TAAKHEER HAI KYUU.N ITNI ...

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 17, 2011, 09:43:17 AM
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Taakheer hai kyuu.n itni Chilman ko uthhane mei.n ,
Kuchh Rang-e-karam bhar lo Be-faiz khazaane mei.n

Pathhar ko uthha kar kyuu.n,Ho.nto.n se lagaate ho,
Kuchh  baat to aakhir  hogi  tere  diwaane  mei.n

Kya khoob guzaaree.n hum ne, Hijr ki raatei.n  bhi,
Kuchh roothne mei.n guzree.n,kuchh unko manaane mei.n

Ehsaas  pe  chhaye hai.n  ab tak wo Hasee'n  Lamhe,
Kya kya  na  mila humko  Ek  khwaab suhaane  mei.n

Socha hai 'Hasan' ek din,Saaqi se yeh poochhei.n ge,
Peene mei.n Maza zyada hai, ya hai pilaane mei.n
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2011, 11:59:17 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Waah...waah...waah..bahut khoob
khoobsoorat ghazal kahee hai aapne...maza aa gaya.
lagta is ghazal ko fir se padhne ke liye peenaa
seekhnaa padega..khair...dili mubaaraqbaad qubool karen.

Gaal Gulaabee, Baal Sunahre...padhee kya isee site par hai
abhee bhee.
 
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«Reply #2 on: June 18, 2011, 04:42:50 AM »
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Satish ji,Bahut bahut Shukriya inayat ka. Aap ne ghazal padhi,pasand kee,aur khoobsurat alfaaz mei.n himmat afzai kee, bahut achha laga....Satish ji, Peena seekhne ki zaroorat nahii.n hai ,Sirf mahsoos karna kaafi hai.Phir nasha khud bakhud aane lagega.Sharab ka nasha ho,,mohabbat ka,jawaani ka ,ya watan parasti ka nasha - jaisa  nasha chaahiye uske khayaal mei.n kho jaaiye...Tabsiro.n  mei.n guftugu ka ye andaaz bahut achha lagta hai.Baat cheet karne ka mauqa milta hai.Isse qaaim rakhiye.Shukriya...Hasan
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2011, 10:05:45 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 17, 2011, 09:43:17 AM
Taakheer hai kyuu.n itni Chilman ko uthhane mei.n ,
Kuchh Rang-e-karam bhar lo Be-faiz khazaane mei.n

Pathhar ko uthha kar kyuu.n,Ho.nto.n se lagaate ho,
Kuchh  baat to aakhir  hogi  tere  diwaane  mei.n

Kya khoob guzaaree.n hum ne, Hijr ki raatei.n  bhi,
Kuchh roothne mei.n guzree.n,kuchh unko manaane mei.n

Ehsaas  pe  chhaye hai.n  ab tak wo Hasee'n  Lamhe,
Kya kya  na  mila humko  Ek  khwaab suhaane  mei.n

Socha hai 'Hasan' ek din,Saaqi se yeh poochhei.n ge,
Peene mei.n Maza zyada hai, ya hai pilaane mei.n



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«Reply #4 on: June 19, 2011, 04:41:58 AM »
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ab saheb,bahut bahut shukriya.khush rahiye....Hasan
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2011, 08:27:51 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 17, 2011, 09:43:17 AM
Taakheer hai kyuu.n itni Chilman ko uthhane mei.n ,
Kuchh Rang-e-karam bhar lo Be-faiz khazaane mei.n

Pathhar ko uthha kar kyuu.n,Ho.nto.n se lagaate ho,
Kuchh  baat to aakhir  hogi  tere  diwaane  mei.n

Kya khoob guzaaree.n hum ne, Hijr ki raatei.n  bhi,
Kuchh roothne mei.n guzree.n,kuchh unko manaane mei.n

Ehsaas  pe  chhaye hai.n  ab tak wo Hasee'n  Lamhe,
Kya kya  na  mila humko  Ek  khwaab suhaane  mei.n

Socha hai 'Hasan' ek din,Saaqi se yeh poochhei.n ge,
Peene mei.n Maza zyada hai, ya hai pilaane mei.n

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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2011, 08:59:12 AM »
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kuch lines meri taraf se,

Iss saal ki barsaat hai Aayee,
Par abhi tak wo n Aayee,
Kaho ae hasan,
kasoor unka hai yaa baarish ka...

Bahut khoob siddiqui saab.. Kya sahi farmaaya..
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«Reply #7 on: July 06, 2011, 02:03:55 PM »
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Shukriya gumboy ji,Kyuu.n  zakhm kured rahe hai.n : Huzoor...
 
   Baarish ki khata hai,na yeh unnkee hi khataa hai,
   Yeh  sirf  mere  cha.nd  raqeebo.n  ki  ataa  hai
                                              -Hasan
 
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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2011, 02:29:45 PM »
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wah wah Siddiqui sahab kamal likha hai
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«Reply #9 on: July 06, 2011, 03:32:56 PM »
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Shukriya,Sanjeev kash ji.
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«Reply #10 on: July 06, 2011, 03:36:34 PM »
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Khujli ji,bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #11 on: September 08, 2013, 12:11:57 AM »
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Aadaab Sir
Wah wah wah
Aaj kuch accha padhne ka man hua..to dhoondte-2 is pe aaya.
Ghazal to laajavaab hai par maqta...behad khoobsurat
Socha hai 'Hasan' ek din,Saaqi se yeh poochhei.n ge,
Peene mei.n Maza zyada hai, ya hai pilaane mei.n
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«Reply #12 on: September 09, 2013, 05:28:58 PM »
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Aadaab Sir
Wah wah wah
Aaj kuch accha padhne ka man hua..to dhoondte-2 is pe aaya.
Ghazal to laajavaab hai par maqta...behad khoobsurat
Socha hai 'Hasan' ek din,Saaqi se yeh poochhei.n ge,
Peene mei.n Maza zyada hai, ya hai pilaane mei.n

Shukriya Aur duaaein Mukesh ji ki aap  ne eik puraani ghazal
yaad dila dee. Is ko kisi qaabil samjha ye mere liye ba'as e
musarrat hai . aap ka bahut bahut shukriya .
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