sitam.........Priya..

by manzil-e-ishq on January 17, 2011, 11:49:08 AM
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Cheen kar dil  yun sitam dhate hai
Jab bhi milte hai muskurate hai…

paas me apna bacha na kuch mera
Or wo khawab bhi chupate hai….

Hai mere haal ki wajah wo hi…
Fir kyu dil ko itna lubhate hai…..

Kya kahiye unki is ada ko ‘manzil’
Har dard ki dawa jo wo ban jate hai…
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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2011, 11:56:59 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2011, 12:07:32 PM »
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Ishq ka rog jab dil ko lag jaye koi dawaa na dua kaam aaye, nazrein tarhpein dekhne ek ek pal apne dilbar ko bina palkein jhukaaye ,hai fakhat ke uske pehlu mein dum nikle our unke jism mein meri rooh bas jaye ,ho chahat ki manjil tere dil ke saagar mein usse paane saahil bhi bechain ho jaye
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2011, 12:09:37 PM »
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waah kya baat kahi hai tumne priya har sher dil se laga hua....
sply last 1 bht achhca laga mujhe...
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«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2011, 12:09:49 PM »
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nice reply saahil ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 17, 2011, 12:24:02 PM »
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Thx kasak ji apko hum yaad to hain
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2011, 01:10:55 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Priya jee..
Akhri shaer bahaut acha laga..
Dil se daad..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..
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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2011, 01:19:07 PM »
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Manzil sahiba --
Radhe Radhe..
aapki iss peshkas me sirf pyar
aur dard hai.
khud se sawaal jawaab hmm
badhiya hai ji.
ek pal dukh hota hai agle pal khusi ka azeeb sa ehsaas.
aapki khusi ki dua krta hu
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thanx
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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2011, 02:17:06 PM »
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mast hai Priya-di.....kya baat hai ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kaun hai jo is kadar chha gaya dil pe tere.......

Tere har dard ki dawa hai wo
Rehtaa saath kab juda hai wo



Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on January 17, 2011, 11:49:08 AM
Cheen kar dil  yun sitam dhate hai
Jab bhi milte hai muskurate hai…

paas me apna bacha na kuch mera
Or wo khawab bhi chupate hai….

Hai mere haal ki wajah wo hi…
Fir kyu dil ko itna lubhate hai…..

Kya kahiye unki is ada ko ‘manzil’
Har dard ki dawa jo wo ban jate hai…
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«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2011, 05:55:25 AM »
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bahut khub priyaji...

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 18, 2011, 12:17:01 PM »
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sahil ji...
anu di...
rahim ji...
koyal...
shihab ji...

aap sabhi logo ka bht bht shukria ki aap logo apna waqt diya....
& koyal nice lines dear..
or bht khoob sahil ji...
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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2011, 12:20:18 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai priya ji...nice lines by koyal n saahil ji...
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«Reply #12 on: January 18, 2011, 12:21:01 PM »
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radhe radhe nirala ji...
bht accha laga ye jaan kar ki meri is koshish ne aapko thoda pareshan bhi kiya or khush bhi...
khush rahiye...
isi tarah hausla badhate rahiye..


Quote from: nirala on January 17, 2011, 01:19:07 PM
Manzil sahiba --
Radhe Radhe..
aapki iss peshkas me sirf pyar
aur dard hai.
khud se sawaal jawaab hmm
badhiya hai ji.
ek pal dukh hota hai agle pal khusi ka azeeb sa ehsaas.
aapki khusi ki dua krta hu
"
thanx
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«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2011, 12:24:29 PM »
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shukria geet ji...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 18, 2011, 12:20:18 PM
Bahut khoob likha hai priya ji...nice lines by koyal n saahil ji...
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«Reply #14 on: January 18, 2011, 05:28:04 PM »
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Bahut Khub Priya Ji Bahut Sunder Likha Hai Aapne
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