"" Tadapan ""

by nirala on February 04, 2011, 06:10:14 AM
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wo mujhe kuch Yun Tadpaati hai
   na sahi se chuppti hai na Thik se saamne aati hai
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2011, 06:52:06 AM »
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wah niralaji...

aji ase dundne se nahin milegi wo... aankhe band karke khojie... miljayegi
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2011, 06:59:39 AM »
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chalo ji ab band aankho ko bhi zara aazmate hain
    haqeeqat hai ya fasana wo zara rubaru kar jaate hain
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thanx Manju
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2011, 07:00:02 AM »
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chalo ji ab band aankho ko bhi zara aazmate hain
    haqeeqat hai ya fasana wo zara rubaru kar jaate hain
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thanx Manju
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2011, 07:05:38 AM »
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han dekhie...

ye kaisi baat ke har sun wo hi nazar aate hain.
aake aankho se ab dil main bas gaye hain wo.
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2011, 07:19:38 AM »
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dil me base ho gar to thik hi hai
aankhon me bas jaye to kamaal ho
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2011, 08:00:38 AM »
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Good really good Usual Smile jai shree krishna
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2011, 08:11:35 AM »
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thanku ji
kuch tum bhi dasso na
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«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2011, 08:14:37 AM »
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dasunga par thodi der baad kyunki abhi sab ki poetry padh raha hun Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: February 04, 2011, 08:17:45 AM »
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padh lo bhai padh lo.
fir aao jaldi
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«Reply #10 on: February 04, 2011, 12:32:25 PM »
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wo mujhe kuch Yun Tadpaati hai
   na sahi se chuppti hai na Thik se saamne aati hai
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Good One ..... Nirala Ji !
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«Reply #11 on: February 04, 2011, 12:52:56 PM »
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Behad masum si do line bahut khoob nirala ji..
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«Reply #12 on: February 04, 2011, 02:38:27 PM »
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sukriya BBL Ji
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«Reply #13 on: February 04, 2011, 08:09:04 PM »
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bahut khub
aapka sher pad ke kisi bade shayer ka sher yaad aa gaya


kyu na aaj usko uski he tarah se sataya jaaye
hum to dekhe unhe per khud unhe nazer na aaye

wo mujhe kuch Yun Tadpaati hai
   na sahi se chuppti hai na Thik se saamne aati hai
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2011, 02:45:12 AM »
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sukriya Ansumali ji.
Manoj ji aapka sher to bahut gazab ka hai Bahut khubb
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