sophi ka hukm--- saahil

by salil2002 on October 25, 2009, 02:15:39 PM
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hey yehy sirf sophi k liye hai aise hi likha hai dear kyunki aapka hukm tha ishq main likhne ka NaNaNa NaNaNa

kissii kii nigahon par hum sab kucch luta dete
agar ishq karte toh dil bhi gawaan dete
magar koi ab tak na mujhko mila kaahin
jis pe yeh dil ka saara jahan hum luta dete

mere doston dhoondo kaahin mil jaaye shayad tumko kaahin
phoolon se hai nazuk badi ,hai woh thodi shabnami
aankhon mein raaz hai,jise jaan sab hairaan hai
uske labon ko chhoona nahin ,honge woh nazuk pankhudi

sheeshe main dhal k aayi ho,kii apsara sharmaayi ho
aur chand bhi jal jaaye,jab leti woh angdaayi ho
lekin mere ae dosto rakhna khayal is baat ka
woh chahti sirf mujhko ho, woh meri hi parchhayi ho

 
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2009, 02:18:18 PM »
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Thank you very much Sophi dear. Aapne kaha aur hame bahut accha kavita ek aur baar padne mila. Good work Saahil dear. Aapko ab hum bi kahenge ke aap sirf Ishq mein hi nahi... Dard mein bi likhna zarur.

Bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause

 
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«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2009, 02:30:42 PM »
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Wow.. Kya baat hai Saahil Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat alfaz hai.. Bahoot Khoob!

Itni  jaldi maan gaye meri baat .. Kya baat hai.. ab likhte rehna yahan bhi  ok !
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2009, 02:27:22 AM »
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Wow bahut bahut khoob Saahil ji,lovely creation.thank you so much Sophi ji aapne jo hausla diya Saahil ji ko likhne ke liye.great work ,keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 28, 2009, 02:23:34 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai Aapne Sahil Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 01, 2009, 12:59:09 PM »
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Bahut Khubsoorat Saahil Bhai.. Bahut hi pyaara Likha hai dear.. Lajawab Peshkash.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #6 on: November 01, 2009, 01:22:49 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Saahil ji.......wonderful creation Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: November 02, 2009, 02:28:03 PM »
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hey yehy sirf sophi k liye hai aise hi likha hai dear kyunki aapka hukm tha ishq main likhne ka NaNaNa NaNaNa

kissii kii nigahon par hum sab kucch luta dete
agar ishq karte toh dil bhi gawaan dete
magar koi ab tak na mujhko mila kaahin
jis pe yeh dil ka saara jahan hum luta dete

mere doston dhoondo kaahin mil jaaye shayad tumko kaahin
phoolon se hai nazuk badi ,hai woh thodi shabnami
aankhon mein raaz hai,jise jaan sab hairaan hai
uske labon ko chhoona nahin ,honge woh nazuk pankhudi

sheeshe main dhal k aayi ho,kii apsara sharmaayi ho
aur chand bhi jal jaaye,jab leti woh angdaayi ho
lekin mere ae dosto rakhna khayal is baat ka
woh chahti sirf mujhko ho, woh meri hi parchhayi ho

 

Kya baat hai Salil.... Bohot bohot khoob dear.
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«Reply #8 on: November 04, 2009, 07:16:07 AM »
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saahil jee:

namaste!

aik achchhi koShiSh! bahot Khoob!

yuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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