tamam ho jaye

by phoenix on June 23, 2006, 06:32:12 PM
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ranjana
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«Reply #30 on: June 30, 2006, 04:12:34 AM »
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bahut khub sonu............

hum hawao se unka pata puch lenge
hu ghataao se unka nagar puch lenge
bas jaayenge unke dil mein kuch aise
ki hum unke dil ko apna ghar kar lenge
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Sonu
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«Reply #31 on: June 30, 2006, 04:17:25 AM »
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Thanks Ranju sissss.......

zindagi main to musafir hoon teri kashti ka,
tu jahan mujhse kahegi mein utar jaoongi!!!

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bahut khub sonu............

hum hawao se unka pata puch lenge
hu ghataao se unka nagar puch lenge
bas jaayenge unke dil mein kuch aise
ki hum unke dil ko apna ghar kar lenge
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ranjana
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«Reply #32 on: June 30, 2006, 04:23:04 AM »
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nice sonu jaan

hamne apni jindgai ki kashti ki patwaar tujhe somp di
apni har khushi  ab toh tere naam kar di........
tere begair  na chal  sakenge ha ab do kadam bhi hum
hamne tere naam ke saath apni takdeer jodh  di
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Sonu
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«Reply #33 on: June 30, 2006, 04:28:23 AM »
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Ranju sis thanks... haila keya bat hai bahut khoob sis....

aisa lagta hai har imtehan ke liye,
zindagi ko hamara pata de diya hai!!!

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nice sonu jaan

hamne apni jindgai ki kashti ki patwaar tujhe somp di
apni har khushi  ab toh tere naam kar di........
tere begair  na chal  sakenge ha ab do kadam bhi hum
hamne tere naam ke saath apni takdeer jodh  di
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«Reply #34 on: June 30, 2006, 04:32:42 AM »
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shukriya sonu jaan

tu agar saath hai mere toh har imtehan se gujar jaayenge
jab thaama hai haath tera hamne ,toh har mushkilo se gujar jaayenge
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Sonu
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«Reply #35 on: June 30, 2006, 04:36:24 AM »
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Ranju sis keya bat hai....

khoobsurat woh zamane yaad ayenge,
chAh kar bhi hum tumhe na bhool payenge,
aye shamma tere deedaar ko hum tarash jayeNge,
bankar parwana teri yaad mein jal jayenge.

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shukriya sonu jaan

tu agar saath hai mere toh har imtehan se gujar jaayenge
jab thaama hai haath tera hamne ,toh har mushkilo se gujar jaayenge
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ranjana
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«Reply #36 on: June 30, 2006, 04:49:21 AM »
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bahut  khub sonu jaan

jab dekha unko mehfil mein toh hamne apni  nazaro ko jhuka diya
jab thaama haath mera unhone toh dil ke har taar ko  jhanaka diya
karte rahe woh hamse baate pyaar ki jaane kya -kya
hamne sharm se  apne daman se shama ko bujha diya
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Sonu
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«Reply #37 on: June 30, 2006, 04:53:12 AM »
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Ranju sis shukirya.. hailaa...  :oops:



woh pyar kya hain jis mein judaai nehin,
woh ishq kya hain jis mein larai nehin,
woh jaan kya hain Jis mein rou nehin,
woh dil hi kya Jis main tu nehin

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bahut  khub sonu jaan

jab dekha unko mehfil mein toh hamne apni  nazaro ko jhuka diya
jab thaama haath mera unhone toh dil ke har taar ko  jhanaka diya
karte rahe woh hamse baate pyaar ki jaane kya -kya
hamne sharm se  apne daman se shama ko bujha diya
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«Reply #38 on: July 01, 2006, 03:08:39 PM »
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Ranju sis shukirya.. hailaa...  :oops:



woh pyar kya hain jis mein judaai nehin,
woh ishq kya hain jis mein larai nehin,
woh jaan kya hain Jis mein rou nehin,
woh dil hi kya Jis main tu nehin

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bahut  khub sonu jaan

jab dekha unko mehfil mein toh hamne apni  nazaro ko jhuka diya
jab thaama haath mera unhone toh dil ke har taar ko  jhanaka diya
karte rahe woh hamse baate pyaar ki jaane kya -kya
hamne sharm se  apne daman se shama ko bujha diya


hailaa...... :razz:  :oops: kya hau sonu jaan.......

ishhqe khuda ka nur hai
ishqe ek khubsurat lamaha hai
ishqe ek kyaamat hai
ishqe khuda ki ebadat hai.......... :D
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phoenix
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«Reply #39 on: July 03, 2006, 05:27:21 PM »
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bahut khoob ranjana ji and sonu ji
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ranjana
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«Reply #40 on: July 04, 2006, 03:58:08 AM »
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shukriya Nitiesh..........

teri baate meri nende chura ke le gayi
ek geet thee teri awaz mein gunguna ke reh gayi

ek khusboo aayi tere badan ki mujhe hawa mein raat ko
khawabo mein woh hawa mujhe tere pass udda ke le gayi

tera ek  ehasas sa chhayaa raha mujhe per raat bhar
kal raat mujhe tere aagosh mein sula ke ek khawab mujhko de gayi
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«Reply #41 on: July 10, 2006, 12:59:21 AM »
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hi ranju sis... bahut khob keya bat hai sis....  :oops: kuch nahi sis.. apney bahut payra likha tha to sharm ah gaye thi  :oops:



lut gaye hai kitne raahi mohabbat ki rahon mein,
aaj hum bhi lut gaye teri nasheeli nigaahon mein.

mauj hi mauj hai yahaan, kinaare nahi dikhte,
teri palko ke baadalon mein, sitaare nahi dikhte.
gum hai duniya saari, hum bhi bhatak gaye,
teri nazron k siva hume aur koi, nazaare nahi dikhte.
dhadkane bhi badal gayi dubti hui aahon mein...
aaj hum bhi lut gaye teri nasheeli nigaahon mein....

chup hai nigaahein, honth bhi khamosh hai,
behek gayi hai saasein, hawaaein bhi madhosh hai.
mera dil hai laapataa, ninde bhi gum hui,
is haalat me meri, teri adaon ka dosh hai.
sab kuchh le liya, ab mujhe bhi lelo apni baahon mein...
aaj hum bhi lut gaye teri nasheeli nigaahon mein.




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hailaa...... :razz:  :oops: kya hau sonu jaan.......

ishhqe khuda ka nur hai
ishqe ek khubsurat lamaha hai
ishqe ek kyaamat hai
ishqe khuda ki ebadat hai.......... :D
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Sonu
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«Reply #42 on: July 10, 2006, 01:00:32 AM »
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shukriya phoenix ji....

ranju sis bahut acha likha hia apney...

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bahut khoob ranjana ji and sonu ji
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«Reply #43 on: July 10, 2006, 02:14:06 AM »
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its really beautiful poem keep writing
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Sonu
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«Reply #44 on: July 10, 2006, 05:07:34 AM »
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shukriya Amazing ji.... bahut bahut shukriya  :oops:

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its really beautiful poem keep writing
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