shyri

by chitralsony on February 15, 2009, 01:05:47 PM
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  hamay hay shoq  mehsosaat ko
  khobsorat pairahan   dainay ki
  hum nay jo zindagi say paya hay
  osay apna kr anokha dhang dainay ki
  hamara jurum  hay izhaar jazboon ka
  hamay adat si hogayi hay lafz bunnay ki
  
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2009, 02:26:47 PM »
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Pal bhar ke liye kabhi khud ko badal ke dekh
Bohat maza aayega kabhi tu GHAYEL ban ke dekh

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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2009, 03:21:46 PM »
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Quote from: chitralsony on February 15, 2009, 01:05:47 PM
  hamay hay shoq  mehsosaat ko
  khobsorat pairahan   dainay ki
  hum nay jo zindagi say paya hay
  osay apna kr anokha dhang dainay ki
  hamara jurum  hay izhaar jazboon ki
  hamay adat si hogayi hay lafz bunnay ki
 

Nice one....Keep it up !
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«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2009, 08:19:50 AM »
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Very nice. Keep writing.
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2009, 08:29:06 AM »
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Aap ne likha acha hai

mager zaban ki durustagi per nazer rakhain
jaise
hamara jurm hai izhar jazbon ka  \yahan ki nahin aasakti

javed
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«Reply #5 on: February 17, 2009, 08:54:06 AM »
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Nice chitra....... !
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2009, 11:32:03 AM »
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thank u javed ji app nay rehnumayi ki,thank u salma ji
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