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«Reply #30 on: January 30, 2010, 08:42:54 AM » |
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Teri khushi mein ab Mujhe
apni Khushi Nazar aati hai ,
Tu Rubaroo nahi, Meri Justazoo se,
tujme apni Arzoo Nazar aati hai
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«Reply #31 on: January 30, 2010, 09:07:22 AM » |
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bahut bahut khoob likha sopieji Na jane kyun jab yea Hawaayein mujhe chu kar
guzarti hai Dil pe ak dastak si de jaati hai ...
Shayad Ishaaro -2 Mein Kehti hai tum aane wale ho
Ya fir yuhin mujhe Behla kar chali jaati hai Kuch Pesh kar rahi hun... kuch ajeeb sa ehsaaso ko sabdo mein daalne ki koshihs ki hai umeed karti hun aapko pasand aayegi... So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar
Aaj Najane Yea Dil Kyun Gabra raha hai
Kar Raha hai Yea Chand Sitaaro se baatein
Aur Dhadkano ko Najane Kyun Bada raha hai
SHayad Sama Jana chahta hai Teri Bahoon mea
Har Khushi aur GUm ko Bhula dena chahta hai
Duniyaa Ki Nazro se Chupte Chupate aaj yea
Dil Sirf Tere Dil Pe Panaah Lena chahta hai
Teri Dhadkan Ko Apni Dhadkan Bana kar yea
Teri Saanso ko agosh mein bharna chahta hai
Lipat kar Tere Seene se aaj Mera Tan Mann
Teri Pyaar ki Agan Mein Kho jana chahta hai
Bhoolana Chahti hun Mein Sab kuch tere siwa
Yea Mausam bhi Dekho Tujhme samaana chahta hai
Dekho Kaise yea Mujhe ched raha hai har Pal
Yea Mujhe Aaj tere Qareeb lana Chahata hai
So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar
Aaj Najane Yea Dil Kyun Gabra raha hai
Kar Raha hai Yea Chand Sitaaro se baatein
Aur Dhadkano ko Najane Kyun Bada raha hai
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«Reply #32 on: January 30, 2010, 11:04:03 AM » |
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aapki is nazm ka pehla band bhut hi dilfareib hai, is band ki dusri line jaise dil mai sama gayi ho bhut ahca likhti ho aap, likhti raho!!
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«Reply #33 on: January 30, 2010, 11:08:39 AM » |
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bahut bahut khoob likha sopieji
bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaan Phenomenal ji |
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«Reply #34 on: January 30, 2010, 11:09:40 AM » |
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aapki is nazm ka pehla band bhut hi dilfareib hai, is band ki dusri line jaise dil mai sama gayi ho bhut ahca likhti ho aap, likhti raho!!
dhund
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«Reply #35 on: February 05, 2010, 10:23:36 AM » |
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Wah wah kya khoob lines hain Shihab ji. Nice creation. Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Sophi Ji
Pura Khumaar Mein Dooba Hua Hai
Chalo Kuch Koshish Karta Hun Ji
Galti Maaf Ho...!
Apne Chehre Pe Tabassum Ki Kaliyan Khila Do
Ki Apni Sari Pareshaniyon Se Mujhko Mila Do
Deke Mujhe Apne Saare Dard O Gham Aey Sanam
Aao Ki Mere Seeney Pe Sar Rakh Khudko Sula Do.!
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«Reply #36 on: February 05, 2010, 10:28:29 AM » |
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Shihab !
Humko tho Sanam sirf Tera hi Khayaal hai
Tu Nahi tho Hone Laga Zidgai se Malaal hai
Khuda ki rehmat ho Mila de Hame ak Duje se
Tere Begair Hone Laga Humara haal Behaal Hai !!
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«Reply #37 on: February 05, 2010, 10:29:10 AM » |
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«Reply #38 on: February 05, 2010, 10:37:17 AM » |
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«Reply #40 on: February 05, 2010, 10:43:18 AM » |
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beautiful Shihab.. Too good !
Hum itna acha tho nahi likh sakte par koshish karti hun...
Meri Ankhon Mea sirf Tera Pyaar hai
yea Dil Mera tera hi Talabgaar hai
Aur Kitna Kare Bekaraar Khudko Sanam
In Ankhon mea kabse Tera hi Intzaar hai
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«Reply #41 on: February 05, 2010, 11:06:41 AM » |
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Are Khinchai nahi kar rahi hun Yaar sach Keh rahi hun.. Aur apne aap ko zahil kyun keh rahe ho... yea tho sabko pata hai ki kitne nek dil insaan ho tum...
Iss baar bhi Bahoot hi Khoob likha hai Tune.. Bahoot Khoob!
Hayaa bhi Hamse Parda Karne Lagi Hai
Teri Baatein Dil Mea Ghar Karne Lagi hai
Na aata hai Karaar ab Hamare Dil ko
Tere liye Yea ab Deewani Sawarne Lagi hai !!
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«Reply #42 on: February 05, 2010, 01:14:58 PM » |
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Ye kaisa khumaar chhaya hai
Ye kaisee hawaa chalee hai
Uthti nahi thi sharmo-hayaa se jiski palkein
Aaj wo hamaari Divya pawan sung udne lagi hai
Bahoot khushnaseeb hoga wo shaks,Divya jiske
Seene se lag kar sone k sapne dekhne lagi hai
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«Reply #43 on: February 05, 2010, 01:27:36 PM » |
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Ye kaisa khumaar chhaya hai
Ye kaisee hawaa chalee hai
Uthti nahi thi sharmo-hayaa se jiski palkein
Aaj wo hamaari Divya pawan sung udne lagi hai
Bahoot khushnaseeb hoga wo shaks,Divya jiske
Seene se lag kar sone k sapne dekhne lagi hai
Ha ha ha Ha ha ha.. Ufff uFff Kya kahun.. yea tho indirectly meri kichai kar rahi ho tum.... Anyways good one Koyal But aisa kuch nahi hai ... ! |
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«Reply #44 on: February 05, 2010, 01:33:15 PM » |
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Thank you soooooo Much Kaash ji ! |
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