~*~Shaam Dalne lagi hai~*~

by deepika_divya on July 19, 2009, 04:08:50 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 22, 2009, 12:23:49 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on July 20, 2009, 03:55:53 AM
Wah Wah Sophi Ji... Bahut he romantic peshkash hai!  Har ek alfaaz pyaar mein bheegha hai aur ladka/ladki donon ka kirdaar bakhoobi se nibhaaya hai aapne!  Daad qabool karein!  Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob! Applause

Mann Ji... Aapne bhi bahut pyaara aur romantic likha hai, hamesha ki tarah! Applause

Roja Ji... Aapne bhi bahut khoobsurat likha hai! Applause



Awwww thank you sweetheart.. thanks a lot Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual SmileWinking
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«Reply #16 on: July 22, 2009, 12:24:56 PM »
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Quote from: cara on July 20, 2009, 06:00:32 AM
kya baat hai   sophi ji.......

     GIRL...
DIN DALNEY LAGA HAI,
GHAR WALLON KA DAR LAGNE LAGA HAI.
AAJ KE LIYE ITNA PYAR KAFI HAI SANAM,
KAL FIR MILEYGEN ,YEH VADA KARTE HAI HUM.

      BOY...
ABHI-ABHI TOH AANE LAGA HAI PYAAR MEIN MAJAA,
ABHI-ABHI TOH BANDHNE LAGA HAI PYAAR KA SAMA,
LAGI HAI JO DIL MAIN AAG ,US AAG KO TOH BUJAAAA,
SANAM YU NA MUJHE,PYAAR MEIN TARFAKE JAA.

       GIRL...

MERI BHI KUCH MAJBURIYAN HAI SANAM,
JO AAG TERE DIL MAIN LAGI HAI,
WOH AAG MERE BHI DIL MEIN LAGI HAI SANAM.
AB JAANE BHI DIYO,CHODO KALAAI MERI,
GHARWALEY NA KAR DE DULAAI MERI.

       BOY...
AISE-KAISE PIYASAA HI CHALE JAAUN,
AUR RAAT BHAR NEEND NA KAR PAUN,
TU BHI SACH BATA SANAM,
AISE MAIN KYA, TUM NEEND KAR PAAOGI SANAM.

    GIRL...
AAJ RAAT BAR TERE KHAWAABON MAIN,
AANE KA VAADA HAI SANAM.
TU MERI BHAHON MEIN,MAIN TERI BHAHON MEIN,
LIPAT KE SOJAAYE GE HUM.

       BOY...
KYA KARU AGAR PAANA HAI TUJHKO,
TUJE GHAR PE JAANE DENA, PADEGA MUJHKO.
WARNA TERE GHARWAALE,HAMESHA KELIYE NA KARLE TUMKO MUJHSE JUDAA.
WASE BHI ISHQ EK DIN KI TOH BAAT NAHIN HAI,
YEH UMAR BAR TAK CHALNE KA SILSALA HAI,
VAADA KARLE AAJ TUM KHAWAAB MEIN AAOGI,
AUR KAL HAQEEKAT MAIN MILOGI SANAM.

        BOY AND GIRL.....
DIN DALNE LAGAA HAI,RAAT HONE LAGI HAI,
DONO APNE-APNE GHAR PAR JAATE HAI HUM.


MANN JI,  ROJA JI, SMARDIA JI    AAP SABNE BHI BAHUT BADIYA LIKHA HAI.

 







Waah Bahoot Bahoot bahoot bahoot Khoob Haresh ji.. kya kamaal ka likha hai aapne.. bahoot hi lajawaab.
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«Reply #17 on: July 22, 2009, 12:26:02 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 20, 2009, 06:44:10 AM
Wah Divya ji,bahut khoob,maza aa gayee,Mann ji,samrdia ji,Roja ji,aap sabhi ne kamaal ka likha,beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

Thank you so much Madhuwesh ji.. Kushi hui ki aapko padkar acha laga...Usual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: July 22, 2009, 12:27:18 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 20, 2009, 10:01:30 AM
Wah wah Sophi Ji
khubsurat rachna rachi hai, wah wah
Ek filmi geet yaad aa gaya:
Jaadugar saiyan chhodo meri baiyan
Ho gai aadhi raat ab ghar jaane do
Feeka feeka kajra toota hua gajra
kah dega saari baat ab ghar jane do

Thank you so so much Sarvesh ji...Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: July 22, 2009, 12:28:15 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 21, 2009, 01:02:50 PM
Applause Applause Applause
bahot khoob Sophi ji,bahot umda likha hai

Mann bhai and Cara ji aapne bhi bahot khoob likha hai  Applause Applause

Thank you so so much Kaash ji.. Thank you Usual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: July 22, 2009, 02:18:30 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 19, 2009, 04:08:50 PM
Hello here I am going to play the double role with my new creation. Here a small story about a lovers. In the story beloved getting late but the lover not letting her to go. hope you guys like it


Girl :- Shaam Dalne lagi hai Piya
        Ab tho mujhe jaane do sanam
        Chota baiyaan meri ab tho
        Baat tum meri Maano sanam

        Jaane do na der ho gai hai
        Maiyaa meri dantengi sanam
        jab na pahunchi gi ghar agar
        Maiyaa meri kaan marodegi sanam

Boy:-   Mat jaao na mujhe yuhn chod kar
        Kuch pal aur rukh jaao na sanam
        kaise katunga tere bina yea pal
        kaise beetegi meri ratiya Sanam
   
        Maiyaa ko tumari main mana lunga
        Unke saamne haath tham lunga sanam
        Baapu se tumara rista maan lunga
        Ab tho jaane ki jidd na karo sanam

Girl:-  Rehne do yun na uljaao na baato mea
        Tham kar baiyaana kamjor banao na sanam
        Shaama bhi bhujne ko ho rahi hai dekho
        Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Jaao tume jaana hai,main ab root gaya
        Meri tho tume fikar na rahi hai sanam
        Shaam dekho kaise mujhe machla rahi hai
        Ab need bhi kahan mujhe aayegi sanam

Girl:-  Kal aaungi na main tumse milne sunona
        Vada yea apna jarur nibaungi main sanam
        yuhn na root ,jee na paaoungi main yuhn
        Muskarao,Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Pagli main tho pagal hun tere ishq mea
        Jee hi nahi karta tumse bechadane ka sanam
        Karta hun bepahaan pyaar tumse main pyaar
        Ab meri maiyaa bula rahi hai tum jaldi jao sanam Winking


__DIVYA___




Excellent, Superb ...Really very nice work Divs   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: July 23, 2009, 07:59:59 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Roja Sis, Pooja Ji, Deepati Ji, Cara ji, Madhu Ji, Kaash Bhai & Sophi.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Roja Sis, Cara Ji, Smardia Ji aap sab Ne Bhi Bahut Khooooob likha Hai.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #22 on: July 23, 2009, 06:42:14 PM »
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Wah Wah Bahaut bahaut bahaut acha likha hai Divya di, Cara jee, Smardia jee, Vikas bhaijan aur Roja di...Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: July 24, 2009, 03:40:54 PM »
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Shukriya Rahim Bhai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #24 on: July 24, 2009, 03:51:33 PM »
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Thank you so so Much Talat Di and Rahim bro...
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«Reply #25 on: June 26, 2010, 06:31:40 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 19, 2009, 04:08:50 PM
Hello here I am going to play the double role with my new creation. Here a small story about a lovers. In the story beloved getting late but the lover not letting her to go. hope you guys like it


Girl :- Shaam Dalne lagi hai Piya
        Ab tho mujhe jaane do sanam
        Chota baiyaan meri ab tho
        Baat tum meri Maano sanam

        Jaane do na der ho gai hai
        Maiyaa meri dantengi sanam
        jab na pahunchi gi ghar agar
        Maiyaa meri kaan marodegi sanam

Boy:-   Mat jaao na mujhe yuhn chod kar
        Kuch pal aur rukh jaao na sanam
        kaise katunga tere bina yea pal
        kaise beetegi meri ratiya Sanam
   
        Maiyaa ko tumari main mana lunga
        Unke saamne haath tham lunga sanam
        Baapu se tumara rista maan lunga
        Ab tho jaane ki jidd na karo sanam

Girl:-  Rehne do yun na uljaao na baato mea
        Tham kar baiyaana kamjor banao na sanam
        Shaama bhi bhujne ko ho rahi hai dekho
        Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Jaao tume jaana hai,main ab root gaya
        Meri tho tume fikar na rahi hai sanam
        Shaam dekho kaise mujhe machla rahi hai
        Ab need bhi kahan mujhe aayegi sanam

Girl:-  Kal aaungi na main tumse milne sunona
        Vada yea apna jarur nibaungi main sanam
        yuhn na root ,jee na paaoungi main yuhn
        Muskarao,Shaam dalne lagi hai jaane do sanam

Boy:-   Pagli main tho pagal hun tere ishq mea
        Jee hi nahi karta tumse bechadane ka sanam
        Karta hun bepahaan pyaar tumse main pyaar
        Ab meri maiyaa bula rahi hai tum jaldi jao sanam Winking


__DIVYA___


Good one Divya Ji
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«Reply #26 on: March 15, 2012, 04:35:50 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 26, 2010, 06:31:40 AM
Good one Divya Ji

Thank you so Much Rajesh Ji Usual Smile
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