~*~Shaam Dalne lagi hai~*~

by deepika_divya on July 19, 2009, 04:08:50 PM
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Hello here I am going to play the double role with my new creation. Here a small story about a lovers. In the story beloved getting late but the lover not letting her to go. hope you guys like it


Girl :- Shaam Dalne lagi hai Piya
        Ab tho mujhe jaane do sanam
        Chota baiyaan meri ab tho
        Baat tum meri Maano sanam

        Jaane do na der ho gai hai
        Maiyaa meri dantengi sanam
        jab na pahunchi gi ghar agar
        Maiyaa meri kaan marodegi sanam

Boy:-   Mat jaao na mujhe yuhn chod kar
        Kuch pal aur rukh jaao na sanam
        kaise katunga tere bina yea pal
        kaise beetegi meri ratiya Sanam
   
        Maiyaa ko tumari main mana lunga
        Unke saamne haath tham lunga sanam
        Baapu se tumara rista maan lunga
        Ab tho jaane ki jidd na karo sanam

Girl:-  Rehne do yun na uljaao na baato mea
        Tham kar baiyaana kamjor banao na sanam
        Shaama bhi bhujne ko ho rahi hai dekho
        Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Jaao tume jaana hai,main ab root gaya
        Meri tho tume fikar na rahi hai sanam
        Shaam dekho kaise mujhe machla rahi hai
        Ab need bhi kahan mujhe aayegi sanam

Girl:-  Kal aaungi na main tumse milne sunona
        Vada yea apna jarur nibaungi main sanam
        yuhn na root ,jee na paaoungi main yuhn
        Muskarao,Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Pagli main tho pagal hun tere ishq mea
        Jee hi nahi karta tumse bechadane ka sanam
        Karta hun bepahaan pyaar tumse main pyaar
        Ab meri maiyaa bula rahi hai tum jaldi jao sanam Winking


__DIVYA___
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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2009, 04:17:58 PM »
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Applause Applause
Tera ye double role bahut mast bana hai divya... good work  Thumbs UP Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2009, 05:46:58 PM »
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Wow Divya.. Kya Baaat Hai Dear.. Behad Naye Andaaz Me Likha hai aapne.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat aur Romantic Hai aapki Yeh Peshkash.. Ladka Aur Ladki Ki Pyaar Bhari Baaton Ko Shayari Me Dhaal Kar.. behad Lajawab Rachna Pesh Ki Hai aapne..!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Meri taraf se Daad Kubool Karen..   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ek Choti si Koshish Meri Bhi..  love9 love9


Girl:- Labon Ko Mere Lab Se Zara Hata Lo Dilbar,
       Ke Yeh Shaam Ab Raat Me Dhalne Wali Hai...

       Na Roko Mujhe In Larazthi Hui Nigaahon Se,
       Qasam Khuda Ki Yeh Dilruba teri Hi Hone Wali Hai...!!


Boy :- Aaj Raat Thahar Jao Sanam, Tumhe Meri Qasam,
         Ke Yeh Dil, Teri Mohabbat Ka Talabgaar Hai....

         Baahen Bhi Chaahti Hain Tujh Hi Me Simatna,
         Har Ek  Nazar Meri Teri Hone Ko Beqaraar Hai....!!


**~** Mann **~**




       
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«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2009, 05:53:27 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 19, 2009, 05:46:58 PM
Wow Divya.. Kya Baaat Hai Dear.. Behad Naye Andaaz Me Likha hai aapne.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat aur Romantic Hai aapki Yeh Peshkash.. Ladka Aur Ladki Ki Pyaar Bhari Baaton Ko Shayari Me Dhaal Kar.. behad Lajawab Rachna Pesh Ki Hai aapne..!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Meri taraf se Daad Kubool Karen..   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ek Choti si Koshish Meri Bhi..  love9 love9


Girl:- Labon Ko Mere Lab Se Zara Hata Lo Dilbar,
       Ke Yeh Shaam Ab Raat Me Dhalne Wali Hai...

       Na Roko Mujhe In Larazthi Hui Nigaahon Se,
       Qasam Khuda Ki Yeh Dilruba teri Hi Hone Wali Hai...!!


Boy :- Aaj Raat Thahar Jao Sanam, Tumhe Meri Qasam,
         Ke Yeh Dil, Teri Mohabbat Ka Talabgaar Hai....

         Baahen Bhi Chaahti Hain Tujh Hi Me Simatna,
         Har Ek  Nazar Meri Teri Hone Ko Beqaraar Hai....!!


**~** Mann **~**

Vicky bhaiya... bahut bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause

mai try karu?

Ladka : Kab raat koyi aisi thi jawan
Kab noor sitaron per yu tha?
Kab chaal sharabi chand ki thi
Kab chur nashe mein tha mai gagan
Kuch teri nazar ki jaadhugari....

Ladki : Ye khwaab mein b na socho tum
Mai tumse kaha hu ye jaan-e-wafa
Kaise bi pukaron tum mujhe
Daude chali aaungi tere pass
Mai dil hu jismein hai pyar tera
tum pyar bare dil ki dhadkan
Kuch meri nazer ki jaadugari
Kuch dil ka tere diwanapan..
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«Reply #4 on: July 19, 2009, 06:36:35 PM »
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Sophiji urf Divyaji aapka ye prayas achha laga.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
Boy:
Abhi abhi tou aai ho abhi na jaao chhod ker
Jaage hain dil k armaa yu n jaao inhe todker
Girl:
Dair hui tou daat padegi ye tou samjho tum piya
Kal fir aaungi hai vaada, ab ghar jaane de piya

Quote from: Sophi on July 19, 2009, 04:08:50 PM
Hello here I am going to play the double role with my new creation. Here a small story about a lovers. In the story beloved getting late but the lover not letting her go. hope you guys like it


Girl :- Shaam Dalne lagi hai Piya
        Ab tho mujhe jaane do sanam
        Chota baiyaan meri ab tho
        Baat tum meri Maano sanam

        Jaane do na der ho gai hai
        Maiyaa meri dantengi sanam
        jab na pahunchi gi ghar agar
        Maiyaa meri kaan marodegi sanam

Boy:-   Mat jaao na mujhe yuhn chod kar
        Kuch pal aur rukh jaao na sanam
        kaise katunga tere bina yea pal
        kaise beetegi meri ratiya Sanam
   
        Maiyaa ko tumari main mana lunga
        Unke saamne haath tham lunga sanam
        Baapu se tumara rista maan lunga
        Ab tho jaane ki jidd na karo sanam

Girl:-  Rehne do yun na uljaao na baato mea
        Tham kar baiyaana kamjor banao na sanam
        Shaama bhi bhujne ko ho rahi hai dekho
        Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Jaao tume jaana hai,main ab root gaya
        Meri tho tume fikar na rahi hai sanam
        Shaam dekho kaise mujhe machla rahi hai
        Ab need bhi kahan mujhe aayegi sanam

Girl:-  Kal aaungi na main tumse milne sunona
        Vada yea apna jarur nibaungi main sanam
        yuhn na root ,jee na paaoungi main yuhn
        Muskarao,Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Pagli main tho pagal hun tere ishq mea
        Jee hi nahi karta tumse bechadane ka sanam
        Karta hun bepahaan pyaar tumse main pyaar
        Ab meri maiyaa bula rahi hai tum jaldi jao sanam Winking


__DIVYA___



Quote from: Sophi on July 19, 2009, 04:08:50 PM
Hello here I am going to play the double role with my new creation. Here a small story about a lovers. In the story beloved getting late but the lover not letting her go. hope you guys like it


Girl :- Shaam Dalne lagi hai Piya
        Ab tho mujhe jaane do sanam
        Chota baiyaan meri ab tho
        Baat tum meri Maano sanam

        Jaane do na der ho gai hai
        Maiyaa meri dantengi sanam
        jab na pahunchi gi ghar agar
        Maiyaa meri kaan marodegi sanam

Boy:-   Mat jaao na mujhe yuhn chod kar
        Kuch pal aur rukh jaao na sanam
        kaise katunga tere bina yea pal
        kaise beetegi meri ratiya Sanam
   
        Maiyaa ko tumari main mana lunga
        Unke saamne haath tham lunga sanam
        Baapu se tumara rista maan lunga
        Ab tho jaane ki jidd na karo sanam

Girl:-  Rehne do yun na uljaao na baato mea
        Tham kar baiyaana kamjor banao na sanam
        Shaama bhi bhujne ko ho rahi hai dekho
        Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Jaao tume jaana hai,main ab root gaya
        Meri tho tume fikar na rahi hai sanam
        Shaam dekho kaise mujhe machla rahi hai
        Ab need bhi kahan mujhe aayegi sanam

Girl:-  Kal aaungi na main tumse milne sunona
        Vada yea apna jarur nibaungi main sanam
        yuhn na root ,jee na paaoungi main yuhn
        Muskarao,Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Pagli main tho pagal hun tere ishq mea
        Jee hi nahi karta tumse bechadane ka sanam
        Karta hun bepahaan pyaar tumse main pyaar
        Ab meri maiyaa bula rahi hai tum jaldi jao sanam Winking


__DIVYA___
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«Reply #5 on: July 19, 2009, 06:42:43 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah kaya baat hai Sophi.. dil khush kar diya.....Good work, Good creation!!

Mann ji app tyo khair hai he kamaal@dhamal.com bahoot acha sath diya hai apne Sophi ka!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2009, 09:02:11 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 19, 2009, 04:08:50 PM
Hello here I am going to play the double role with my new creation. Here a small story about a lovers. In the story beloved getting late but the lover not letting her go. hope you guys like it


Girl :- Shaam Dalne lagi hai Piya
        Ab tho mujhe jaane do sanam
        Chota baiyaan meri ab tho
        Baat tum meri Maano sanam

        Jaane do na der ho gai hai
        Maiyaa meri dantengi sanam
        jab na pahunchi gi ghar agar
        Maiyaa meri kaan marodegi sanam

Boy:-   Mat jaao na mujhe yuhn chod kar
        Kuch pal aur rukh jaao na sanam
        kaise katunga tere bina yea pal
        kaise beetegi meri ratiya Sanam
   
        Maiyaa ko tumari main mana lunga
        Unke saamne haath tham lunga sanam
        Baapu se tumara rista maan lunga
        Ab tho jaane ki jidd na karo sanam

Girl:-  Rehne do yun na uljaao na baato mea
        Tham kar baiyaana kamjor banao na sanam
        Shaama bhi bhujne ko ho rahi hai dekho
        Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Jaao tume jaana hai,main ab root gaya
        Meri tho tume fikar na rahi hai sanam
        Shaam dekho kaise mujhe machla rahi hai
        Ab need bhi kahan mujhe aayegi sanam

Girl:-  Kal aaungi na main tumse milne sunona
        Vada yea apna jarur nibaungi main sanam
        yuhn na root ,jee na paaoungi main yuhn
        Muskarao,Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Pagli main tho pagal hun tere ishq mea
        Jee hi nahi karta tumse bechadane ka sanam
        Karta hun bepahaan pyaar tumse main pyaar
        Ab meri maiyaa bula rahi hai tum jaldi jao sanam Winking


__DIVYA___




daad qubool karen sophi ji apni is shaandaar rachna ke liyn
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«Reply #7 on: July 20, 2009, 03:55:53 AM »
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Wah Wah Sophi Ji... Bahut he romantic peshkash hai!  Har ek alfaaz pyaar mein bheegha hai aur ladka/ladki donon ka kirdaar bakhoobi se nibhaaya hai aapne!  Daad qabool karein!  Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob! Applause

Mann Ji... Aapne bhi bahut pyaara aur romantic likha hai, hamesha ki tarah! Applause

Roja Ji... Aapne bhi bahut khoobsurat likha hai! Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 20, 2009, 06:00:32 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 19, 2009, 04:08:50 PM
Hello here I am going to play the double role with my new creation. Here a small story about a lovers. In the story beloved getting late but the lover not letting her go. hope you guys like it


Girl :- Shaam Dalne lagi hai Piya
        Ab tho mujhe jaane do sanam
        Chota baiyaan meri ab tho
        Baat tum meri Maano sanam

        Jaane do na der ho gai hai
        Maiyaa meri dantengi sanam
        jab na pahunchi gi ghar agar
        Maiyaa meri kaan marodegi sanam

Boy:-   Mat jaao na mujhe yuhn chod kar
        Kuch pal aur rukh jaao na sanam
        kaise katunga tere bina yea pal
        kaise beetegi meri ratiya Sanam
   
        Maiyaa ko tumari main mana lunga
        Unke saamne haath tham lunga sanam
        Baapu se tumara rista maan lunga
        Ab tho jaane ki jidd na karo sanam

Girl:-  Rehne do yun na uljaao na baato mea
        Tham kar baiyaana kamjor banao na sanam
        Shaama bhi bhujne ko ho rahi hai dekho
        Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Jaao tume jaana hai,main ab root gaya
        Meri tho tume fikar na rahi hai sanam
        Shaam dekho kaise mujhe machla rahi hai
        Ab need bhi kahan mujhe aayegi sanam

Girl:-  Kal aaungi na main tumse milne sunona
        Vada yea apna jarur nibaungi main sanam
        yuhn na root ,jee na paaoungi main yuhn
        Muskarao,Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Pagli main tho pagal hun tere ishq mea
        Jee hi nahi karta tumse bechadane ka sanam
        Karta hun bepahaan pyaar tumse main pyaar
        Ab meri maiyaa bula rahi hai tum jaldi jao sanam Winking


__DIVYA___



kya baat hai   sophi ji.......

     GIRL...
DIN DALNEY LAGA HAI,
GHAR WALLON KA DAR LAGNE LAGA HAI.
AAJ KE LIYE ITNA PYAR KAFI HAI SANAM,
KAL FIR MILEYGEN ,YEH VADA KARTE HAI HUM.

      BOY...
ABHI-ABHI TOH AANE LAGA HAI PYAAR MEIN MAJAA,
ABHI-ABHI TOH BANDHNE LAGA HAI PYAAR KA SAMA,
LAGI HAI JO DIL MAIN AAG ,US AAG KO TOH BUJAAAA,
SANAM YU NA MUJHE,PYAAR MEIN TARFAKE JAA.

       GIRL...

MERI BHI KUCH MAJBURIYAN HAI SANAM,
JO AAG TERE DIL MAIN LAGI HAI,
WOH AAG MERE BHI DIL MEIN LAGI HAI SANAM.
AB JAANE BHI DIYO,CHODO KALAAI MERI,
GHARWALEY NA KAR DE DULAAI MERI.

       BOY...
AISE-KAISE PIYASAA HI CHALE JAAUN,
AUR RAAT BHAR NEEND NA KAR PAUN,
TU BHI SACH BATA SANAM,
AISE MAIN KYA, TUM NEEND KAR PAAOGI SANAM.

    GIRL...
AAJ RAAT BAR TERE KHAWAABON MAIN,
AANE KA VAADA HAI SANAM.
TU MERI BHAHON MEIN,MAIN TERI BHAHON MEIN,
LIPAT KE SOJAAYE GE HUM.

       BOY...
KYA KARU AGAR PAANA HAI TUJHKO,
TUJE GHAR PE JAANE DENA, PADEGA MUJHKO.
WARNA TERE GHARWAALE,HAMESHA KELIYE NA KARLE TUMKO MUJHSE JUDAA.
WASE BHI ISHQ EK DIN KI TOH BAAT NAHIN HAI,
YEH UMAR BAR TAK CHALNE KA SILSALA HAI,
VAADA KARLE AAJ TUM KHAWAAB MEIN AAOGI,
AUR KAL HAQEEKAT MAIN MILOGI SANAM.

        BOY AND GIRL.....
DIN DALNE LAGAA HAI,RAAT HONE LAGI HAI,
DONO APNE-APNE GHAR PAR JAATE HAI HUM.


MANN JI,  ROJA JI, SMARDIA JI    AAP SABNE BHI BAHUT BADIYA LIKHA HAI.

 
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«Reply #9 on: July 20, 2009, 06:44:10 AM »
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Wah Divya ji,bahut khoob,maza aa gayee,Mann ji,samrdia ji,Roja ji,aap sabhi ne kamaal ka likha,beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 20, 2009, 10:01:30 AM »
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Wah wah Sophi Ji
khubsurat rachna rachi hai, wah wah
Ek filmi geet yaad aa gaya:
Jaadugar saiyan chhodo meri baiyan
Ho gai aadhi raat ab ghar jaane do
Feeka feeka kajra toota hua gajra
kah dega saari baat ab ghar jane do
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«Reply #11 on: July 22, 2009, 12:18:39 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 19, 2009, 04:17:58 PM
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Tera ye double role bahut mast bana hai divya... good work  Thumbs UP Usual Smile

Quote from: Roja on July 19, 2009, 05:53:27 PM

Vicky bhaiya... bahut bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause

mai try karu?

Ladka : Kab raat koyi aisi thi jawan
Kab noor sitaron per yu tha?
Kab chaal sharabi chand ki thi
Kab chur nashe mein tha mai gagan
Kuch teri nazar ki jaadhugari....

Ladki : Ye khwaab mein b na socho tum
Mai tumse kaha hu ye jaan-e-wafa
Kaise bi pukaron tum mujhe
Daude chali aaungi tere pass
Mai dil hu jismein hai pyar tera
tum pyar bare dil ki dhadkan
Kuch meri nazer ki jaadugari
Kuch dil ka tere diwanapan..



Thank you so so Much Sweetheart... Thank You .. Aur kya kahun.. kitna khubsurat likha hai sachi bahoot bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #12 on: July 22, 2009, 12:21:14 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 19, 2009, 05:46:58 PM
Wow Divya.. Kya Baaat Hai Dear.. Behad Naye Andaaz Me Likha hai aapne.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat aur Romantic Hai aapki Yeh Peshkash.. Ladka Aur Ladki Ki Pyaar Bhari Baaton Ko Shayari Me Dhaal Kar.. behad Lajawab Rachna Pesh Ki Hai aapne..!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Meri taraf se Daad Kubool Karen..   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ek Choti si Koshish Meri Bhi..  love9 love9


Girl:- Labon Ko Mere Lab Se Zara Hata Lo Dilbar,
       Ke Yeh Shaam Ab Raat Me Dhalne Wali Hai...

       Na Roko Mujhe In Larazthi Hui Nigaahon Se,
       Qasam Khuda Ki Yeh Dilruba teri Hi Hone Wali Hai...!!


Boy :- Aaj Raat Thahar Jao Sanam, Tumhe Meri Qasam,
         Ke Yeh Dil, Teri Mohabbat Ka Talabgaar Hai....

         Baahen Bhi Chaahti Hain Tujh Hi Me Simatna,
         Har Ek  Nazar Meri Teri Hone Ko Beqaraar Hai....!!


**~** Mann **~**




      

Awwwwwwww Thanks a lots Vikas.. thank you so so much for the lovely wordings. thank you dear.

And the lines you have written simply awesome .. Very well written as always...  Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 22, 2009, 12:22:08 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 19, 2009, 06:42:43 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah kaya baat hai Sophi.. dil khush kar diya.....Good work, Good creation!!

Mann ji app tyo khair hai he kamaal@dhamal.com bahoot acha sath diya hai apne Sophi ka!!

Thank you so much Pooja ji for liking it.. thank you so much.. Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: July 22, 2009, 12:22:53 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on July 19, 2009, 09:02:11 PM
daad qubool karen sophi ji apni is shaandaar rachna ke liyn

Thank you so much Aslam ji..Usual Smile
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