sitam

by amit gautam on June 18, 2008, 07:00:56 PM
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har takalluf me chain aata hai ab,
dil ki baato ko hoto se kahane lage hai hum,
har nagma simat kar sher ban jaata hai ab,
waqt ne kiya ye kitna haseen sitam hum pe,
ke unke khayalo ka waqt be-waqt chala aata hai ab............
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«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2008, 07:16:02 PM »
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Good Work Amit ji
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2008, 05:56:25 PM »
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Nice one Amit !
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2008, 06:14:59 PM »
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Unke khyaalon main waqt beet jaata hai,
Madhham suron main geet chedh jaata hai,
Is qadar haseen hai ye ehsaas-e-mohabbat,
Khuli aankhon main mehke khwab jagata hai !!
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2008, 06:25:10 PM »
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Wah Bahut Khoob Celmira Ji
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2008, 06:30:25 PM »
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Shukriya Sammual Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 29, 2008, 10:09:17 AM »
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har takalluf me chain aata hai ab,
dil ki baato ko hoto se kahane lage hai hum,
har nagma simat kar sher ban jaata hai ab,
waqt ne kiya ye kitna haseen sitam hum pe,
ke unke khayalo ka waqt be-waqt chala aata hai ab............

Very Nice One.. Applause
Keep Writing..
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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2008, 10:09:49 AM »
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Unke khyaalon main waqt beet jaata hai,
Madhham suron main geet chedh jaata hai,
Is qadar haseen hai ye ehsaas-e-mohabbat,
Khuli aankhon main mehke khwab jagata hai !!


Good Reply Celmira.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: June 29, 2008, 02:54:10 PM »
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har takalluf me chain aata hai ab,
dil ki baato ko hoto se kahane lage hai hum,
har nagma simat kar sher ban jaata hai ab,
waqt ne kiya ye kitna haseen sitam hum pe,
ke unke khayalo ka waqt be-waqt chala aata hai ab............

Nice lines Amit jee
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2008, 02:56:03 PM »
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Good Reply Celmira.. Usual Smile

Thanks Mahiya...Usual Smile
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