Taj Mahal

by seraj325 on January 08, 2009, 02:14:11 PM
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Eik Ghareeb ki taraf se aaplogon ko eik Azeem Tohfa " Taj Mahal "
 
Please accept my "Taj  Mahal "
 
"Gham zada-e dard hoon, hai dard se ulfat meri ,
Ashnaa-e dard karna ab rahi fitrat meri !!
 
Aaye kitne Qais yaan par, kitne raanjhe chal base ,
Hai nishaani koi baaqi yaad karne ke liye ? !!
 
Istarah chaaho , ke baaqi kuch nishaani bhi rahe ,
Kuch to zaahir dekh kar ho kuch zubaani bhi rahe !!
 
Aye Shaah Jahaan !
Tu shahansha tha  ,Teri chaahat men banta tha mahal ,
Maen pareeshaan haal , muflis bas banata hoon ghazal !!
 
Tune chaha jisko,  wo mumtaj bhi ab Taj hai ,
Maine jisko chaha wo posheeda dil ka raaz hai !!
 
Taj tera khoobsoorat sangmarmar ka jisam ,
Hai khada veerane men tanha sakoote mahwe gham !!
 
Ya ke Jamna ka kenaara, tere talwe dhota hai ,
Ya ke tanha raat men tu aah leke rota hai !!
 
Jab tumhen dekha, tu pahle mahwe hairat ho gaya ,
Dekh kar jalwa tera , apni  baseerat  kho  gaya !!
 
Teri ja se jamna ka saahil dikhaaii deta hai ,
Mujhko har patthar mein koi dil dikhaaii deta hai !!
 
Ghaas ka ye narm bistar , leitne ko kahta hai ,
Phir wahan se mudkar tujhko dekhne ko kahta hai !!
 
Na  lage Kashmeer achcha , aur na Manila lage,
Us se achcha to yahan ka Beir Ka Teela lage !!
 
Tera har ek phool , patti , jaali, sab kuch be nazeer ,
Dekhkar tujhko, samajhne lagta hoon khud ko haqeer !!
 
Aye Shahansha ! aaj koi bhi tera hamsar nahin ,
Mere ghar men kya kahoon, hai khaat par bistar nahin !!
 
Tou aye mere Mahboob !
Ab yahaan aane ka , bilkul na gilaa kar mujhse !
Mere  mahboob  kahin  aur  mila  kar  mujhse  "!!
By me,
Seraj
 

 
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«Reply #1 on: January 08, 2009, 02:20:57 PM »
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Eik Ghareeb ki taraf se aaplogon ko eik Azeem Tohfa " Taj Mahal "
 
Please accept my "Taj  Mahal "
 
"Gham zada-e dard hoon, hai dard se ulfat meri ,
Ashnaa-e dard karna ab rahi fitrat meri !!
 
Aaye kitne Qais yaan par, kitne raanjhe chal base ,
Hai nishaani koi baaqi yaad karne ke liye ? !!
 
Istarah chaaho , ke baaqi kuch nishaani bhi rahe ,
Kuch to zaahir dekh kar ho kuch zubaani bhi rahe !!
 
Aye Shaah Jahaan !
Tu shahansha tha  ,Teri chaahat men banta tha mahal ,
Maen pareeshaan haal , muflis bas banata hoon ghazal !!
 
Tune chaha jisko,  wo mumtaj bhi ab Taj hai ,
Maine jisko chaha wo posheeda dil ka raaz hai !!
 
Taj tera khoobsoorat sangmarmar ka jisam ,
Hai khada veerane men tanha sakoote mahwe gham !!
 
Ya ke Jamna ka kenaara, tere talwe dhota hai ,
Ya ke tanha raat men tu aah leke rota hai !!
 
Jab tumhen dekha, tu pahle mahwe hairat ho gaya ,
Dekh kar jalwa tera , apni  baseerat  kho  gaya !!
 
Teri ja se jamna ka saahil dikhaaii deta hai ,
Mujhko har patthar mein koi dil dikhaaii deta hai !!
 
Ghaas ka ye narm bistar , leitne ko kahta hai ,
Phir wahan se mudkar tujhko dekhne ko kahta hai !!
 
Na  lage Kashmeer achcha , aur na Manila lage,
Us se achcha to yahan ka Beir Ka Teela lage !!
 
Tera har ek phool , patti , jaali, sab kuch be nazeer ,
Dekhkar tujhko, samajhne lagta hoon khud ko haqeer !!
 
Aye Shahansha ! aaj koi bhi tera hamsar nahin ,
Mere ghar men kya kahoon, hai khaat par bistar nahin !!
 
Tou aye mere Mahboob !
Ab yahaan aane ka , bilkul na gilaa kar mujhse !
Mere  mahboob  kahin  aur  mila  kar  mujhse  "!!
By me,
Seraj
 

 

Bahut Bahut Khoob Seraj Bhai..
aapne to Tajmahal Ke Deedar hi kara diye.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2009, 02:33:54 PM »
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 Applause  Applause  Applause
Seraj ji aapne bahut bahut accha likha hai.
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«Reply #3 on: January 08, 2009, 02:56:17 PM »
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Bahoot gehri soch hai apki siraj ji...bahut khoob likha apne Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 08, 2009, 03:22:01 PM »
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Tujhe chahta raha mai iskadar,
K duniya v bhula baitha,
Teri ek hasi k badle,
Apni zindegi bhula baitha!

Na socha maine aage,
Kya hoga mera hashar,
Tujhse bichadne ka tha,
Dozak jaisa manzar!

Dilme khwahish to thi,
Pyar ki manzil mile,
Ya to farhad, ya mahiwal,
Ka naam mile!


Umid to humne ye ki thi,
Mai ranjha tera tu meri heer bane,
Par shayad khuda ko ye manzur na tha,
K tu meri takdeer bane!

Ab tu nahi hai duniya me,
Hu akela wahi khada,
Tu mumtaz to bangai,
Mai rehgaya niche pada!

Ye zindegi teri yado se,
Ab nasur si chubhti hai,
Kise pata tha meri dasta,
TAJ MAHAL se badi lagti hai!!
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«Reply #5 on: January 08, 2009, 03:35:35 PM »
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Bohat khoob seraj bohat khooooooooob sach kitni pyari zuban me bayaan kiya hain tumne apna kalam  Clapping Smiley ek purana sher yaad aa gaya...

Ek shehansha ne banakar hasee Taj Mahal
Hum gareebo ki muhabbat ka udaya hain mazak...

                        -NM-
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«Reply #6 on: January 08, 2009, 08:42:36 PM »
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Waah Seraj Ji..
Bohat Hi Badhiya Andaaz Hai Aapke..
Nice One Yaar,

Tajmahal Aur Apni Haqeeqat,.
Shahajaan Aur Apni Mohabbat,.
In Dono Ka Aapne Behtareen Andaaz Mein Farq Nikaala hai,.
Hume Pardkar Achcha Laga,.
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«Reply #7 on: January 08, 2009, 08:44:39 PM »
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Bohat khoob seraj bohat khooooooooob sach kitni pyari zuban me bayaan kiya hain tumne apna kalam  Clapping Smiley ek purana sher yaad aa gaya...

Ek shehansha ne banakar hasee Taj Mahal
Hum gareebo ki muhabbat ka udaya hain mazak...

                        -NM-


Waah Mere Bhai,.
Kya Khoob Kaha Hai,.

Do Lines Me Saara Haal Bayaan Kardiya,.
Hum Gareebon Ko,.
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«Reply #8 on: January 08, 2009, 08:58:55 PM »
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Eik Ghareeb ki taraf se aaplogon ko eik Azeem Tohfa " Taj Mahal "
 
Please accept my "Taj  Mahal "
 
"Gham zada-e dard hoon, hai dard se ulfat meri ,
Ashnaa-e dard karna ab rahi fitrat meri !!
 
Aaye kitne Qais yaan par, kitne raanjhe chal base ,
Hai nishaani koi baaqi yaad karne ke liye ? !!
 
Istarah chaaho , ke baaqi kuch nishaani bhi rahe ,
Kuch to zaahir dekh kar ho kuch zubaani bhi rahe !!
 
Aye Shaah Jahaan !
Tu shahansha tha  ,Teri chaahat men banta tha mahal ,
Maen pareeshaan haal , muflis bas banata hoon ghazal !!
 
Tune chaha jisko,  wo mumtaj bhi ab Taj hai ,
Maine jisko chaha wo posheeda dil ka raaz hai !!
 
Taj tera khoobsoorat sangmarmar ka jisam ,
Hai khada veerane men tanha sakoote mahwe gham !!
 
Ya ke Jamna ka kenaara, tere talwe dhota hai ,
Ya ke tanha raat men tu aah leke rota hai !!
 
Jab tumhen dekha, tu pahle mahwe hairat ho gaya ,
Dekh kar jalwa tera , apni  baseerat  kho  gaya !!
 
Teri ja se jamna ka saahil dikhaaii deta hai ,
Mujhko har patthar mein koi dil dikhaaii deta hai !!
 
Ghaas ka ye narm bistar , leitne ko kahta hai ,
Phir wahan se mudkar tujhko dekhne ko kahta hai !!
 
Na  lage Kashmeer achcha , aur na Manila lage,
Us se achcha to yahan ka Beir Ka Teela lage !!
 
Tera har ek phool , patti , jaali, sab kuch be nazeer ,
Dekhkar tujhko, samajhne lagta hoon khud ko haqeer !!
 
Aye Shahansha ! aaj koi bhi tera hamsar nahin ,
Mere ghar men kya kahoon, hai khaat par bistar nahin !!
 
Tou aye mere Mahboob !
Ab yahaan aane ka , bilkul na gilaa kar mujhse !
Mere  mahboob  kahin  aur  mila  kar  mujhse  "!!
By me,
Seraj
 

 

wah seeraj, kya pyare andaaz meh aap neh likha hai

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«Reply #9 on: January 08, 2009, 09:01:26 PM »
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Tujhe chahta raha mai iskadar,
K duniya v bhula baitha,
Teri ek hasi k badle,
Apni zindegi bhula baitha!

Na socha maine aage,
Kya hoga mera hashar,
Tujhse bichadne ka tha,
Dozak jaisa manzar!

Dilme khwahish to thi,
Pyar ki manzil mile,
Ya to farhad, ya mahiwal,
Ka naam mile!


Umid to humne ye ki thi,
Mai ranjha tera tu meri heer bane,
Par shayad khuda ko ye manzur na tha,
K tu meri takdeer bane!

Ab tu nahi hai duniya me,
Hu akela wahi khada,
Tu mumtaz to bangai,
Mai rehgaya niche pada!

Ye zindegi teri yado se,
Ab nasur si chubhti hai,
Kise pata tha meri dasta,
TAJ MAHAL se badi lagti hai!!



wah Salma, aap ka andaaz bhi bada kamaal ka hai

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #10 on: January 08, 2009, 09:27:39 PM »
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Tujhe chahta raha mai iskadar,
K duniya v bhula baitha,
Teri ek hasi k badle,
Apni zindegi bhula baitha!

Na socha maine aage,
Kya hoga mera hashar,
Tujhse bichadne ka tha,
Dozak jaisa manzar!

Dilme khwahish to thi,
Pyar ki manzil mile,
Ya to farhad, ya mahiwal,
Ka naam mile!


Umid to humne ye ki thi,
Mai ranjha tera tu meri heer bane,
Par shayad khuda ko ye manzur na tha,
K tu meri takdeer bane!

Ab tu nahi hai duniya me,
Hu akela wahi khada,
Tu mumtaz to bangai,
Mai rehgaya niche pada!

Ye zindegi teri yado se,
Ab nasur si chubhti hai,
Kise pata tha meri dasta,
TAJ MAHAL se badi lagti hai!!


Nice One Salma Ji..
Har Baar ki Tarah,.
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«Reply #11 on: January 08, 2009, 10:32:05 PM »
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Really wonderful presentation Seraj Ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 08, 2009, 10:33:13 PM »
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Tujhe chahta raha mai iskadar,
K duniya v bhula baitha,
Teri ek hasi k badle,
Apni zindegi bhula baitha!

Na socha maine aage,
Kya hoga mera hashar,
Tujhse bichadne ka tha,
Dozak jaisa manzar!

Dilme khwahish to thi,
Pyar ki manzil mile,
Ya to farhad, ya mahiwal,
Ka naam mile!


Umid to humne ye ki thi,
Mai ranjha tera tu meri heer bane,
Par shayad khuda ko ye manzur na tha,
K tu meri takdeer bane!

Ab tu nahi hai duniya me,
Hu akela wahi khada,
Tu mumtaz to bangai,
Mai rehgaya niche pada!

Ye zindegi teri yado se,
Ab nasur si chubhti hai,
Kise pata tha meri dasta,
TAJ MAHAL se badi lagti hai!!

Salma Ji aap ka bhi jawaab nahi
Bahut khoob likhti ho
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«Reply #13 on: January 08, 2009, 10:35:05 PM »
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Bohat khoob seraj bohat khooooooooob sach kitni pyari zuban me bayaan kiya hain tumne apna kalam  Clapping Smiley ek purana sher yaad aa gaya...

Ek shehansha ne banakar hasee Taj Mahal
Hum gareebo ki muhabbat ka udaya hain mazak...

                        -NM-

Very nice sharing indeed Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #14 on: January 09, 2009, 03:39:18 AM »
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Shukriya azeem ji!!
Shukriya Jasbir ji!!
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