MANOJ6568
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Isqk-e-muskilo se tum ghabrana nahi dil apne dilber ka tum dukhana nahi
mere ghar mei aakar wo mujse ye bole yaha per kisi se tum sharmana nahi
chupe hai tere dil mei hum he sanam apne dil ko kabhi tum jalana nahi
ho na jaye umarbhar ke liye koi sharabi nazer se kisi ko tum ab pilana nahi
ho na jaye guma kahi ek aur chand ka nakaab rukh se abhi tum hatana nahi
jee raha hu jindgi bus tere he sahare dur meri jindgi se ab kahi jana nahi
tha garur apni daulat ka is had tak dosti ko meine kabhi pahachana nahi
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MANOJ6568
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MANOJ6568
Khaas Shayar
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«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2010, 08:38:15 AM » |
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Good lines, keep it up dear. (Waquif Ansari) Isqk-e-muskilo se tum ghabrana nahi dil apne dilber ka tum dukhana nahi
mere ghar mei aakar wo mujse ye bole yaha per kisi se tum sharmana nahi
chupe hai tere dil mei hum he sanam apne dil ko kabhi tum jalana nahi
ho na jaye umarbhar ke liye koi sharabi nazer se kisi ko tum ab pilana nahi
ho na jaye guma kahi ek aur chand ka nakaab rukh se abhi tum hatana nahi
jee raha hu jindgi bus tere he sahare dur meri jindgi se ab kahi jana nahi
tha garur apni daulat ka is had tak dosti ko meine kabhi pahachana nahi
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MANOJ6568
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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2010, 05:57:43 PM » |
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Good lines, keep it up dear.
(Waquif Ansari)
thanx ansari g
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MANOJ6568
Khaas Shayar
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«Reply #9 on: June 16, 2010, 06:02:11 PM » |
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Nice creation Manoj ji. Aap mein isse bhi behtar likhne ki qabliyat nazar aati hai. Keep it up.
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MANOJ6568
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«Reply #10 on: June 16, 2010, 06:07:20 PM » |
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Nice creation Manoj ji. Aap mein isse bhi behtar likhne ki qabliyat nazar aati hai. Keep it up.
mujse nahi malum meire mei kya kabliyat hai,mei sirf wohi likhta hu jo dil kahta hai hausla afsai ka sukareya
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«Reply #11 on: June 16, 2010, 10:46:38 PM » |
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Manoj ji...!!!
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MANOJ6568
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«Reply #12 on: June 17, 2010, 03:22:04 AM » |
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Manoj ji...!!!
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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2012, 10:48:19 AM » |
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Isqk-e-muskilo se tum ghabrana nahi dil apne dilber ka tum dukhana nahi
mere ghar mei aakar wo mujse ye bole yaha per kisi se tum sharmana nahi
chupe hai tere dil mei hum he sanam apne dil ko kabhi tum jalana nahi
ho na jaye umarbhar ke liye koi sharabi nazer se kisi ko tum ab pilana nahi
ho na jaye guma kahi ek aur chand ka nakaab rukh se abhi tum hatana nahi
jee raha hu jindgi bus tere he sahare dur meri jindgi se ab kahi jana nahi
tha garur apni daulat ka is had tak dosti ko meine kabhi pahachana nahi
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MANOJ6568
Khaas Shayar
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