Surmai sham .......... (neel)

by neelgold on September 02, 2010, 10:19:04 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 04, 2010, 09:28:59 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz ji...!!!

Neel Jee Aadaab!

Behad achchi koshish rahi hai aapki yeh..... Sabhi sher achche hai per ahsaas aur sawaal khoob lage.... Last do sher hume bahut achche lage.....

par secound sher bahut jyaada kamzor bana hai naa bayaani meiN aaya hai naa koi massage de paa raha hai....

Likhati rahiye..... Nikhaar aata rahenga....

And kalaskar jee and Rahim Sahab aap dono be bhi achchi sharing kii hai...... nice....... bahut khoob         


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