~ ~ * * Sardi Ki Dhoop Main ~ ~ * * -Panna 4:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

Pooja

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«Reply #45 on: February 06, 2009, 06:42:10 PM »

Shukaria Anaam ji!!


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smardia

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«Reply #46 on: February 07, 2009, 11:28:50 AM »

DHANYAVAAD Anaamji....aap bhi kuchh likhte...Mausam tou hai...

Quote from: ANAAM on February 01, 2009, 06:41:53 PM

Aap sab ne bahut umda lika hai....
Hannuji...Surendraji...Maanji....Shikhaji...Pooja ji... Clapping Smiley


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deepika_divya

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«Reply #47 on: February 09, 2009, 08:56:38 AM »

Very well written all of u.. Are likhte raho. wana see more.. I liked this thread.


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Pooja

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«Reply #48 on: February 09, 2009, 09:02:48 PM »

thanks Sophi


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Pooja

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«Reply #49 on: May 22, 2009, 06:42:39 PM »

Quote from: HANNU on January 31, 2009, 06:56:54 PM

Pooja ji appne bhot khubsurat kavita likhi....Its really nice.. Pank ji, Mahiya, Jaansheen aur Mann aap sab ne bhi bhot khubsurat likha...... Applause

Kuch maine bhi kosish ki hai likhne ki sayed aap sub ko pasand aye..

Saardiyon ki dhoop me ek mulakaat unse meri...
Dhoop main damkate chere pe unke.. nazaren thami thi meri...

Itni suhani na lagi thi saardiyon ki dhoop pahle kbhi...
Esa chehra bhi nazar na aya tha pahle kabhi..

Sochta hoon..saardiyon ki dhoop ne waqt ko thama tha..
Ya unke damkate chere me goom..waqt ko bhoola tha main....

Un lamho ko sanjo rakha hai aj bhi in ankho me....
Us chehre ko chupaya rakha hai aj bhi is dil me....

Wo dhoop saardiyon ki meethi dhoop....
Aaj bhi intzaar karta hun us dhoop ka or us chahre ka.......

good one Hannu ji!!


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Pooja

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«Reply #50 on: May 25, 2009, 03:55:03 PM »

shukaria Kaash ji... apki rachna ka intzaar rahega.


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pankshivam

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«Reply #51 on: May 25, 2009, 04:18:34 PM »

Quote from: HANNU on January 31, 2009, 06:56:54 PM

Pooja ji appne bhot khubsurat kavita likhi....Its really nice.. Pank ji, Mahiya, Jaansheen aur Mann aap sab ne bhi bhot khubsurat likha...... Applause

Thanks Hannu ji
Bahoot Khoob Likha Aapne


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Roja

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«Reply #52 on: May 26, 2009, 02:18:08 AM »

Hannuji,Surendraji, Vicky ji,Poojaji di... sab ne bahut bahut accha likha hai. .


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salil2002

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«Reply #53 on: May 27, 2009, 10:32:54 AM »

bahut achche di........aur bakii sabne bhi khoob likha hai ....sach mein sabne bahut hi khoobsurti se likha hai


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_Vicky_

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«Reply #54 on: May 28, 2009, 06:55:24 AM »

Quote from: Roja on May 26, 2009, 02:18:08 AM

Hannuji,Surendraji, Vicky ji,Poojaji di... sab ne bahut bahut accha likha hai. .

Bahut Bahut Shukriya ROJA SIS & SALIL Bhai.. Usual Smile

**~** Mann **~**


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Pooja

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«Reply #55 on: July 13, 2009, 07:48:28 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on May 27, 2009, 10:00:33 AM

ji Pooja ji beshak, ek koshish kar rahe hain
shayad pasand aaye

khumaari me likh rahe hum jaane kis sardi ki dhoop ko
vo chanchal chitwan vo chehra nihare khwaabon ke roop ko

unchhui aarzoo ki thhandak aisi ki may ka mahina bhi sard lage
vo barf ke gole jahan din me bhi nihaare hum har kahin oos ko

yaaden sirf vohi nahi hoti jinke lamhon me hum saath rahe
yaaden banti hain mahakti hain jab sune hum vo nagme jo mook ho

maafi chati hu ki deri se najar mai aai apki yah kavita... bahoot khoob Kaash ji bahoot he acha likha hai apne..


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