mein chhupa ho jaise sajila khohra,
Kuch yunhi dil ki sarzameen pe, Yaadon ka kafila thehra…

Tere aane ki khabar bikhri, Hazaaron phool mehke se,
Dil chala hai tumhe milne ko, Sharm ka todd kar pehra…

Sambhaalo koi humko toh, kahin hum doob naa jaaye,
Nazar mein unki dikhta hai, Samundar pyaar ka gehra…

Samaa jaadu bhara sa hai, Muhabbat hi muhabbat hai,
Chura kar le gaya dil se, Yeh har ek shikwa gila mera…

Mahiya Aapne bahut Pyaara Likha Hai.. Aaj kal aapko kabhi kabhi Padhne Ka Mauka Milta hai.. Likhte Raha kijiye.. Bahut khooooob... Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #32 on: January 03, 2009, 08:47:17 AM »

Ek Choti si Koshish Humaari Bhi POOJA ji.. aapki Is Lajawab Thred par..!!

Pathjhar Ke Mausam Me, Bahaar Aane Ka Intzaar Karte Hain,
Sard Raaton Me Tujhe, Baahon Me Bharne Ko Beqaraar Rahate Hain...

Jab-Jab Chaand Apne, Poore Shabaab Par Aata Hai Raaton ko,
Teri Yaadon se, Raaton Ke Har Lamhe Ko Aabaad Karte Hain......

SAahil Pe Baith Kar, Gunguni Si "SARDI KI DHOOP" Me Aksar,
Tera Naam Ret Pe Likh-Likh, Ishq Ka Apne Izhaar karte Hain...

**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #33 on: January 03, 2009, 12:52:40 PM »

Nice One Shikha Behna,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiyo,.


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«Reply #34 on: January 21, 2009, 05:06:07 PM »

bahoot khoob Lil bro and MANN JI!!!

Jalad kuch likhugi yaha per Mann ji!!


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«Reply #35 on: January 21, 2009, 06:39:48 PM »

nice written


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«Reply #36 on: January 21, 2009, 07:00:35 PM »

wah wah sab ne garma garam lika hai.....
Shardi k mausam ka mazaa aa gya.... Clapping Smiley

Kuchh line meri bhi....
Meethi meethi dhoop aur ye mausam
Baith lawn me susta rahe hain hum
Bus ek pyala chay ka garma garam
Sardi ki dhoop bhula deti sab kaam-dhaam....

Surendra Mardia


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«Reply #37 on: January 22, 2009, 04:36:09 PM »

Shukaria smardia ji...

such kaha apne... sardi ki dhoop, lawn main waise chai ki jagah agar meethi lassi ho jaaye to ..... phir na koi awaz lagaye..

Jalad he kuch aor likhne ki koshish karugi yaha.... waise ajj to sardi ki barsaat dekhne ko mil rahi hai.. is thund per bhi kuch ho jaaye....


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«Reply #38 on: January 31, 2009, 12:24:47 PM »

Sach kaha aapne agar chai ki jagah thandi chilled lassi ho tou ?
phir na koi awaz lagaye..Gala he baith jayega thund se...

Is thund me thithurta huya tan
Priya ki judai me bilakhta ma.n
Kambakht Bijlee se kyo hui un-ban
Ab heater se bhi kaise seku badan

Quote from: Pooja on January 22, 2009, 04:36:09 PM


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«Reply #39 on: January 31, 2009, 01:11:38 PM »

Hmm, NIce One


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«Reply #40 on: January 31, 2009, 06:56:54 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 31, 2008, 09:37:04 PM

Ek bahoot he payari Yo-sathi ne Sardi ki dhoop per khumar-e-ishaq main likhne ko kaha.. kuch khas nahi likh saki, magar likhe bina rah bhi nahi saki... so jo man mai ayya, app sabke samne hai:

sardi ki dhoop main, gun gun, man mera gaaye
ajj ja sanam kahin se, bahon mai lo mujhe chupaye

madhoshi is sard dhoop main, man main agan lagaye
aise main aa ja sanam, dil ko kahin chain na aaye

meethi meethi ninia main, dhadkan behaki jaaye
de kar sanso ki apni garmi, le mohe ajj bachaye

adh-khule in naino main, ek teri tasveer hu sajaye
aa kar kar de poori mujhko, adhurepan main, man ghabraye

sardi ki dhoop main, gun gun, man mera gaaye
ajj ja sanam kahin se, bahon mai lo mujhe chupaye

Pooja ji appne bhot khubsurat kavita likhi....Its really nice.. Pank ji, Mahiya, Jaansheen aur Mann aap sab ne bhi bhot khubsurat likha...... Applause

Kuch maine bhi kosish ki hai likhne ki sayed aap sub ko pasand aye..

Saardiyon ki dhoop me ek mulakaat unse meri...
Dhoop main damkate chere pe unke.. nazaren thami thi meri...

Itni suhani na lagi thi saardiyon ki dhoop pahle kbhi...
Esa chehra bhi nazar na aya tha pahle kabhi..

Sochta hoon..saardiyon ki dhoop ne waqt ko thama tha..
Ya unke damkate chere me goom..waqt ko bhoola tha main....

Un lamho ko sanjo rakha hai aj bhi in ankho me....
Us chehre ko chupaya rakha hai aj bhi is dil me....

Wo dhoop saardiyon ki meethi dhoop....
Aaj bhi intzaar karta hun us dhoop ka or us chahre ka.......


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«Reply #41 on: January 31, 2009, 07:23:34 PM »

Dhoop ki chaadar oode zamee par utra hai koi..
Pariyon sa roop lake aaj zamee pe aya hai koi..

Khuch is kadaar roshan hua hai ye samaa...
Jase dhoop bhi damak uthi aane se unke...

Khil gayi kaliyan bhi aane se unke..
Moorjhaye phool bhi khil uthe chamk se unki..

Cheep gayi dhoop bhi badli me kahi...
Lekin damak raha hai abhi bhi ye samaa....


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«Reply #42 on: January 31, 2009, 07:33:48 PM »

Nice one Hannu Ji


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HANNU

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«Reply #43 on: February 01, 2009, 05:34:59 PM »

Bhot Bhot Shukriya Rahesh ji....


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«Reply #44 on: February 01, 2009, 06:41:53 PM »

Aap sab ne bahut umda lika hai....
Hannuji...Surendraji...Maanji....Shikhaji...Pooja ji... Clapping Smiley


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