----- /// Shayad humein fir ye pyaar hone laga hai /// -----

by klaskar on September 07, 2010, 07:11:20 AM
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fir se hamaara ye jahaan sanwarne laga hai,
jab se koi humein apna sa lagne laga hai,
bhool gaye the jeena kise kehte hain,
fir humein jeene me mazaa aane laga hai,

baagon me tere aane se bahaarein hain aaj,
har gulaab ek baar fir mehekne laga hai,
fizaon me kuch aisi rangat hai aaj ki,
har samaa indradhanush lagne laga hai,

koi humein hamaare apno sa lagne laga hai,
kisi apne ka saath pyaara lagne laga hai,
kisi ki pyaar bhari baaton se laga aisa,
shayad humein fir se pyaar hone laga hai,

shayad humein fir ye pyaar hone laga hai,
shayad humein fir ye pyaar hone laga hai...


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«Reply #1 on: September 07, 2010, 07:15:18 AM »
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nice oe kapil ji...ise to gaya bhi ja sakta he ..gar koi achha music compose kare~..good going yaaar
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«Reply #2 on: September 07, 2010, 07:25:49 AM »
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oyeeee hoyeeee kapil ji......fir se mahobbat k rang me rangne lage hain aap to...
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bht hi khubsurat peshkash ji
aur jaise abhi ji ne kaha thodasa edit karke gaayaa ja sakta hai...will give it a try...sunne k liye ready rehna ji.....
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«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2010, 07:50:58 AM »
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Kya baat...kya baat...kya baat....
ye hui na kuchh rageen-meejaaj wali baat....

Dost ye nazaare,ye phool,ye fizayen sab wahi hain
Bas tune band kar lee hongi man ki aankhen jo hain

Aaj jab koi ek nayee kopal phooti hai tere dil me
Badal gaya hai dost phirse dekhne ka tera nazariya

Khush hain aaj hum tere sab saathe sangee mere dost
Kay Phir se hone laga hai PYAAR tujhe aye mere dost


Quote from: klaskar on September 07, 2010, 07:11:20 AM


fir se hamaara ye jahaan sanwarne laga hai,
jab se koi humein apna sa lagne laga hai,
bhool gaye the jeena kise kehte hain,
fir humein jeene me mazaa aane laga hai,

har gulaab ek baar fir mehekne laga hai,
baagon me fir se bahaar aaane laga hai,
fizaon me kuch aisi rangat hai aaj ki,
har samaa indradhanush lagne laga hai,

koi humein hamaare apno sa lagne laga hai,
kisi apme ka saath pyaara lagne laga hai,
kisi ki pyaar bhari baaton se laga aisa,
shayad humein fir se pyaar hone laga hai,

shayad humein fir ye pyaar hone laga hai,
shayad humein fir ye pyaar hone laga hai...


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«Reply #4 on: September 07, 2010, 01:40:01 PM »
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    Ohoh matlab 4 din hum busy kya rahe ye sab hogaya or aapne hume khabar tak na di,ye to bahut galat baat hai. Giggle Kher bahut pyara sa view create karne ki koshish ki hai aapne saade se lafzo me jo hua bhi hai,very nice. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2010, 05:50:33 PM »
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You have written poem klaskar ji. I appreciate but there are some gramatical mistakes are seen.
1. The correct word is shama not 'sama'.
2. The words bahaar and shama are feminine gender but used as masculine. These are not used as shama jal raha hai or bahaar aa gaya hai. May please make ncssary corrections.
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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2010, 01:05:12 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji... !!!

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 07, 2010, 07:15:18 AM
nice oe kapil ji...ise to gaya bhi ja sakta he ..gar koi achha music compose kare~..good going yaaar
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«Reply #7 on: September 08, 2010, 08:39:57 PM »
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WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kapil pls zara name bi publish kar do yaar vaise nahi bi karna to theek hai hum issi main khush hai ki hum kuch din nahi aaye to yeh saab ho gaya KAMAL JI ........

Full of love ........

saach main mausum badal gaya hai yaar

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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2010, 01:10:32 PM »
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Kapillllllllllllll Bhaiiiiiiiiiii... Kya baat hai.. Kya baat hai.. Kamaal hi kar diya.. Bahut Hi Khooooooooooob Dost.. Bahut Pyaar Bhare Lafz Likhe hain aapne.. Daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2010, 02:24:55 PM »
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Waah Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Kapil ji.. Bahoot Umda !
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«Reply #10 on: September 11, 2010, 06:49:14 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... humein intezaar rahega aapki awaaaz ka...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 07, 2010, 07:25:49 AM
oyeeee hoyeeee kapil ji......fir se mahobbat k rang me rangne lage hain aap to...
 love4 love4 love4
bht hi khubsurat peshkash ji
aur jaise abhi ji ne kaha thodasa edit karke gaayaa ja sakta hai...will give it a try...sunne k liye ready rehna ji.....
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«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2010, 06:51:10 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Anaam ji...!!!

Quote from: ANAAM on September 07, 2010, 07:50:58 AM
Kya baat...kya baat...kya baat....
ye hui na kuchh rageen-meejaaj wali baat....

Dost ye nazaare,ye phool,ye fizayen sab wahi hain
Bas tune band kar lee hongi man ki aankhen jo hain

Aaj jab koi ek nayee kopal phooti hai tere dil me
Badal gaya hai dost phirse dekhne ka tera nazariya

Khush hain aaj hum tere sab saathe sangee mere dost
Kay Phir se hone laga hai PYAAR tujhe aye mere dost
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«Reply #12 on: September 12, 2010, 01:14:56 AM »
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Kalaskar jii khoob.........acha hai likhte rahiye



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«Reply #13 on: September 12, 2010, 06:18:01 AM »
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pata hi nahi chalta ... chaar din me duniya idhar se udhar ho jaati hai... ye to bas ek chhota sa haadsa hi hai... heheheh... thank you so much Tamanna ji.... hamari kavita ko itna pasand karne k liye....!!!

Quote from: tamanna.pt on September 07, 2010, 01:40:01 PM

    Ohoh matlab 4 din hum busy kya rahe ye sab hogaya or aapne hume khabar tak na di,ye to bahut galat baat hai. Giggle Kher bahut pyara sa view create karne ki koshish ki hai aapne saade se lafzo me jo hua bhi hai,very nice. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: September 12, 2010, 06:20:49 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji... bahut bahut shukriya... haan mausam sach me badal gaya hai... bahut pyaara pyaara sa mausam hai... par naam aapko kaise bataayen ...uska koi naam hi nahi hai....

Quote from: neelgold on September 08, 2010, 08:39:57 PM
WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kapil pls zara name bi publish kar do yaar vaise nahi bi karna to theek hai hum issi main khush hai ki hum kuch din nahi aaye to yeh saab ho gaya KAMAL JI ........

Full of love ........

saach main mausum badal gaya hai yaar


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