Taish- hum hi milte haiN kya SATAANE ko...!!

by ghayal_shayar on June 25, 2013, 09:52:51 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 26, 2013, 02:52:14 PM »
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Its Beautiful.............................
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«Reply #16 on: June 26, 2013, 05:55:31 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob, dheroN daad aur ek Rau.

bahut bahut shukriya iftakhar saaheb, daad aur rau dono hi ke liye, yunhi aage v saath dete raheN...
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«Reply #17 on: June 26, 2013, 06:47:23 PM »
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«Reply #18 on: June 26, 2013, 06:52:36 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #19 on: June 26, 2013, 11:58:57 PM »
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Lagta Hai Shayari Ke Saath Saath Ab Pyar Muhabbat Ka Bhi Aapse Sabak Lena Hoga...Niraash Nahi Proud Feel Karwaaya Hai Janaab Aapne...Ye Humari Khushnaseebi Hai Ke Aap jaise Umdah Likhne Waale Is Bazm Mein Hain Wah Wah Dil Khush Ho Gaya...Shuru Se Akhir Tak Sabhi Ashaar Bahut Achchey Lagey...Is Khoobsurat Peshkash Pe Dil Ki Hehraaiyon Se Ba Aawaz e Buland Daad Kabul Farmaaye....

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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


Shihab

are nahiN saaheb, hum to khud shayri ke ilm ko samajhne ko kosish kar rahe haiN fir seekhne ki kosish bhi karni hai, aur rahi pyar mohabbat ki baat to nakaamyaab aashiqoN se aap na hi seekheN to behtar hai saaheb... Usual Smile  janaab itni izzat afzaayi ki hai aapne ki  kuch kehte bhi nahiN ban raha, iske aadi jo nahiN haiN, bas yahi darkhwast rahegi ki apna pyar humare saath yuNhi aage bhi aap banaaye rakheN...!!
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«Reply #20 on: June 27, 2013, 04:49:58 AM »
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bahut khoob....!

shukriya mohtarma...
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«Reply #21 on: June 27, 2013, 02:48:05 PM »
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bohat khubsoorat kalaa.m taish ji ,.............bohat c daad,.......

aapki daad humare sar aankhon pe laaiba ji... yuNhi satah deti raheN aap...!!
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«Reply #22 on: June 27, 2013, 03:04:06 PM »
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awesome: clap:
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«Reply #23 on: June 27, 2013, 06:45:35 PM »
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bahut umda!

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shukriya bhai jaan... Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: June 28, 2013, 02:34:31 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB.... Applause Applause Applause

miru ji pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab...!! yuNhi aage bhi satah dete raheN...!!
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«Reply #25 on: June 28, 2013, 05:56:02 PM »
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qalb saaheb shukriya...
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«Reply #26 on: June 28, 2013, 05:58:44 PM »
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Bahut waqt baad kuch romantic sa likhne ki kosish ki hai, par ye pata nahin ki kitna romantic likh paaya huN, umeed karta huN aap logoN ko jyada niraash nahiN karuNga...


Dhoond ke har naye bahaane ko,
Hum hi milte haiN kya sataane ko...??

neend me choom kar ho tum jaati,
kya kaheN tere aise aane ko...

jo suna haarte haiN ishq me sab,
hum bhi taiyaar aazmaane ko...

jab salamat haiN haath-paauN mere,
chahiye aur kya kamaane ko...

chot to jaan-boojh kar khaayi,
kaun kehta hai dil lagaane ko...

chhod jaayeNge jab zamaana hum,
yaad aayeNge is zamaane ko...


nice,sir
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«Reply #27 on: June 29, 2013, 01:52:07 AM »
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notworthy good one

thanks mate....
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«Reply #28 on: June 29, 2013, 01:31:38 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob taish ji. mujhe aapki yeh kalaam bahut pasand aayi . dil ko choo gayi isiliye ek rau aur bahut saari duaen.


rau aur hausla afzaayi dono hi ke liye aapka tah-e-dil se shukraguzaar huN aqsh ji, bas yuNhi aage bhi aap saath deti rahiyegaa...
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«Reply #29 on: June 30, 2013, 01:30:15 AM »
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Taish bhai aapke is sher ne jakad hi liya...
jo suna haarte haiN ishq me sab,
hum bhi taiyaar aazmaane ko...
Waah jawab nahi...

iqtedar saaheb ye humari khushnaseebi ki aapko sher itna pasand aaya, bas aage bhi apna karam hum ar yuNhi banaaye rakheN...!!
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