sare-aam karna hein!

by Prateek Mardia on December 16, 2008, 03:21:48 PM
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #15 on: January 21, 2009, 08:15:51 PM »
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Nice one Prateek Ji
N good sharing Mahiya Ji
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«Reply #16 on: February 01, 2009, 04:25:21 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 21, 2009, 08:07:43 PM
bahoot achche prateek ji

shukria bekarar ji,aapne is kavita ko samay diya.
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«Reply #17 on: February 01, 2009, 04:27:10 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on January 21, 2009, 08:13:39 PM
Ati Sunder...bahut achhi rachana hai Prateek  keep it up.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

aapne is kavita ko bhee udaar hriday se saraha,ukey liye main aapka aabhar vyakt karta hu.
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«Reply #18 on: February 01, 2009, 04:28:24 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 21, 2009, 08:15:51 PM
Nice one Prateek Ji
N good sharing Mahiya Ji

shukriya rajesh ji,aapne padaha aur saraaha.
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«Reply #19 on: February 01, 2009, 05:57:08 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai.... Applause Clapping Smiley

Bahut achha likhte ho,
Maqbool Shayar bhi ho,
Yaar ek khoobsurat najm likh
Unke naam,aur elaan kar do,
Ab na chuko ye chance dear
Man me mat rakho ab tum fear.....
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 16, 2008, 03:21:48 PM
Pustakon ke bahaane milna- milaana, ub chhodd denge hum
 Himmatein juta kur ub kisi se dosti ka elaan karna hein!


Aankhon ko padh chukka hu,pur hothon se sunna hein abhi
Ho chukka hu main bahut ub tumhe pareshaan karna hein!


Chupte- chupaate kahin kho na de hum nazdikiyon ki manzilein
Parvaan ishq ka chud gaya,bus rishton ko sare-aam karna hein!


Ungliyaan hum pur uthey, kuch aisey haadson ki  hein chaahatein
Dub na jaaye dil mein kahin,is gunaah ko anjaam karna hein!


Hain bahut mash-hoor wo,pur hauslein apne bhee nahi kum
Khoon ki syaahi se mujhko, jaari yeh farmaan karna hein!


Khwaishey to thee bahut,pur sub kuch kisey haasil hua?
Zid junoon bun gayi ub, Poora yeh armaan karna hein!
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«Reply #20 on: February 02, 2009, 02:50:30 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 16, 2008, 03:21:48 PM
Pustakon ke bahaane milna- milaana, ub chhodd denge hum
 Himmatein juta kur ub kisi se dosti ka elaan karna hein!

Aankhon ko padh chukka hu,pur hothon se sunna hein abhi
Ho chukka hu main bahut ub tumhe pareshaan karna hein!

Chupte- chupaate kahin kho na de hum nazdikiyon ki manzilein
Parvaan ishq ka chud gaya,bus rishton ko sare-aam karna hein!

Ungliyaan hum pur uthey, kuch aisey haadson ki  hein chaahatein
Dub na jaaye dil mein kahin,is gunaah ko anjaam karna hein!


Hain bahut mash-hoor wo,pur hauslein apne bhee nahi kum
Khoon ki syaahi se mujhko, jaari yeh farmaan karna hein!


Khwaishey to thee bahut,pur sub kuch kisey haasil hua?
Zid junoon bun gayi ub, Poora yeh armaan karna hein!

Waaaaah... Prateek ji... Bahut khoob likha hai aapne...
Pehle four lines bahut bahut accha laga padkar...Good Work. Keep up.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #21 on: July 26, 2009, 04:17:52 AM »
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Quote from: ANAAM on February 01, 2009, 05:57:08 PM
Wah kya baat hai.... Applause Clapping Smiley

Bahut achha likhte ho,
Maqbool Shayar bhi ho,
Yaar ek khoobsurat najm likh
Unke naam,aur elaan kar do,
Ab na chuko ye chance dear
Man me mat rakho ab tum fear.....


shukria anaam ji.(khud anaam hokar,unhe badnaam karne ki salaah!)

Bhari mehfilon mein mehboob ka youn naam lena kya theek hai?
unki haya ka parda yakayak youn kheech lena kya theek hai?
unka gila, unki shikayat ,unka roothna bhee manzoor hai!
pur kuch aashikon ka nikle janaaza is baat pe kya theek hai!


Betaabiyan to hain bahut ki mere ishq ke charche  chale
mohhabatton ke diwaane bhee humko dekhe, aahein bhare aur jale
pehaliyon mein ub woh baatein hongi jo seedhi aur sateek hai
bhari mehfilon mein mehboob ka youn naam lena kya theek hai!

woh subah ki hai taazgi aur  ek khushnuma si shaam hai
udaas mun ko jo khilkhila de woh aisa kuch paigaam hai
hur pal rahe uska tassavur,chahe door hai,nazdeek hai
bhari mehfilon mein mehboob ka youn naam lena kya theek hai!


Prateek
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«Reply #22 on: July 26, 2009, 04:22:10 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 02, 2009, 02:50:30 AM
Waaaaah... Prateek ji... Bahut khoob likha hai aapne...
Pehle four lines bahut bahut accha laga padkar...Good Work. Keep up.. Thumbs UP


haunsla afzaahi ka bahut shukriya Roja ji.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #23 on: July 26, 2009, 04:25:14 AM »
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Wah Prateek ji,mindblwing,very nice and beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.
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«Reply #24 on: July 26, 2009, 06:57:00 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 26, 2009, 04:25:14 AM
Wah Prateek ji,mindblwing,very nice and beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.


Aapki saraahna ka atyant shukrguzar hu.
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Pooja
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«Reply #25 on: August 20, 2009, 10:55:52 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 26, 2009, 04:17:52 AM

shukria anaam ji.(khud anaam hokar,unhe badnaam karne ki salaah!)

Bhari mehfilon mein mehboob ka youn naam lena kya theek hai?
unki haya ka parda yakayak youn kheech lena kya theek hai?
unka gila, unki shikayat ,unka roothna bhee manzoor hai!
pur kuch aashikon ka nikle janaaza is baat pe kya theek hai!


Betaabiyan to hain bahut ki mere ishq ke charche  chale
mohhabatton ke diwaane bhee humko dekhe, aahein bhare aur jale
pehaliyon mein ub woh baatein hongi jo seedhi aur sateek hai
bhari mehfilon mein mehboob ka youn naam lena kya theek hai!

woh subah ki hai taazgi aur  ek khushnuma si shaam hai
udaas mun ko jo khilkhila de woh aisa kuch paigaam hai
hur pal rahe uska tassavur,chahe door hai,nazdeek hai
bhari mehfilon mein mehboob ka youn naam lena kya theek hai!


Prateek



wah wah wah!! kaya baat hai Prateek ji!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #26 on: August 21, 2009, 08:03:22 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 26, 2009, 04:17:52 AM

shukria anaam ji.(khud anaam hokar,unhe badnaam karne ki salaah!)

Bhari mehfilon mein mehboob ka youn naam lena kya theek hai?
unki haya ka parda yakayak youn kheech lena kya theek hai?
unka gila, unki shikayat ,unka roothna bhee manzoor hai!
pur kuch aashikon ka nikle janaaza is baat pe kya theek hai!


Betaabiyan to hain bahut ki mere ishq ke charche  chale
mohhabatton ke diwaane bhee humko dekhe, aahein bhare aur jale
pehaliyon mein ub woh baatein hongi jo seedhi aur sateek hai
bhari mehfilon mein mehboob ka youn naam lena kya theek hai!

woh subah ki hai taazgi aur  ek khushnuma si shaam hai
udaas mun ko jo khilkhila de woh aisa kuch paigaam hai
hur pal rahe uska tassavur,chahe door hai,nazdeek hai
bhari mehfilon mein mehboob ka youn naam lena kya theek hai!


Prateek




WAH WAH WAH MARDIA JI... WAH WAH

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #27 on: August 21, 2009, 11:34:08 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 26, 2009, 04:17:52 AM

shukria anaam ji.(khud anaam hokar,unhe badnaam karne ki salaah!)

Bhari mehfilon mein mehboob ka youn naam lena kya theek hai?
unki haya ka parda yakayak youn kheech lena kya theek hai?
unka gila, unki shikayat ,unka roothna bhee manzoor hai!
pur kuch aashikon ka nikle janaaza is baat pe kya theek hai!


Betaabiyan to hain bahut ki mere ishq ke charche  chale
mohhabatton ke diwaane bhee humko dekhe, aahein bhare aur jale
pehaliyon mein ub woh baatein hongi jo seedhi aur sateek hai
bhari mehfilon mein mehboob ka youn naam lena kya theek hai!

woh subah ki hai taazgi aur  ek khushnuma si shaam hai
udaas mun ko jo khilkhila de woh aisa kuch paigaam hai
hur pal rahe uska tassavur,chahe door hai,nazdeek hai
bhari mehfilon mein mehboob ka youn naam lena kya theek hai!


Prateek



Bahut Khoob Prateek Ji
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«Reply #28 on: August 24, 2009, 12:08:28 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 20, 2009, 10:55:52 PM
wah wah wah!! kaya baat hai Prateek ji!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob!!


Aapki saraahna Se urja mil jaati hai,shukriya.
Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 21, 2009, 08:03:22 PM

WAH WAH WAH MARDIA JI... WAH WAH

JASBIR SINGH

Taareef ke liye dhanywaad, jasbiir ji.
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 21, 2009, 11:34:08 PM
Bahut Khoob Prateek Ji

Rajesh ji-saraahna ka shukriya
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«Reply #29 on: March 15, 2010, 09:34:03 AM »
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Pratikji,
bahot sundar rahana hai.
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