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«Reply #1 on: March 11, 2011, 03:00:44 PM » |
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Ufffffffffffffffffffffff itni mhbt bhari kavita padh k mhbt ka naya naya ehsas jaag gya koi bhi padh kar terre pyar mein pagal ho jayega sweetu...ye jo koi bhi ise hi padha dena yakinan saari dil ki baate keh dega...bahut mast.......
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«Reply #2 on: March 11, 2011, 03:37:58 PM » |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #3 on: March 11, 2011, 05:17:19 PM » |
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aahhaaaaaaaaa gudiya bht mast lkha hai tumne.........dil me gudgudi ho gai re...fir se ek bar mahobbatkarne ko dil kar gaya...wo first love wali feeling jag gai.....mastammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mastttttttttt reeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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«Reply #4 on: March 11, 2011, 06:00:59 PM » |
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very nice romance ful lines
manjil ho tum to poochna kya raste ka ,
kar chuke hain ikrar to izhaar kyun karen, rehti ho dil mein to bahon mein kaise bharen.
Ashiq hain hum tere aise ke dunya ka koi dar nai. Tera ehsas hai sath har pal jism ki khawaish nahi
na lag jaye nazar tumen dhoor se tumko dekhtey hain . Tere labon par dekh muskurahat dil hi dil me hastey hain.
Bol chuke hain tumse hum ke humko tumse pyar hai. Aa jao aghosh mein bahon ko bhi intzar hai.
Pagal na karo muje itna na satao muje . Dadhkan barh jati hai aise na pyar jataao muje
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«Reply #5 on: March 11, 2011, 06:19:09 PM » |
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Too Good ... Very Touching ..... Koyal Ji ! |
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«Reply #8 on: March 12, 2011, 10:32:07 AM » |
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oyye hoyye...
Koyal madam...
Kiske pyar me apna ye haal kar rahi hai....
Mast likha hai ekdum
Jiske liye likha hai na use suna de....
Wo bhi deewana ho jayega tera
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«Reply #9 on: March 12, 2011, 11:11:35 AM » |
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Thanks a lot Geet-di.....  AAP JO LIKHTI HAIN NA USSKE AAGE YE KUCHH BHI NAHI HAI JI....... Ufffffffffffffffffffffff itni mhbt bhari kavita padh k mhbt ka naya naya ehsas jaag gya koi bhi padh kar terre pyar mein pagal ho jayega sweetu...ye jo koi bhi ise hi padha dena yakinan saari dil ki baate keh dega...bahut mast.......
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«Reply #10 on: March 12, 2011, 03:02:55 PM » |
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Thanks a lot Geet-di..... AAP JO LIKHTI HAIN NA USSKE AAGE YE KUCHH BHI NAHI HAI JI.......  |
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«Reply #11 on: March 13, 2011, 10:32:21 AM » |
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hmmm........
baho me bahrna........labo ko chumna.........i lv u kahna.......
bahot acchi ja rahi ho.........tu ghar chal ...teri kahbar waha lenge sab gharwale.....kahna padega mom papa ko........chori hath hu nikal gi he ........bagad ki aa chori........duniya ki hawa lag gi he thane........
wese likha bada hi mitha mitha he ek dum mavakachori jesa......
koyal......ab kya kahu........chalo ese hi likhti raho.....dil me utar gayi apki ye peshkash........good one and cute one
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«Reply #12 on: March 13, 2011, 10:51:57 AM » |
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Very Romantic ..... Very Touching ..... Koyal Ji ! dil se daad ....... ! yunhi likhti rahen ... khush rahen ... ! duaaoN ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2012, 05:49:25 PM » |
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मैं जब मोहब्बत का इजहार करता हू तो लाल पीली हो जाती क्यों
मैं जब तुम्हरे साथ चलता हू तो पुलिस को बुलाती हो क्यों
मैं जब आई लव यू कहता हू तो उसका उल्टा अर्थ लगाती क्यों
मैं जब तुम्हारा हाथ मांगता हू तो मुझे पिटवाती हो क्यों
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