Sub se chupa kar:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

sohnidesi

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sab se chupa kar dard jo woh muskura diya....
us ki hansi ne to aaj mujhe rula diya.....:cry:

ehje se uth raha tha har ik dard ka dhuaan...
chehra bata raha tha k kuch ganwa diya...

aawaz mein thayrao tha aankhoon mein nami thi...
or keh raha tha k mein ne sab kuch bhula diya....

jane kya us ko loghon se thi shikayatein....
tanhaiyon ke dais mein khud ko basa diya...

khud bhi woh hum se bichar kar adhura sa ho gaya....
mujh ko bhi itne loghon mein tanha bana diya...


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FAREE

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Sub se chupa kar

«Reply #1 on: July 21, 2005, 03:05:08 AM »

Quote from: "sohnidesi"

sab se chupa kar dard jo woh muskura diya....
us ki hansi ne to aaj mujhe rula diya.....cry

ehje se uth raha tha har ik dard ka dhuaan...
chehra bata raha tha k kuch ganwa diya...

aawaz mein thayrao tha aankhoon mein nami thi...
or keh raha tha k mein ne sab kuch bhula diya....

jane kya us ko loghon se thi shikayatein....
tanhaiyon ke dais mein khud ko basa diya...

khud bhi woh hum se bichar kar adhura sa ho gaya....
mujh ko bhi itne loghon mein tanha bana diya...

Wel Come To Yoindia Buhat Khoob......................................... Supreb Great


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sandeepparker

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Re: Sub se chupa kar

«Reply #2 on: July 21, 2005, 06:40:57 AM »

Quote from: "sohnidesi"

SWAGAT HAI AAPKA...

bahut khoob soni.....

Takiye pe tere sar ka woh tippa hai padhaa hai
Chaadar mai tere jism kee woh saundhi si khushboo
Haathon mai mehakta hai tere chehare ka ehsaas
Maathe pe tere hothon ki mohar lagee hai ...

Tu itni kareeb hai ki tujhe dekhun to kaise
thodi si alag ho to tere chehare ko dekhun....nm


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isha_verma7

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«Reply #3 on: July 21, 2005, 06:45:24 AM »

wah bahut khoob soni.....very nice and welcome to Yoindia and apna bhi achaa likha hai sandeep!!!


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sandeepparker

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«Reply #4 on: July 21, 2005, 06:57:39 AM »

Quote from: "isha_verma7"

wah bahut khoob soni.....very nice and welcome to Yoindia and apna bhi achaa likha hai sandeep!!!

thank you isha....

Lijiye bula liya aapko khayal mai...
Ab to dekhiye hame koi dekhta nahi....


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«Reply #5 on: July 21, 2005, 08:48:15 AM »

Very nice work sohin and sandeep .

Welcome 2 yoindia sohin Usual Smile


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sohnidesi

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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2005, 04:35:07 PM »

thank you guys!! Usual Smile

n good job nidhi!! :D

~*~Samia~*~


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waheed_rose2004

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Re: Sub se chupa kar

«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2005, 05:05:06 PM »

Quote from: "sohnidesi"

wah!!!!!!!!!! good starting......................sohnidesi.......... ..ur welcome to "Yoindia" nice written...........Sandeep.....................


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akela

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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2005, 07:04:21 AM »

nice one sohni desi ji..................plz keep it up...................


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plagiarism

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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2005, 07:14:18 AM »

Lovely ghazal, but would like to know who the original shayar is. Found this ghazal on numerous forums, actualy was already posted on Yoindia
http://www.yoindia.com/forums/ptopic2125.html
Thanks for bringing it to our notice again, but who is the original shayar, does anyone know?


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sandeepparker

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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2005, 12:45:41 PM »

thanks nidhi and waheed...

jo guzar gaye hain, unn lamhon ke,

laut aane kaa intezaar...

teri zulfon mein kho jaane ka,

teri baahon mein khud ko paane ka, Intezaar...

jheel see gehree teri aankhon mein,

doob jaane ka, intezaar...

tere seene pe sir rakh ke,

so jaane ka intezaar...

raat bhar teri pyaari baaton ko,

sun ke jagne kaa intezaar...

tujhko apnaa banake,

sang jeene ka, intezaar...

Intezaar, intezaar aur Intezaar....


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