<>*Sham ko dhal jane do…*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 28, 2010, 08:20:28 PM
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<>*Sham ko dhal jane do…*<>



Pyase hain tan man aaj inko nikhar jane do
Apne pyaar se aaj mujhe tum sanwar jane do

Bikhri padi hain kaliyaan mere aangan me
Aaj inko judee me mere tum saj jaane do

Dekhte hi bana lo mujhe  apne dil ki mallika
Kuch iss trah aaj mujhe tum sanwar jane do

Mahek uthengi ye reina aaj hamare Milan se
Aaj mujhe tum apne aalingn me kasmasane do

Chhu lena labon ko labon se apne tum jaana
Bas thoda sa aur  iss sham ko dhal jane do…..!!!!

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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2010, 08:29:27 PM »
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kya baat hai kya baat kasak ji...

ki fakat Intezar mein hi rakha har wakt sambhaal kar
tu kareeb aakar to dekh ki kya khwaish liye baitha hun main... !

teri zid shaam dhal jaane ki hai
baahon mein aakar machal jaane ki hai
zaraa soch ki behek na jaane kareeb aakar
chahat nahin tumse ab door jaane ki hai... !

Intezar !

<>*Sham ko dhal jane do…*<>



Pyase hain tan man aaj inko nikhar jane do
Apne pyaar se aaj mujhe tum sanwar jane do

Bikhri padi hain kaliyaan mere aangan me
Aaj inko judee me mere tum saj jaane do

Dekhte hi bana lo mujhe  apne dil ki mallika
Kuch iss trah aaj mujhe tum sanwar jane do

Mahek uthengi ye reina aaj hamare Milan se
Aaj mujhe tum apne aalingn me kasmasane do

Chhu lena labon ko labon se apne tum jaana
Bas thoda sa aur  iss sham ko dhal jane do…..!!!!

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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2010, 08:38:25 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Anamika di..
Bahaut hi zada khubsoorat..
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Nice lines Intezar jee.. Applause

Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2010, 08:49:22 PM »
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Shukriya Rahim bhai...

Intezar !

Bahaut bahaut khoob Anamika di..
Bahaut hi zada khubsoorat..
Applause Applause

Nice lines Intezar jee.. Applause

Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2010, 08:51:27 PM »
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Bohat Hi Achcha Likha Hai Anu Sis,.
Good Creation
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2010, 05:46:09 AM »
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wawwww Kasak.
uff ye rumaniyat se bharpoor or ek sachhi chahat ka ehsaas
kya khub likha tumne.
bole to mere style me ek aur Chumeswari peshkas hai Kasak ji.
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2010, 08:39:50 AM »
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hmm mast post he anu ji

bahut khoob likhte rahiye..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2010, 11:39:09 AM »
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Oho kasak ji bahut hi madhoshi bhara nagma pesh kiya hai...kuch jazbaato k taar chhidh gye apki peshkash se...
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2010, 06:21:44 PM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Kafi rumaiyat bhari kalaam pesh ki hai mohtarmaa daad
Hazir hai.... Aapke in ahsaas o khayaal ki bayaani bhi
khoob rahi...

Hum aapki is post ka postmartom to nahi kareNge par aapke
hi andaaz meiN reply karne ki koshish ki hai ummid hai...
Aapo pasaNd aayegi... Usual Smile

Waise humare ahsaas itne rumaani to nahi ....
           



Hai tum ko kuch khabar ke tumne kia kiya
Maasoom sa dil yeH mera tumne chura liya

Naa din ko chain hai naa raatoN nindeN
Deewaana tum ne mujhko bhi apna bana liya

Naa duniyaa ki fikar ki na apna kuch socha
Jab dekha humne tujhko bahoN meiN sama liya

Yeh khaboN ki raateN haqikhat bhi hoti
YouN soya hi tha parwaaz kisi ne jaga diya
 
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«Reply #9 on: December 29, 2010, 07:23:21 PM »
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Mast mast poem hai aapki.....full of feelings....khumaar he khumaar....doob gaya mein tou.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause love9 love9 love4 love4 icon_geek icon_geek

Jaanam sham ko dhal jaane do
Chand ko tum nikal aane do

Raat ko thoda jawaan hone do
Jazbaaton mai josh aane do

Dil ko mere jara behk jaane do
Dhadkano ko apni tej ho jaane do

Saji sawri surat ko dil me uttar jaane do
Malika-e-hushn thoda hosh me aane tou do

Teri zulfo se mujhe kuchh dair  khelne tou do
Aagosh mai apne tum mujhe garmaane tou do

Ess kasmasaati jawaani ko baahon mai bharne do
Adhron k jam peete-peelate aaj nasha ho jaane do

Masti mai aaj hum jhoomenge chand ko jara aane do
Karo thoda intezaar Jaanam Sham ko dhal jaane do


<>*Sham ko dhal jane do…*<>



Pyase hain tan man aaj inko nikhar jane do
Apne pyaar se aaj mujhe tum sanwar jane do

Bikhri padi hain kaliyaan mere aangan me
Aaj inko judee me mere tum saj jaane do

Dekhte hi bana lo mujhe  apne dil ki mallika
Kuch iss trah aaj mujhe tum sanwar jane do

Mahek uthengi ye reina aaj hamare Milan se
Aaj mujhe tum apne aalingn me kasmasane do

Chhu lena labon ko labon se apne tum jaana
Bas thoda sa aur  iss sham ko dhal jane do…..!!!!

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«Reply #10 on: December 31, 2010, 10:16:39 AM »
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Bahut Khub Likha Hai Kasak Ji Apne
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«Reply #11 on: January 02, 2011, 02:14:05 PM »
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Very romantic ... very touching ... Kasak Ji !

Very Nice Creation .... dil se daad .... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2011, 07:38:47 AM »
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<>*Sham ko dhal jane do…*<>



Pyase hain tan man aaj inko nikhar jane do
Apne pyaar se aaj mujhe tum sanwar jane do

Bikhri padi hain kaliyaan mere aangan me
Aaj inko judee me mere tum saj jaane do

Dekhte hi bana lo mujhe  apne dil ki mallika
Kuch iss trah aaj mujhe tum sanwar jane do

Mahek uthengi ye reina aaj hamare Milan se
Aaj mujhe tum apne aalingn me kasmasane do

Chhu lena labon ko labon se apne tum jaana
Bas thoda sa aur  iss sham ko dhal jane do…..!!!!


Wah Kya Baat hai Anamika Ji.. Behad Rumaani..!! Kisi Ko bhi Bahaka sakti hai aapki Yeh Rachna.. Mohabbat se Bhari Aapki Yeh Peshkash Kuch likhne ko Majboor kar gai.. Applause Applause



Tere Qareeb Aane Se, Mahak Uthi Hain Saansen Meri,
Yeh Labon Ki Shabnam Hai Ya Zulfon Ki Khushboo Teri....

Chhu Kar Jo Aayin Hain, Yeh Ungliyaan Tere Jism Ko,
Tere Husn Se Gulaabi Hain, Ya Nazaaqat Se Hain Teri......

Main Choomta Chala Gaya, Tujhe Palkon Se Paanv Tak,
Kasmasa Ke Lipat Jana, Mujhe Rokne Ki Tarqeeb Hai Teri….

Har Raat Yeh Chaand Chup Jaata Hai Baadlon Me Kahin,
Samajh Jata Hai Yeh, Hai Chahat Mujhpe Bikharne Ki Teri….

Aaj Phir Armaan Hai Dilbar, Tujhe Baahon Me Bharne Ka,
Ab Dekhna Hai Kya Aaj Raat Phir Yehi Tamanna Hai Teri….!!!




**~** Mann **~**



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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2011, 08:04:51 AM »
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ufffffffffff Mann ji kya gazab likha hai aapne....likhne ko dil machal gaya...umeed hai pasand aayega...

Aakar kareeb palat jati hun main baar baar sanam
Thaam lo baahon me bas yehi  aarzuu hai meri

Chhukar mere  labon ko apne larajte  labon se sanam
Chura lo ye gulabi rangat inki  yahi aarzuu hai meri

Kasmasa jaye ye kamsin badan yun pyaar barsao
Baahon me teri mujhe jannat mile yehi aarzuu hai meri

Ye chaand ye chaandni bhi jal jayen hamare pyaar se
Yun jagmagaye raat hamare pyaar se yehi aarzuu hai meri

Ikraar kar liya maine bhi ab apni wafa ka ee mere humdum
Bas  jao mujhme banker mahobbat yehi aarzuu hai meri…!!!

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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2011, 08:34:16 AM »
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Anamika Ji.. Kya Kahun Yaaaaaaar...?? Dil Ko Bahaka ke rakh diya aapne.. Armaan Kuch aur hi kahane lage hain ab to.. Ufffff.. Kamaal Hi likha Hai Such Me.. Applause Applause


Ek Tamanna Hai Choti Si, Teri Baahon Me Bikharne Ki,
Aaj Raat Yeh Armaan Poora Karne Ki Ijaazat Dedo Mujhe....

Main Bheeg Jaana Chaahta Hoon, Shabnabi Labon Se Tere,
Bas Ke Baar Khud Se Lipat Jaane Ki Ijaazat Dedo Mujhe....

Tarasti Hain Aankhen Meri, Tere Husn Pe Mar Mitne Ko,
Ek Lamha Hi Nigaahon Se Choome Ki, Ijaazat Dedo Mujhe......

Kar Doonga Main Fana Khud Ko, Tere Ik Iqraar Pe Sanam,
Lab Se Lab Takra Ke Izhaar-e-Ishq Ki Ijaazat Dedo Mujhe......

Qaid Hona Chaahta Hoon, Teri Baahon Ke Ghere Me Dilbar,
Bikher Zulfen Mujhpe Apna Banaane Ki Ijaazat Dedo Mujhe....

Tere Seene Pe Sar Rakh Ke, Sona Chaahta Hoon Kuch Der,
Aaj Mohabbat Me Mar Mitne Ki Saman, Ijaazat Dedo Mujhe......!!




**~** Mann **~**





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