Taish- HUMARE jaise yahaaN bahut haiN, TUMHARE jaise gine chune haiN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on September 07, 2013, 05:23:54 PM
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Jyada lutf lene ke liye ise "Tumhari aaNkhon meN humne dekha" us geet ke dhun meN gunguna lijiye... Umeed karta hun aapko maza aayega... Usual Smile


humari aaNkhon ki minnateN to tumhare palkon se haarne haiN...
humare jaise yahaaN bahut haiN tumhare jaise gine chune haiN...

dikhayi dete haiN humko aaNsu, sunaayi detiN haiN humko aahen,,
mujhe jagaa ke ye khwaab le lo ke khwaab sach se daraawne haiN...

teri inaayat mujhe mili hai, meri mohabbat tere liye hai,
jinheN yakeen tha nahin vo mere, vo log mujhse jale bhune haiN...

kabhi tatoluN jo dil maiN apna, tumhari yaadeN basi hui haiN,
ajeeb maaji* ke ye khazaane, daraawne haiN, lubhaawne haiN...

*Past

tumhari aaNkhon meN jab se dekha, humari duniya badal gayi hai,
jo sapne maine kabhi the dekhe, vo sab ke sab mere saamne haiN...

lifaafe meN ashqon ke lapeti hui mohabbat hai bheji tumko,
jo waqt tumko mile to padhna ye saare qisse jo ansune haiN...

kabhi kabhi to lage hai mujhko, yuN saaNs lena bhi berukhi hai,
tumhari khusboo ghuli fizaa meN to aaye mausam suhaawne haiN...

jinheN maiN sochun, jinheN maiN chaahuN, unheN maiN choo luN ke baat kar luN,
bade pashopesh* meN fansaa hooN vo aaj baithe jo saamne hain...

*Confusion
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«Reply #1 on: September 07, 2013, 05:26:11 PM »
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Taish bhai badi achi peshkash hai... waise ek bat samajh nahi a arahi...
aapse qafiye ke harf me chook ho gayi ya mai hi galat padh raha hun ...  Please clear kijiye
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«Reply #2 on: September 07, 2013, 05:35:31 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 07, 2013, 05:26:11 PM
Taish bhai badi achi peshkash hai... waise ek bat samajh nahi a arahi...
aapse qafiye ke harf me chook ho gayi ya mai hi galat padh raha hun ...  Please clear kijiye

abhi miyaaN, pehle to tareef ka shukriya, aur rahi baat qaafiye ke harf ki to ye is baat pe depend karta hai ki aap qaafiya kya le rahe haiN, agar main qaafiye ka harf 'na' kehta hun to maiN ghalat kahun aur vo ghalti hogi, par maiN yahaaN qaafiya 'ae' ko rakha hai, isiliye ye jaayaz rahega, aur 'n' letter ka sound sirf sunte waqt jyada ahcha lagne ke liye kiya hai maine... waise aapne itna ghaur farmaya iska bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2013, 05:37:10 PM »
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bahut bahut aur bahut khoob taish ji.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #4 on: September 07, 2013, 05:53:38 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Taish ji.
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2013, 06:01:20 PM »
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lifaafe meN ashqon ke lapeti hui mohabbat hai bheji tumko,
jo waqt tumko mile to padhna ye saare qisse jo ansune haiN...

waah waah taish ji bohut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2013, 06:15:26 PM »
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mazaaa aagaya taish ji ise gungunakar.... main bhi acha gunguna sakti hun .... yuppiieeee,,,,,,,,,, bht mast likha hai aapne bht hi masttttt
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2013, 06:22:02 PM »
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 Applause Applause
 bahut khoob , Taish ji .
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2013, 07:39:56 PM »
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bahut khoob  Applause Applause bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2013, 08:13:14 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2013, 08:31:49 PM »
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Hmmmmmm kabhi koi ghazal gaane ki dhun par gunguna ke nahi dekha tha.. aaj gunguna kar accha laga taish ji.. bahut khoooooooob aur badi achci ghazal hui hai... hazaron hazaron dili daaaaad qubool kijiye..

kabhi tatoluN jo dil maiN apna, tumhari yaadeN basi hui haiN,
ajeeb maaji* ke ye khazaane, daraawne haiN, lubhaawne haiN...

lifaafe meN ashqon ke lapeti hui mohabbat hai bheji tumko,
jo waqt tumko mile to padhna ye saare qisse jo ansune haiN...

kabhi kabhi to lage hai mujhko, yuN saaNs lena bhi berukhi hai,
tumhari khusboo ghuli fizaa meN to aaye mausam suhaawne haiN...

Yeh ashaar bahut bahut achche hain...  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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waah waah waah taish bhai kya kehne aapke..

har baar ki tarah iss baar bhi ek mazedar kalaam pesh kiya aapne..

Dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #12 on: September 08, 2013, 12:50:52 AM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on September 07, 2013, 05:37:10 PM
bahut bahut aur bahut khoob taish ji.. Usual Smile

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touhid bhai tareef aur hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #13 on: September 08, 2013, 03:08:32 AM »
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waah bada lutf hai is ghazal mein ... daad o  mubaarakbaad Taish ji
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