sawan

by mudassirali on October 31, 2004, 02:36:35 PM
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Garaj  baras sawan ghir aayo
mera piya par phir bhi na aayo

jagi rahi main sari sari raina
pyar ki jharhi mujhko na bhigayo

rut chali  hai sung terey saajan
kaisey tuney yeh pyaas pyaas bujhayo

mela laga hai har nukkad par
baa...daloon ney dhool bajayo

chaha usey pal pal hai maineey
par usney na sang nibhayo

 garaj baras sawan ghir aayo  
mera piya par phir bhi na aayo.

(yeh ghazal mainey ek alag andaaz mein likhney ki koshish ki hai par pata nahin buri hai ya achchi .aap log pls mujhey is barey mein bataein agar ri hai tab  bhi aur theek thaak hai tab bhi )
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