Sazaa

by Brijinder on September 04, 2009, 07:33:24 PM
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Sazaa

Na raatoN ko hui naseeb apnay khwaaboN ki tabeer
Na din meray nay payaa apnay ujaalon ka humnashiN
Na mili sera-e-jahaaN main zeest ko thandi chaaNv
Na jazbaat meray nay paayaa aqs apna kahiN

Tu to tha mushtaaq haqeeqat ki gawaahi hai
Shiddat-e-khuloos magar bani teri tabaahi hai
Tunay gaRd main reh kar shaffafi kay geet gaayay
Ziqr gulshanoN kay teri barbat pay kiyuN ki aayay

Yeh jurm-e-intahha tamddun say hota nahi gawaraa
Tareekh kar rahi hai sadion say yeh ishaaraa

Aqeedat-o-takddus kay auhaam main thay jo mastoor
UriyaaN kar diayay tunay tehzeeb kay woh sub nasoor

Ab isliay ta-umr tanhaaion main teh
Tu mehfiloN say door parchaion main reh
Ja ab tera koi nahiN
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Meanings:
Mushtaaq-one who wants to know
Shiddat-e-khuloos-intensity
Shaffafi-pure
Barbat-a musical instument
Jurm-e-intaha-extreme sin
Tanddun-civilsation
Aqeedat-o-takddus--faith n pious
Auhaam-- veham(illusions)
Mastoor--chupay huay
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2009, 07:35:40 PM »
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Sazaa

Na raatoN ko hui naseeb apnay khwaaboN ki tabeer
Na din meray nay payaa apnay ujaalon ka humnashiN
Na mili sera-e-jahaaN main zeest ko thandi chaaNv
Na jazbaat meray nay paayaa aqs apna kahiN

Tu to tha mushtaaq haqeeqat ki gawaahi hai
Shiddat-e-khuloos magar bani teri tabaahi hai
Tunay gaRd main reh kar shaffafi kay geet gaayay
Ziqr gulshanoN kay teri barbat pay kiyuN ki aayay

Yeh jurm-e-intahha tamddun say hota nahi gawaraa
Tareekh kar rahi hai sadion say yeh ishaaraa

Aqeedat-o-takddus kay auhaam main thay jo mastoor
UriyaaN kar diayay tunay tehzeeb kay woh sub nasoor

Ab isliay ta-umr tanhaaion main teh
Tu mehfiloN say door parchaion main reh
Ja ab tera koi nahiN
-------------------------
Meanings:
Mushtaaq-one who wants to know
Shiddat-e-khuloos-intensity
Shaffafi-pure
Barbat-a musical instument
Jurm-e-intaha-extreme sin
Tanddun-civilsation
Aqeedat-o-takddus--faith n pious
Auhaam-- veham(illusions)
Mastoor--chupay huay

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah kaya baat hai.... last line baki sari lines per bhari parr gai....
Ja ab tera koi nahiN

bahoot khoob Brijinder ji!!! Good Creation!!!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2009, 07:36:52 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Brijinder ji beautiful creation.  Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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saaz_haldwanvi
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2009, 07:43:42 PM »
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abhut achchi soch aur great work ,bijender ji,but as far as my concern is,
nazm ko jitna saral likha jata hai utni wo kamyaab hoti hai,yahan urdu words ka bewajah use hai.ye nazm unke bina bhi bahut achchi ban padi hai
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Brijinder
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2009, 07:49:41 PM »
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I am very thankful to all of you for the kind words of appreciation.And Saaz saheb,I have not intentionally used difficult urdu words but used only the words which really reflect my sensibilities.And my friend,it is an Urdu nazm and so use of urdu words is expected.What do you say?
Thanks
brijinder
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2009, 02:55:28 AM »
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Very beautifully created lines. Very very good Brijinder ji.. Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2009, 04:09:43 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Brijender ji.. Wakai bahoot khoob!
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umraan
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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2009, 02:35:16 PM »
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Wah..Wah Wah.. Bahut khub... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Brijinder
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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2009, 08:54:04 PM »
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I am thankful to all of you for the kind words.
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