So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !! -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

muskan_bye

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«Reply #15 on: January 23, 2010, 12:05:10 PM »

THANKS "SOPHI" JI

H R U "SOPHI" JI
Aap ke ehsaas padkar dil ro diya
aapne aisa likha ki dil mein derd ho gaya
itna gahera na likhiye ki har koi soch pad jaye
dukhi na hoiye bas aap khush hokar zindagi guzaar jaye.......

*****************************MUSKAN**************************


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Re: So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !!

«Reply #16 on: January 23, 2010, 12:26:01 PM »

wah sophi ji kya khoob likha hai aapne


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muskan_bye

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Re: So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !!

«Reply #17 on: January 23, 2010, 12:30:34 PM »

sahi kaha "SHABBIR" JI...

BAS DIL RO GAYA
KUCH BAATEIN AAPKI PADKAR
DIL RO DIYA
ITNA EHSAAS HUA KI
ANSOON KA FASANA BHAR GAYA............

*************************MUSKAN*********************************


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deepika_divya

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Re: So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !!

«Reply #18 on: January 23, 2010, 12:39:21 PM »

Quote from: muskan_bye on January 23, 2010, 12:05:10 PM

Me fine !

But maine Kuch aisa likh diya kya jo rula dene wala ho ?

Kuch yaadein Aksar rula jaati hai
Jo Attit ban Vartmaan mea chali aati hai
Kaun hai jo rok sakta hai unn yaado ko
Yea tho ak nadi hai jo ashq ban beh jati hai

Divya !


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deepika_divya

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Re: So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !!

«Reply #19 on: January 23, 2010, 12:39:46 PM »

Quote from: shabbir143 on January 23, 2010, 12:26:01 PM

wah sophi ji kya khoob likha hai aapne

THanks a lot Shabbir ji !


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deepika_divya

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Re: So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !!

«Reply #20 on: January 23, 2010, 12:40:09 PM »

Quote from: muskan_bye on January 23, 2010, 12:30:34 PM

GOod one Muskaan ji !


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muskan_bye

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Re: So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !!

«Reply #21 on: January 23, 2010, 12:53:31 PM »

THANKS *SOPHI* JI AND *KASH* JI

SHAM-O- SAHER BAS YAHI LAGTA HAI
ITNA EHSAAS HOTA HAI
KI ZINDAGI MEIN KITNI TANHAI HAI
BAS YAHI EK KASAK KI TARAH LAGTA HAI...............

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cara

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Re: So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !!

«Reply #22 on: January 23, 2010, 01:06:31 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on January 18, 2010, 01:35:30 PM

AAKHRI BAR MERE SANAM MUJHE PAR VISHWAS KAR
"SO JAANE DE MUJHKO KUCH PAL TERE SEENE SE LAG KAR
AGAR MERA DIL TERE DIL PAR NAHIN KARE ASAR
DIL KI BAAT BATAIYEGA DIL KI SARGOHIYUN ME AAKAR

dear Cara ji since it is posted in khumaar poem
to aapki ijazat chahunga last line ko aisa karke
asha hai aap pasand karenge.

Applause

bahut hi behtareen ehsaasaat dikhaye hain aapne Divya ji
aur aajkal aap aur Vicky ji ki posts padhne ka alag maza hai
bahut hi achi jugal bandi se likhte hain aap dono
vicky dear is me aapne kuch nahi likha icon_silent

ehsaason ke saaye me ehsaas bhi ek khyaal hai
jazbaat hi to ehsaas ke hamsha bahaal hai

kaash ji aapne jo mere likhe last line mein change kiya hai
wo hamko pasand aayi hai...
thanks for the same...
aap jaise logon ka haath mere sar par rahega...
toh mein jaanta hun mein kuch na kuch toh seekh hi paaunga...
is mein meh kuch bhi gawaaunga nahin....

aur sophi ji i always take positively....
advices are always welcome....


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muskan_bye

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Re: So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !!

«Reply #23 on: January 23, 2010, 01:13:16 PM »

THANKS *KASH* JI
*****************************MUSKAN*****************************


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KOYAL46

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«Reply #24 on: January 23, 2010, 01:23:09 PM »

Wah wah Divya-di mann k bhavo ko kaagaz per uttarna tou koi aapse seekhe....
lagta hai ek dum dilse nikle hain ye alfaaz... Applause

Aaj phir mera mann kyu ooudaas hai
Jaanti nahi main ye kaise pyas hai

Ye hawaayein kehti hain mujhse wo aane ko hai
Dil ki dhadkan baddhti jaye ki wo aane ko hai

Aankhen neend se bojhil ho rahi hain magar
Wo aayen tou so jaaun unke seene se lagkar

Kho jaaun bas unhe kay sapno mai
Aur Do jism ek jaan ho jaaun main

Aaj phir mera mann kyu ooudaas hai
Jaanti nahi main ye kaise pyas hai

Quote from: Sophi on January 17, 2010, 03:43:35 PM

Na jane kyun jab yea Hawaayein mujhe chu kar
guzarti hai Dil pe ak dastak si de jaati hai ...
Shayad Ishaaro -2 Mein Kehti hai tum aane wale ho
Ya fir yuhin mujhe Behla kar chali jaati hai

Kuch Pesh kar rahi hun... kuch ajeeb sa ehsaaso ko sabdo mein daalne ki koshihs ki hai umeed karti hun aapko pasand aayegi...

So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar
Aaj Najane Yea Dil Kyun Gabra raha hai
Kar Raha hai Yea Chand Sitaaro se baatein
Aur Dhadkano ko Najane Kyun Bada raha hai

SHayad Sama Jana chahta hai Teri Bahoon mea
Har Khushi aur GUm ko Bhula dena chahta hai
Duniyaa Ki Nazro se Chupte Chupate aaj yea
Dil Sirf Tere Dil Pe Panaah Lena chahta hai

Teri Dhadkan Ko Apni Dhadkan Bana kar yea
Teri Saanso ko agosh mein bharna chahta hai
Lipat kar Tere Seene se aaj Mera Tan Mann
Teri Pyaar ki Agan Mein Kho jana chahta hai

Bhoolana Chahti hun Mein Sab kuch tere siwa
Yea Mausam bhi Dekho Tujhme samaana chahta hai
Dekho Kaise yea Mujhe ched raha hai har Pal
Yea Mujhe Aaj tere Qareeb lana Chahata hai

So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar
Aaj Najane Yea Dil Kyun Gabra raha hai
Kar Raha hai Yea Chand Sitaaro se baatein
Aur Dhadkano ko Najane Kyun Bada raha hai

Divya


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deepika_divya

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Re: So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !!

«Reply #25 on: January 24, 2010, 04:47:37 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 23, 2010, 01:23:09 PM

Wah wah Divya-di mann k bhavo ko kaagaz per uttarna tou koi aapse seekhe....
lagta hai ek dum dilse nikle hain ye alfaaz... Applause

Aww thank you so much Koyal Dear !

And kya baat hai bahoot Khoob Likha hai tumne bhi. Keep it up !


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KOYAL46

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Re: So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !!

«Reply #26 on: January 24, 2010, 09:20:10 AM »

THANK YOU DIVYA-DI........

Quote from: Sophi on January 24, 2010, 04:47:37 AM

Aww thank you so much Koyal Dear !

And kya baat hai bahoot Khoob Likha hai tumne bhi. Keep it up !


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Bored

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Re: So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !!

«Reply #27 on: January 24, 2010, 09:27:21 AM »

Bahut Khoob LIkha Hai APnay Sophi Ji


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deepika_divya

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«Reply #28 on: January 24, 2010, 12:39:29 PM »

Quote from: Bored on January 24, 2010, 09:27:21 AM

Bahut Khoob LIkha Hai APnay Sophi Ji

Thank you so much Bored ji !


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deepika_divya

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Re: So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !!

«Reply #29 on: January 25, 2010, 08:43:01 AM »

Quote from: Shihab on January 25, 2010, 08:41:07 AM

Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Sophi Ji
Pura Khumaar Mein Dooba Hua Hai
Chalo Kuch Koshish Karta Hun Ji
Galti Maaf Ho...!

Apne Chehre Pe Tabassum Ki Kaliyan Khila Do
Ki Apni Sari Pareshaniyon Se Mujhko Mila Do

Deke Mujhe Apne Saare Dard O Gham Aey Sanam
Aao Ki Mere Seeney Pe Sar Rakh Khudko Sula Do.!

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Shihab !

MashaAllah Kya khoob Likha hai.. Bahoot Khoob!

Will reply you soon...


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