sare-aam karna hein!

by Prateek Mardia on December 16, 2008, 03:21:48 PM
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Pustakon ke bahaane milna- milaana, ub chhodd denge hum
 Himmatein juta kur ub kisi se dosti ka elaan karna hein!


Aankhon ko padh chukka hu,pur hothon se sunna hein abhi
Ho chukka hu main bahut ub tumhe pareshaan karna hein!


Chupte- chupaate kahin kho na de hum nazdikiyon ki manzilein
Parvaan ishq ka chud gaya,bus rishton ko sare-aam karna hein!


Ungliyaan hum pur uthey, kuch aisey haadson ki  hein chaahatein
Dub na jaaye dil mein kahin,is gunaah ko anjaam karna hein!


Hain bahut mash-hoor wo,pur hauslein apne bhee nahi kum
Khoon ki syaahi se mujhko, jaari yeh farmaan karna hein!


Khwaishey to thee bahut,pur sub kuch kisey haasil hua?
Zid junoon bun gayi ub, Poora yeh armaan karna hein!
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2008, 03:35:57 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI PRATEEK.

MUBARAK HO.


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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2008, 03:41:03 PM »
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Bohat Achche Prateek Bhai,.
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2008, 05:05:10 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 16, 2008, 03:35:57 PM
KYA BAAT HAI PRATEEK.

MUBARAK HO.


JASBIR SINGH

shukriya jasbir ji.
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2008, 05:05:53 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 16, 2008, 03:41:03 PM
Bohat Achche Prateek Bhai,.


shukriya azeem bhai.
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2008, 05:10:16 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah!! kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Prateek ji, dil khush ho gaya apki is kavita ko parr kar... khas kar yah lines to dil ko chu gai

Aankhon ko padh chukka hu,pur hothon se sunna hein abhi
Ho chukka hu main bahut ub tumhe pareshaan karna hein!


Chupte- chupaate kahin kho na de hum nazdikiyon ki manzilein
Parvaan ishq ka chud gaya,bus rishton ko sare-aam karna hein!
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«Reply #6 on: December 16, 2008, 05:16:39 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 16, 2008, 05:10:16 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah!! kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Prateek ji, dil khush ho gaya apki is kavita ko parr kar... khas kar yah lines to dil ko chu gai

Aankhon ko padh chukka hu,pur hothon se sunna hein abhi
Ho chukka hu main bahut ub tumhe pareshaan karna hein!


Chupte- chupaate kahin kho na de hum nazdikiyon ki manzilein
Parvaan ishq ka chud gaya,bus rishton ko sare-aam karna hein!

aapka dil khush hone se mujhe bhee khushi hui.bus khush raha kijiye,hamesha.saraahna ke liye,shukriya.
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«Reply #7 on: December 25, 2008, 09:57:21 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 16, 2008, 03:21:48 PM
Pustakon ke bahaane milna- milaana, ub chhodd denge hum
 Himmatein juta kur ub kisi se dosti ka elaan karna hein!


Aankhon ko padh chukka hu,pur hothon se sunna hein abhi
Ho chukka hu main bahut ub tumhe pareshaan karna hein!


Chupte- chupaate kahin kho na de hum nazdikiyon ki manzilein
Parvaan ishq ka chud gaya,bus rishton ko sare-aam karna hein!


Ungliyaan hum pur uthey, kuch aisey haadson ki  hein chaahatein
Dub na jaaye dil mein kahin,is gunaah ko anjaam karna hein!


Hain bahut mash-hoor wo,pur hauslein apne bhee nahi kum
Khoon ki syaahi se mujhko, jaari yeh farmaan karna hein!


Khwaishey to thee bahut,pur sub kuch kisey haasil hua?
Zid junoon bun gayi ub, Poora yeh armaan karna hein!

Bahut khoobsurat rachna hai... Prateek Ji..
Ek movie song yaad aa gaya aapki rachna padh kar, yaha share kar rahi hoon.. Usual Smile



Hum ne dekhi hai un aankhon ki mehakti khushbu,
Haath se chhu ke isse rishton ka ilzaam naa do..
Sirf ehsaas hai yeh, Rooh se mehsoos karo,
Pyaar ko Pyaar hi rehne do, Koi naam naa do..

Pyaar koi bol nahin, Pyaar awaaz nahin,
Ek khamoshi hai, sunti hai.. kaha karti hai..
Yeh naa bujhti hai, naa rukti hai, naa thehri hai kahin,
Oas ki boond hai, sadiyon se baha karti hai..
Sirf ehsaas hai yeh, Rooh se mehsoos karo,
Pyaar ko Pyaar hi rehne do, Koi naam naa do..

Muskurahat si khili rehti hai aankhon mein kahin,
Aur palkon pe ujaale se chhupe rehte hai,
Honth kuch kehte nahin, kaampte honthon pe magar,
Kitne khaamosh se afsaane ruke rehte hai,
Sirf ehsaas hai yeh, Rooh se mehsoos karo,
Pyaar ko Pyaar hi rehne do, Koi naam naa do..
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«Reply #8 on: December 25, 2008, 10:06:11 AM »
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Shukriya Mahiya ji,aapne is kavita pur bhee mohar lagaaye.

Bahut hi khoobsurat gaana ,ussey bhee khoobsurat baat yeh hein...ki aapne ekdum perfect jagah isey fit kiya hai.

Kuch aapki kalam ka bhee intzaar rahega...jub ho sake tub,koi jaldo nahi.
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«Reply #9 on: December 25, 2008, 11:25:09 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 16, 2008, 03:21:48 PM
Pustakon ke bahaane milna- milaana, ub chhodd denge hum
 Himmatein juta kur ub kisi se dosti ka elaan karna hein!


Aankhon ko padh chukka hu,pur hothon se sunna hein abhi
Ho chukka hu main bahut ub tumhe pareshaan karna hein!


Chupte- chupaate kahin kho na de hum nazdikiyon ki manzilein
Parvaan ishq ka chud gaya,bus rishton ko sare-aam karna hein!


Ungliyaan hum pur uthey, kuch aisey haadson ki  hein chaahatein
Dub na jaaye dil mein kahin,is gunaah ko anjaam karna hein!


Hain bahut mash-hoor wo,pur hauslein apne bhee nahi kum
Khoon ki syaahi se mujhko, jaari yeh farmaan karna hein!


Khwaishey to thee bahut,pur sub kuch kisey haasil hua?
Zid junoon bun gayi ub, Poora yeh armaan karna hein!

Aaye Haye.. Kya baat Hai Prateek ji.. Kamaal Ke Shayar hain aap.. aaj Maine Pahali Baar Hi aapko Padha.. Kyunki main kafi dino baad yo par Lauta Hoon.. Lajawab Likha hai aapne.. aapke alfaazon Ke Kaayal Ho gaye Hum.. bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #10 on: December 26, 2008, 10:50:17 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on December 25, 2008, 11:25:09 AM
Aaye Haye.. Kya baat Hai Prateek ji.. Kamaal Ke Shayar hain aap.. aaj Maine Pahali Baar Hi aapko Padha.. Kyunki main kafi dino baad yo par Lauta Hoon.. Lajawab Likha hai aapne.. aapke alfaazon Ke Kaayal Ho gaye Hum.. bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**


shukria Mann ji,aapki taaref ka aur ussey jyada khushi is baat kki hai ki aap yo pur laute...kaushishein rahengi ki aapko baandhey rakh sake ub yahan...
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«Reply #11 on: December 26, 2008, 11:57:42 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 25, 2008, 10:06:11 AM
Shukriya Mahiya ji,aapne is kavita pur bhee mohar lagaaye.

Bahut hi khoobsurat gaana ,ussey bhee khoobsurat baat yeh hein...ki aapne ekdum perfect jagah isey fit kiya hai.

Kuch aapki kalam ka bhee intzaar rahega...jub ho sake tub,koi jaldo nahi.

Hhmmm... Prateek Ji, Aap ka kalaam "Khumar-e-Ishq" mein hai, aur Ishq section mein likhne ke liye toh humein mahino lag jaate hai... Usual Smile Dard Section mein reply jaldi ho jaata hai..   drunken_smilie
Phir bhi.. Koshish rahegi jaldi hi kuch likhne ki.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: January 21, 2009, 07:41:13 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 26, 2008, 11:57:42 AM
Hhmmm... Prateek Ji, Aap ka kalaam "Khumar-e-Ishq" mein hai, aur Ishq section mein likhne ke liye toh humein mahino lag jaate hai... Usual Smile Dard Section mein reply jaldi ho jaata hai..   drunken_smilie
Phir bhi.. Koshish rahegi jaldi hi kuch likhne ki.. Usual Smile

aapki rachna ka intzaar rahega Mahiya ji.
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«Reply #13 on: January 21, 2009, 08:07:43 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 16, 2008, 03:21:48 PM
Pustakon ke bahaane milna- milaana, ub chhodd denge hum
 Himmatein juta kur ub kisi se dosti ka elaan karna hein!


Aankhon ko padh chukka hu,pur hothon se sunna hein abhi
Ho chukka hu main bahut ub tumhe pareshaan karna hein!


Chupte- chupaate kahin kho na de hum nazdikiyon ki manzilein
Parvaan ishq ka chud gaya,bus rishton ko sare-aam karna hein!


Ungliyaan hum pur uthey, kuch aisey haadson ki  hein chaahatein
Dub na jaaye dil mein kahin,is gunaah ko anjaam karna hein!


Hain bahut mash-hoor wo,pur hauslein apne bhee nahi kum
Khoon ki syaahi se mujhko, jaari yeh farmaan karna hein!


Khwaishey to thee bahut,pur sub kuch kisey haasil hua?
Zid junoon bun gayi ub, Poora yeh armaan karna hein!

bahoot achche prateek ji
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«Reply #14 on: January 21, 2009, 08:13:39 PM »
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Ati Sunder...bahut achhi rachana hai Prateek  keep it up.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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