Shayari Nikalti Hai...(Adab)

by drpandey on June 07, 2014, 04:47:54 PM
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ज़ुल्फ़ जब शामकी संवरती है।
याद तब आपकी बिखरती है।  
दिल में पैहम सवाल हँसता है,
नफ़्स में ज़िन्दगी पिघलती है।
पेचोख़म जब भी याद आते है,
इक शमाँ सादगी की जलती है।  
रोज बादे - सबा से कहता हूँ,
आज-कल चाँदनी महकती है।
तुमसे पूछे तो तुम बता देना,
किस तरह तिश्नगी मचलती है।
गुफ़्तगूं करके जी नहीं भरता,
तब 'अदब' शायरी निकलती है।
'अदब'  
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2014, 05:00:23 PM »
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Nice one sir..
पेचोख़म ka meaning nahi mila.. Please share the meaning of पेचोख़म
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2014, 05:17:31 PM »
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Quote from: drpandey on June 07, 2014, 04:47:54 PM
ज़ुल्फ़ जब शामकी संवरती है।
अक़्स कुछ आपकी उभरती है।
दिल में पैहम सवाल हँसता है,
नफ़्स में ज़िन्दगी पिघलती है।
पेचोख़म जब भी याद आते है,
इक शमाँ संदली सी जलती है। 
रोज बादे - सबा से कहता हूँ,
आज-कल चाँदनी महकती है।
तुमसे पूछे तो तुम बता देना,
किस तरह तिश्नगी मचलती है।
गुफ़्तगूं करके जी नहीं भरता,
तब 'अदब' शायरी निकलती है।
'अदब'  


veriiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice -rau
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2014, 06:38:53 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 07, 2014, 05:17:31 PM

veriiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice -rau

Bahot - Bahot Shukriya khamosh_aawaaz ji....!!
Thanks for tha Rau...........!!

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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2014, 07:08:19 AM »
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waah bahut hee khoobsura qalaam hai.
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2014, 07:51:03 AM »
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waah waah waah bahut khoob lekin (aks) purling hai
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 08, 2014, 07:51:03 AM
waah waah waah bahut khoob lekin (aks) purling hai

Thanks Dr. Sahab theek kar diya....!!

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«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2014, 06:27:27 PM »
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bahut achha likha h adab sir,
guftagu krke jb jee nhi bharta
tb adb shayri niklti h....

sbse achhi line lagi
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«Reply #8 on: June 08, 2014, 07:16:03 PM »
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Quote from: kavyanshi on June 08, 2014, 06:27:27 PM
bahut achha likha h adab sir,
guftagu krke jb jee nhi bharta
tb adb shayri niklti h....

sbse achhi line lagi

Thanks Kavyanshi ji,

Gopal Das 'Neeraj' ji ka ek sher hai....!!

ज़ुल्फ़ों के पेचोख़म में उसे मत तलाशिये,
ये शायरी जुबां है किसी बेज़ुबान की। 

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«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2014, 07:25:34 PM »
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sunder ati sunder !!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2014, 12:55:10 AM »
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Quote from: Harash Mahajan on June 08, 2014, 07:25:34 PM
sunder ati sunder !!!

Bahut bahut dhanyvaad Harash Mahajan Ji...!!

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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2014, 01:52:21 AM »
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 Applause Applause :clap:waah waah bhot umda sir
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«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2014, 12:13:20 PM »
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Behad umdaa adab ji... bahut shandaar... rau is due after 8 hours...
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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2014, 02:18:03 AM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on June 09, 2014, 01:52:21 AM
Applause Applause :clap:waah waah bhot umda sir

Shukriya RAJAN KONDAL Ji...!!

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«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2014, 02:20:24 AM »
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Quote from: sanchit on June 09, 2014, 12:13:20 PM
Behad umdaa adab ji... bahut shandaar... rau is due after 8 hours...

Tahe-dil se shukriya Sanchit ji....!! Thanks for the Rau in anticipation....!!

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