Taish- hum hi milte haiN kya SATAANE ko...!!

by ghayal_shayar on June 25, 2013, 09:52:51 PM
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Bahut waqt baad kuch romantic sa likhne ki kosish ki hai, par ye pata nahin ki kitna romantic likh paaya huN, umeed karta huN aap logoN ko jyada niraash nahiN karuNga...


Dhoond ke har naye bahaane ko,
Hum hi milte haiN kya sataane ko...??

neend me choom kar ho tum jaati,
kya kaheN tere aise aane ko...

jo suna haarte haiN ishq me sab,
hum bhi taiyaar aazmaane ko...

jab salamat haiN haath-paauN mere,
chahiye aur kya kamaane ko...

chot to jaan-boojh kar khaayi,
kaun kehta hai dil lagaane ko...

chhod jaayeNge jab zamaana hum,
yaad aayeNge is zamaane ko...
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2013, 11:39:19 PM »
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Bilkul bhi niraash naheen hue, balki bahaut achchha laga parh ke. Romance ka baghi rang jaisa laga. Bahaut khoob ... Daad!
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2013, 11:57:22 PM »
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Just be confident.
dil me dheere-2 utre ..aisa khumaar
bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2013, 11:58:16 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob, dheroN daad aur ek Rau.
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«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2013, 01:14:04 AM »
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Lagta Hai Shayari Ke Saath Saath Ab Pyar Muhabbat Ka Bhi Aapse Sabak Lena Hoga...Niraash Nahi Proud Feel Karwaaya Hai Janaab Aapne...Ye Humari Khushnaseebi Hai Ke Aap jaise Umdah Likhne Waale Is Bazm Mein Hain Wah Wah Dil Khush Ho Gaya...Shuru Se Akhir Tak Sabhi Ashaar Bahut Achchey Lagey...Is Khoobsurat Peshkash Pe Dil Ki Hehraaiyon Se Ba Aawaz e Buland Daad Kabul Farmaaye....

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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2013, 03:26:52 AM »
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Bahut waqt baad kuch romantic sa likhne ki kosish ki hai, par ye pata nahin ki kitna romantic likh paaya huN, umeed karta huN aap logoN ko jyada niraash nahiN karuNga...


Dhoond ke har naye bahaane ko,
Hum hi milte haiN kya sataane ko...??

neend me choom kar ho tum jaati,
kya kaheN tere aise aane ko...

jo suna haarte haiN ishq me sab,
hum bhi taiyaar aazmaane ko...

jab salamat haiN haath-paauN mere,
chahiye aur kya kamaane ko...

chot to jaan-boojh kar khaayi,
kaun kehta hai dil lagaane ko...

chhod jaayeNge jab zamaana hum,
yaad aayeNge is zamaane ko...


bahut khoob....!
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2013, 03:29:38 AM »
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bohat khubsoorat kalaa.m taish ji ,.............bohat c daad,.......
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«Reply #7 on: June 26, 2013, 03:33:10 AM »
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bahut umda!

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«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2013, 04:12:00 AM »
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Bilkul bhi niraash naheen hue, balki bahaut achchha laga parh ke. Romance ka baghi rang jaisa laga. Bahaut khoob ... Daad!

zarra saaheb bas aapki duaa saath rahe, bahut shukraguzaar hun aapka is tareef ke liye, aage bhi yuNHi saath dete raheN...!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 26, 2013, 09:07:56 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2013, 11:57:37 AM »
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Just be confident.
dil me dheere-2 utre ..aisa khumaar
bahut bahut khoob

thank u sir ji, will remember that...
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2013, 12:25:43 PM »
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Bahut waqt baad kuch romantic sa likhne ki kosish ki hai, par ye pata nahin ki kitna romantic likh paaya huN, umeed karta huN aap logoN ko jyada niraash nahiN karuNga...


Dhoond ke har naye bahaane ko,
Hum hi milte haiN kya sataane ko...??

neend me choom kar ho tum jaati,
kya kaheN tere aise aane ko...

jo suna haarte haiN ishq me sab,
hum bhi taiyaar aazmaane ko...

jab salamat haiN haath-paauN mere,
chahiye aur kya kamaane ko...

chot to jaan-boojh kar khaayi,
kaun kehta hai dil lagaane ko...

chhod jaayeNge jab zamaana hum,
yaad aayeNge is zamaane ko...


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«Reply #12 on: June 26, 2013, 12:58:55 PM »
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 notworthy good one
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«Reply #13 on: June 26, 2013, 01:28:26 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob taish ji. mujhe aapki yeh kalaam bahut pasand aayi . dil ko choo gayi isiliye ek rau aur bahut saari duaen.
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«Reply #14 on: June 26, 2013, 02:51:51 PM »
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Taish bhai aapke is sher ne jakad hi liya...
jo suna haarte haiN ishq me sab,
hum bhi taiyaar aazmaane ko...
Waah jawab nahi...
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