Tamaam umr maine........

by Shweta_Kashyap on March 20, 2009, 09:16:37 AM

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Tamaam umr maine khwaabon mein tarashaa jise,
Mujhe tum me wahi tasveer nazar aati hai !
Tumse milkar na jaane kyun lagta hai jaise,
Mujhe tum me apni taqdeer nazar aati hai !!


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Re: Tamaam umr maine........

«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2009, 09:29:48 AM »

NIce One Shweta JI,.


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Re: Tamaam umr maine........

«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2009, 09:31:52 AM »

Nice one Shweta!

Welcome to Yoindia!. Keep writing ...


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Re: Tamaam umr maine........

«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2009, 09:36:01 AM »

Bahut Khoob likha hai aapne !

Aapke creation mein chand lines main bhi jood dun !

Ghum ke andheron ki parwaah kaun kare,
Ab unme bhi ek chamakati lakeer nazar aati hai,
Apne dard-e-dil ki parwaah nahi mujhko,
Mujhe tum me dawa akseer nazar aati hai !!


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Re: Tamaam umr maine........

«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2009, 09:44:33 AM »

Bohat khoob Shweta and Karn..........


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Re: Tamaam umr maine........

«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2009, 10:21:44 AM »

Thanks to Jaanasheen Ji, Sophi Ji and Sajid Ji,
for encouraging me !
And special thanks to Karndhar Ji for adding such nice lines to my creation !


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Re: Tamaam umr maine........

«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2009, 01:48:31 PM »

karn and shweta... kya khoob lines hain!


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Re: Tamaam umr maine........

«Reply #7 on: March 25, 2009, 07:27:22 PM »

Quote from: Shweta_Kashyap on March 20, 2009, 09:16:37 AM

Tamaam umr maine khwaabon mein tarashaa jise,
Mujhe tum me wahi tasveer nazar aati hai !
Tumse milkar na jaane kyun lagta hai jaise,
Mujhe tum me apni taqdeer nazar aati hai !!

Nice !

In lines ko dekh kar Sunil Dutt ki HUMRAAZ movie ka ye song yaad aa gaya:

Maine Khwabon Mein Barson Tarasha Jise
Tum Vahi Sang-E-Marmar Ki Tasveer Ho
Tum Na Samjho Tumhara Muqadar Hoon Maein
Mein Samajhta Hoon Tum Meri Taqdeer Ho

Tum Agar Saath Dene Ka Vada Karo
Mein Yunhi Mast Nagme Lutata Rahoon !!