- Shukriya Tera Bohot -

by Meena is back on June 08, 2006, 04:45:46 PM
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ek koshish hai is poem me meri, ek ladki ke khayal uske mehboob ke liye hote hai, woh pesh karne ke liye!

Shukriya tera bohot, mere meheboob, meri zindagi me ane ke liye,
Apne beshumar pyar ko mere is viran jeevan pe barsane ke liye,

Toote armano ke tukde ankhon me liye jeeya karte te kabhi,
Tum aye ho meri zindagi me, naye sapne sajane ke liye,

Chal pade hai zindagi ki  raha par tere pyar ki baisaki ke sath,
Jab haath tumne mera pakda, mujhe manzil tak pohonchane ke liye,

Galon se girte in pani ki bondon ko tama hai tumne,
Aur piroya hai unhe apne pyar me, meri muskurahat banane ke lyie,

Mera har dard samjha, meri har majboori ko apnaya tumne,
Kaun karta hai is duniya me itna kuch kisi begane ke liye,

Kaise ada karenge hum tere pyar ka karz hum,
Humare pas to kuch nahin tum pe lutane ke liye,

Par pyar bohot hai tumse, kaise ehesas dilaye tujhe,
Ke likh baithe yeh ghazal woh baat tujhe sunane ke liye!
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2006, 05:40:56 PM »
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Meena

Subhan-Allah kya khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai !

Sach mein mazaa aa gaya padh kar  =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>

One of your best work in recent times  :D

Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2006, 06:43:02 PM »
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bahut khub Meena ........bahut hi sundar........ :D
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2006, 06:49:38 PM »
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ek koshish hai is poem me meri, ek ladki ke khayal uske mehboob ke liye hote hai, woh pesh karne ke liye!

Shukriya tera bohot, mere meheboob, meri zindagi me ane ke liye,
Apne beshumar pyar ko mere is viran jeevan pe barsane ke liye,

Toote armano ke tukde ankhon me liye jeeya karte te kabhi,
Tum aye ho meri zindagi me, naye sapne sajane ke liye,

Chal pade hai zindagi ki  raha par tere pyar ki baisaki ke sath,
Jab haath tumne mera pakda, mujhe manzil tak pohonchane ke liye,

Galon se girte in pani ki bondon ko tama hai tumne,
Aur piroya hai unhe apne pyar me, meri muskurahat banane ke lyie,

Mera har dard samjha, meri har majboori ko apnaya tumne,
Kaun karta hai is duniya me itna kuch kisi begane ke liye,

Kaise ada karenge hum tere pyar ka karz hum,
Humare pas to kuch nahin tum pe lutane ke liye,

Par pyar bohot hai tumse, kaise ehesas dilaye tujhe,
Ke likh baithe yeh ghazal woh baat tujhe sunane ke liye!


masa allah!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kya likha hain aapne meena ji!

har ek line dil ko chuti hain par yeh line to dil ko aar paar kar gaya
"Mera har dard samjha, meri har majboori ko apnaya tumne,
Kaun karta hai is duniya me itna kuch kisi begane ke liye"
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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2006, 03:00:52 AM »
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Meena ek koshish meri bhi............ Usual Smile

aaj hamne apni mohabbat ka izhaar yun kiya
apni baat gazal mein keh ke iska iqarar yun kiya

milne laga hai jab se unke khayalo.n se mere khayalo.n ka silsaila
hamne unke kahwabo mein ja ke payar bahut unse kiya

har khushi har gum mein jab paaya unhe apne saath-saath
toh jindagi ki dor unke haatho mein thamane ka faisala hamne kiya

jab se aaye hain woh meri jindagi mein,toh mehakne lage hain gulab
hamne bhi unki jindagi ko apne payar se mehakana hai, yeh taye kar liya
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2006, 08:40:05 AM »
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too good Meena sis n Ranjana ji...
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ranjana
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2006, 09:20:08 AM »
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shukriya Nikki dear............ Usual Smile
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Rajbir
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2006, 12:28:58 PM »
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jab se aaye hain woh meri jindagi mein,toh mehakne lage hain gulab
hamne bhi unki jindagi ko apne payar se mehakana hai, yeh taye kar liya

Ranju

Yeh konse Rose garden ka address hai jahan gulab mehekne lage hain :D

Bahut Khoob =D> =D> =D>

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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2006, 12:33:26 PM »
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jab se aaye hain woh meri jindagi mein,toh mehakne lage hain gulab
hamne bhi unki jindagi ko apne payar se mehakana hai, yeh taye kar liya

Ranju

Yeh konse Rose garden ka address hai jahan gulab mehekne lage hain :D

Bahut Khoob =D> =D> =D>

Rajbir




Uffffff............ :D aap ko yeh jagah nahi pata hai Huh??.......  Usual Smile

waise sukriya............... :oops:
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2006, 02:34:43 PM »
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Meena –JI…

“Ho behtreen jo teri julfooN se who badal kha se lau
Jo kare byaaN tere hunar ko who Gazal kha se lau”

Bahut hi behtreen Gazal likhi hai aap ne … ab hamare paas alfaaz nhi hai jo iss Gazal ka jawab de sake…. Lekin phie bhi ek khohish jaroor karenge !!!


Mere dil ke ashiyaaNe mein ik tera hi basera hai
Shab ka meri chand hai tu, tu hi mera sawera hai

Dewana hoon tera, tu hai meri ashiqi ka hasiil
Tu hai to roshni hai sanam, tere bina andera hai

Honge aur bhi ahsiq duniya mein hazaroN, magar
Jaan-e-mun sabse alag ashiqi ka andaaz mera hai

Tere jalwooN ko mein samjhta hoon tajalli goya
Jha jha bhi teri parchai hai wahi mera dera hai

Zikr tera hi hota hai meri har Gazal mein janam
Teri chahtooN ke chakkar ne mujhko gehra hai

Tere liye hi aaya hoon iss jahaaN mein sanam
Itna jaan le “Meena”, “HumTum” sirf tera hai !!!

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«Reply #10 on: June 10, 2006, 04:02:11 AM »
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very nice Humtum ji..........bahut khub ......... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2006, 09:03:51 PM »
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Meena –JI…

“Ho behtreen jo teri julfooN se who badal kha se lau
Jo kare byaaN tere hunar ko who Gazal kha se lau”

Bahut hi behtreen Gazal likhi hai aap ne … ab hamare paas alfaaz nhi hai jo iss Gazal ka jawab de sake…. Lekin phie bhi ek khohish jaroor karenge !!!


Mere dil ke ashiyaaNe mein ik tera hi basera hai
Shab ka meri chand hai tu, tu hi mera sawera hai

Dewana hoon tera, tu hai meri ashiqi ka hasiil
Tu hai to roshni hai sanam, tere bina andera hai

Honge aur bhi ahsiq duniya mein hazaroN, magar
Jaan-e-mun sabse alag ashiqi ka andaaz mera hai

Tere jalwooN ko mein samjhta hoon tajalli goya
Jha jha bhi teri parchai hai wahi mera dera hai

Zikr tera hi hota hai meri har Gazal mein janam
Teri chahtooN ke chakkar ne mujhko gehra hai

Tere liye hi aaya hoon iss jahaaN mein sanam
Itna jaan le “Meena”, “HumTum” sirf tera hai !!!

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wowww too good Humtum ji...baat pakki ho gayi ho to badhayi hoo, badhayi hoo :wink:  :lol:
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«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2006, 06:15:00 PM »
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bahut khub Meena ........bahut hi sundar........ :D


shukriya ji shukriya!  :D

bohot acha aur pyara likha apne!!

woh aye hai humari zindagi me bahar ban ke,
gulshan ke bich aab ghar hai mera,
humne kar di apni zidnagi unke hawale,
woh bhi to aab sirf hai mera!
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«Reply #13 on: June 12, 2006, 06:16:45 PM »
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masa allah!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kya likha hain aapne meena ji!

har ek line dil ko chuti hain par yeh line to dil ko aar paar kar gaya
"Mera har dard samjha, meri har majboori ko apnaya tumne,
Kaun karta hai is duniya me itna kuch kisi begane ke liye"


shukriya ji shukriya!! :D
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«Reply #14 on: June 12, 2006, 06:21:47 PM »
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shukriya nikkid kuddhiye!!  :D
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