~~~Shama Jalate Rahe~~~ -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

Pooja

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«Reply #15 on: February 06, 2009, 07:46:38 PM »

wow last two lines... kaya baat hai Pank ji... kamal ka likhte hai ishaq main... yah khoobi ab tak kyun chupaai hui thi,... Good work

Khamosh juban bhi bahoot kuch kahe jaati hai
nadan sanam ko magar samjh kaha atti hai

Ahsaas hai unhe bhi humare ahsaaso ka
phir na jaane kyun mathe per shikan chali aati hai

Der ho ya ab ho sawair yah un per chorra hai
apne khwalo ki tabeer, jis main najar atti hai


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pankshivam

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Re: ~~~Shama Jalate Rahe~~~

«Reply #16 on: February 06, 2009, 08:19:43 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2009, 07:46:38 PM

Shukriya
Bahot Achha likha Aapne

Kuch ehsaso ki shararat khwabo me gungunati hai,
Rishto ki khushboo se zindagi khud mehak jati hai...

Aaye na aaye jawaab kisi paigam ka,
Jab ummid hoti hai kisi se ,toh aankhe khud hi apne khwab sajati hai...
~Pank~


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Pooja

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Re: ~~~Shama Jalate Rahe~~~

«Reply #17 on: February 06, 2009, 08:29:43 PM »

wah ji wah kaya baat hai....

Izhaar-e-ada main wo hai jawab mange
kaise kahe dil ka haal, najro ko utha ke

humari is kash-m-kash per dekho
kaise dekhein hume, wo muskura - muskura ke


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pankshivam

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Re: ~~~Shama Jalate Rahe~~~

«Reply #18 on: February 06, 2009, 09:18:18 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2009, 08:29:43 PM

wah ji wah kaya baat hai....

Izhaar-e-ada main wo hai jawab mange
kaise kahe dil ka haal, najro ko utha ke

humari is kash-m-kash per dekho
kaise dekhein hume, wo muskura - muskura ke

Bahot Khoob
Zikr kare jab izhaar ka,
Do pal ki khamoshi me sadiyo se chhipe pyaar ka...

Aankho me chipakar rakha hai haya ka parda ab kyun,
Dard hai katna har lamha iss kambhaakht intezaar ka ...

~Pank~


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Pooja

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Re: ~~~Shama Jalate Rahe~~~

«Reply #19 on: February 06, 2009, 09:27:23 PM »

Quote from: pankshivam on February 06, 2009, 09:18:18 PM

Yah hua na baat.... wah bahoot khoob...Pank ji

Tere chehre per jo yah intzaar najar atta hai
kasam khuda ki, is per be-inteehan pyaar baras jaata hai

haya ki parda-nashi main jo tere pyar ka saroor mil jaata hai
aise main juban kahe kaya, dil ko yahi samjh nahi atta hai


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pankshivam

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Re: ~~~Shama Jalate Rahe~~~

«Reply #20 on: February 06, 2009, 10:00:12 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2009, 09:27:23 PM

Bahoot Khoob Poojaji

Har baat samjh jata, toh dil nadan na hota...
Rahe muhabbat ki aasan nahi, janta toh ye itna anjaan na hota...
~Pank~


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Pooja

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Re: ~~~Shama Jalate Rahe~~~

«Reply #21 on: February 06, 2009, 10:28:24 PM »

anjaan raho main sath chalne ka saroor na puch
na kuch use pata, na kuch mujhe pata,
anjaani baato ka saroor na puch!!


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deepika_divya

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Re: ~~~Shama Jalate Rahe~~~

«Reply #22 on: February 07, 2009, 07:13:33 AM »

wow.. bahoot bahoot khoob pank jui ,wondrful reply Pooja DI.


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Pooja

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Re: ~~~Shama Jalate Rahe~~~

«Reply #23 on: February 07, 2009, 07:14:25 AM »

Thanks Sophi!!!


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Just_Hate_Love

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Re: ~~~Shama Jalate Rahe~~~

«Reply #24 on: February 10, 2009, 01:43:26 PM »

...wah wah...kya mehfil jami hai...awesome Pank n Pooji...keep it up...


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