Tal pe mai nachti rahoon

by nandbahu on November 20, 2012, 01:15:16 AM
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Phool chadhaye mandir mein
Devta ke charon mein

Aradhana mein leen huyee mai
Sudh budh apnee kho ke mai

Hriday ki khirki ko khol
Naino ke kapato ko khol

Usski murat ko utara
Apne man mandir mein aaj

Man ki veena ke tar baje
Payal bhi jhan jhankar kare

Ussko phir kiya samarpan
Apna kali sa khilta yauvan

Lay chhiri koi sargam ki
Swar se swar ke sangam ki

Tal pe mai nachti rahoon
Hosho havash kho ke mai

फूल चढ़ाये मंदिर में
देवता के चरणों में
अराधना में लीन हुयी मैं
सुध बुध अपनी खो के मैं
ह्रदय की खिरकी को खोल
नैनों के कपाटों को खोल
उसकी मूरत को उतारा
अपने मन मंदिर में आज
मन की वीणा के तार बजे
पायल भी झन झंकार करे
उसको किया फिर समर्पण
अपना कली सा खिलता यौवन
लय छिरी कोई सरगम की 
स्वर से स्वर के संगम की
ताल पे मैं नाचती रहूँ
होशो हवाश खो के मैं 
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2012, 01:55:19 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

nandbahut jee bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2012, 03:15:45 AM »
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bahut khoob bahoot khoob
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2012, 03:50:32 AM »
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bahut khubsurat rachna hai , nandbahuji. bahut badhai.
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

nandbahut jee bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.
thanx suman ji
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Quote from: anmolarora on November 20, 2012, 03:15:45 AM
bahut khoob bahoot khoob
thanx anmol ji
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bahut khubsurat rachna hai , nandbahuji. bahut badhai.
thanx siddiqui ji
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bahut khoob, ek RAU banta hai bhai icon_flower Applause Applause
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bahut sunder
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Behad Khobsurat Jazbaat .....Behad Pyaari Rachna Nand Ji .
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 Applause Applause Applause
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
badi pyaari rachna
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bahut khoob, ek RAU banta hai bhai icon_flower Applause Applause
thanx
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bahut sunder
dhanyavad saini ji
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Behad Khobsurat Jazbaat .....Behad Pyaari Rachna Nand Ji .
thanx kaushal ji
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