shikwe hazaar huye~ Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on March 16, 2011, 10:04:50 AM
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Bahut se log kehete he dil ke tootne ki wajah bas bewafai hoti he ...me keheta hun mohabbat karne se hi dil toot jaye to kya kahiyega...ishq ki khumari to paththar bhi pighla de dil to bas ek chhoti si cheez hai..
so is baar kuchh isi tarah ka likhne ki koshish ki hai...umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayega.. 

Toota seene me rakha sheesha tootkar tukde hazaar huye
Har tukde par unka naam nikla to hamse duniya ko shikwe hazar huye

kisi ne kaha mohabbat badi zalim hai bas dard se jodti he
hame kya pata tha pata to tab chala teer jab dil ke paar huye

kahin nigahon ne gazal kahi kahin labo ne shayri keh di
tootkar ek ek shabda joda dil ne to ham shayar sare bazaar huye

haseen nigahe kabhi naaz to kabhi nakhra batorti hain
julfe to kayamat kya kehene kaha to tab bhi na gya ulajh ke jab barbaad huye

ek umra hi kahan kafi hai "Abhi" ki mohabbat ko samajh paun
samajh to wo bhi na sake jo isme parwaaz kai baar huye
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2011, 10:08:12 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khooob Abhi JI..

Lajawaab!!! har Ek A'shaar apni hisse ki kahani kehta hua..

bahut ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2011, 10:18:42 AM »
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shukriya khwaish bhaii...

yunhi sath dete rahiye~
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2011, 11:16:08 AM »
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WO log jo jeenay ka sabaq daitay thay hum ko.
Wo log hi galyoon main kafan baich rahay hain,
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2011, 12:44:24 PM »
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wat a tremendous presentation abhi........

maja aa gaya bhai........meaning ful poetry yaar.........

zabardast tarike se pesh kiya he........bahot khoob yaar........

kafi dino bad tuje pada he......dil ko jese ek tasalli mili...
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2011, 01:28:42 PM »
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Mastammm mast poem ek naye andaaj mai mubaarak ho Abhi..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Seene mai tune sheesha rakha
Dil ko fir kahaan chhupa rakha

Dil ko bacha k sheesha tudwaa diya
Nahak he naam unka badnaam kiya

Nigaho ki gazal,labo ki shayri
Churakar kya khaak shayar huye

Julfo me ulajh kar barbaad huye
Mohbaat me tum na-kaamyaab huye

Kisi naajneen k naajo-nakhare jab Uthaaoge
Tab mohbaat karne ki kuchh tips tum Paaoge


Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on March 16, 2011, 10:04:50 AM
Bahut se log kehete he dil ke tootne ki wajah bas bewafai hoti he ...me keheta hun mohabbat karne se hi dil toot jaye to kya kahiyega...ishq ki khumari to paththar bhi pighla de dil to bas ek chhoti si cheez hai..
so is baar kuchh isi tarah ka likhne ki koshish ki hai...umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayega..  

Toota seene me rakha sheesha tootkar tukde hazaar huye
Har tukde par unka naam nikla to hamse duniya ko shikwe hazar huye

kisi ne kaha mohabbat badi zalim hai bas dard se jodti he
hame kya pata tha pata to tab chala teer jab dil ke paar huye

kahin nigahon ne gazal kahi kahin labo ne shayri keh di
tootkar ek ek shabda joda dil ne to ham shayar sare bazaar huye

haseen nigahe kabhi naaz to kabhi nakhra batorti hain
julfe to kayamat kya kehene kaha to tab bhi na gya ulajh ke jab barbaad huye

ek umra hi kahan kafi hai "Abhi" ki mohabbat ko samajh paun
samajh to wo bhi na sake jo isme parwaaz kai baar huye
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2011, 04:54:05 PM »
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Bahut khoob abhi n nice reply koyal,,,
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2011, 05:07:06 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on March 16, 2011, 10:04:50 AM

Toota seene me rakha sheesha tootkar tukde hazaar huye
Har tukde par unka naam nikla to hamse duniya ko shikwe hazar huye

kisi ne kaha mohabbat badi zalim hai bas dard se jodti he
hame kya pata tha pata to tab chala teer jab dil ke paar huye

kahin nigahon ne gazal kahi kahin labo ne shayri keh di
tootkar ek ek shabda joda dil ne to ham shayar sare bazaar huye

haseen nigahe kabhi naaz to kabhi nakhra batorti hain
julfe to kayamat kya kehene kaha to tab bhi na gya ulajh ke jab barbaad huye

ek umra hi kahan kafi hai "Abhi" ki mohabbat ko samajh paun
samajh to wo bhi na sake jo isme parwaaz kai baar huye

Bahut khoob ..... Abhi Ji !

khoobsurat ehsaas .... dil se daad !
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2011, 10:32:06 AM »
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kya kahne abhi ji...
bht bht khoob.....
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«Reply #9 on: March 18, 2011, 06:30:33 AM »
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Quote from: jassaal123 on March 16, 2011, 11:16:08 AM
WO log jo jeenay ka sabaq daitay thay hum ko.
Wo log hi galyoon main kafan baich rahay hain,


bahut achhe khyal rakhte he aap jassal ji..

badhaii~ or shukriya bhi qubool kijiye
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«Reply #10 on: March 18, 2011, 06:33:57 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on March 16, 2011, 12:44:01 PM
wat a tremendous presentation abhi........

maja aa gaya bhai........meaning ful poetry yaar.........

zabardast tarike se pesh kiya he........bahot khoob yaar........

kafi dino bad tuje pada he......dil ko jese ek tasalli mili...


hmm tera matlab ab tak me menaning less likhta tha....good..

hehhee..

Quote from: KOYAL46 on March 16, 2011, 01:28:42 PM
Mastammm mast poem ek naye andaaj mai mubaarak ho Abhi..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Seene mai tune sheesha rakha
Dil ko fir kahaan chhupa rakha

Dil ko bacha k sheesha tudwaa diya
Nahak he naam unka badnaam kiya

Nigaho ki gazal,labo ki shayri
Churakar kya khaak shayar huye

Julfo me ulajh kar barbaad huye
Mohbaat me tum na-kaamyaab huye

Kisi naajneen k naajo-nakhare jab Uthaaoge
Tab mohbaat karne ki kuchh tips tum Paaoge


bahut badhiya koyaliya ..achha likha hai...

dher saari daad~

Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on March 17, 2011, 10:32:06 AM
kya kahne abhi ji...
bht bht khoob.....
oyee priya ji apni deal hui thi "ji " na kehen ki me thode din gaya kya aap bhool gaye ~

khair shukriya sath rahiye~

Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 16, 2011, 04:54:05 PM
Bahut khoob abhi n nice reply koyal,,,

thnx geet di yunhi sath rahiyega..~
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