Suno achcha nahin lagta!!!!

by Talat on December 14, 2004, 10:00:16 AM
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«Reply #30 on: December 17, 2004, 03:33:25 PM »
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wo chaand ban ke mere saath saath chalta raha
main uske hijr ki raaton me kabhi akela na raha
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«Reply #31 on: December 17, 2004, 03:37:09 PM »
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chandni banke roshan ki hain rahen meri
main bin uske kabhi andhere me na rahi!!!!
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«Reply #32 on: December 17, 2004, 03:39:43 PM »
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likhu to kaise likhu main tera srapa
alfaz jo raiej hai be zuban bahut hai
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«Reply #33 on: December 17, 2004, 03:41:07 PM »
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bataoon to kaise apna main haal-e-dil
aaj meri zubaan pe alfaaz nahin hain!!!!
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«Reply #34 on: December 17, 2004, 03:50:37 PM »
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tujhe gazal ki trah main saja nahi sakta
jo mere dil me hai tujhe dikha nahi sakta
mere nafs me hai tere wajood ki khushbu
tere naqush ka peeker bana nahi sakta
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«Reply #35 on: December 17, 2004, 03:56:46 PM »
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Tujhe ankhon main basaya hai
Tujhe apne dil me chupaya hai
Tu mera na ho kar bhi hai mera
Teri har yaad ko seene se lagay hai
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«Reply #36 on: December 17, 2004, 05:27:23 PM »
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Aap sabhi bahut achchha likh rahe hain ji!!! Very Nice!!! Waaah!!!
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«Reply #37 on: December 18, 2004, 06:31:35 AM »
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Aap sabhi bahut achchha likh rahe hain ji!!! Very Nice!!! Waaah!!!


Thank You!!! Arunji!!   :D  :D
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«Reply #38 on: December 18, 2004, 01:31:25 PM »
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Tujhe ankhon main basaya hai
Tujhe apne dil me chupaya hai
Tu mera na ho kar bhi hai mera
Teri har yaad ko seene se lagay hai


thanx sharma

apne aankho me mujh ko basane wale
apne dil me mujh ko chupane wale
tu ye jaan le ke sada hum rahege tere
ai meri yaadon ko seene se lagane wale
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«Reply #39 on: December 18, 2004, 01:33:41 PM »
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Palkon ki chilman se dekha hai aksar
Tu hai ya tera koi aks hai mere sath!!
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«Reply #40 on: December 18, 2004, 01:37:10 PM »
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kuch unko yaad karu, kuch unka intezaar karu
bahut sukoon hai isme, main khudko bekraar karu
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«Reply #41 on: December 18, 2004, 01:43:12 PM »
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khabar thi ki tu nahin aane wala
hum intezaar tera karte hi rahe !!
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«Reply #42 on: December 18, 2004, 01:50:08 PM »
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chaand jaise chahre wale, chaand itne hi door hai
jin ke sapne dekhte rahe hum begane deewane kya kya
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«Reply #43 on: December 18, 2004, 01:52:53 PM »
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Chaand na kehna mujhe, chaand me to daagh hota hai
Khawab me na dekhna hume, khawab sach nahi hota hai!!
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«Reply #44 on: December 18, 2004, 02:35:43 PM »
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U Both r doing very very nice!!!! Samnoj ji N Talat ji!!! Waaah! Usual Smile
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