Tamanna-e-Dil....... -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

NETRAPAL

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«Reply #15 on: May 27, 2008, 01:29:46 PM »

Quote from: punam on May 26, 2008, 02:29:02 PM

Na waqt ruka humare liye na hum ruk paye
mile bhi hum kahan jahan se bichhde the...

paake saamne hum na koi baat kar paye
dil me sawalon ke sailaab jo bhare the..

jee bhar ke dekhne ki koshish me hum hare
aankhon me jo aansoo ubal rahe the...

kahan the tum itne din puchh bhi na paye
lab tak aake alfaaz yun hi jaise ruk gaye the...

sare gham hum pal me bhula bhi diye
jab humen aap bahon me bhar liye the..

shukar khuda ka aaj woh humen mil to gaye
bas yun kat jaye zindagi dil hi dil me dua kar rahe the....

ek koshish poonam ji

wakt kee kya kahte hai wo
wkt rok lete hai aashik
aye dil lagane wale
hawao kaa kukh badl dete hai aashik

nahi bana pyaa tha jag me koi
taj tak bana dete hai aashik
wak kee to beesat kya hai
chand tak tod late hai aashik

netra..


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muhammed rashed

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Re: Tamanna-e-Dil.......

«Reply #16 on: May 27, 2008, 01:41:48 PM »

i like it
good going


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Sonia01

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Re: Tamanna-e-Dil.......

«Reply #17 on: May 27, 2008, 01:46:37 PM »

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Juda rah kar humen anjaane dukh buhat mile, -
Tujhse lipat kar roye to sab gham chhat gaye, -

Bahut accha likha hai Syednaami jee Applause


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syednaami

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«Reply #18 on: May 27, 2008, 05:41:59 PM »

Quote from: punam on May 27, 2008, 11:25:40 AM

kaushikbhawna ji bahot acha likhe aap...

syed ji...koi labz nahi mere paas aap k tareef karne...
bahot bahot acha likhe ho aap....

Honey di thanx...
k.shael ji sukriya ..aap ko acha laga humare liye yehi bahot hai...
Majid ji sukriya....aap bhi kuch likh ke jaate....

Punam Saahiba, haosla afzai ke liye buhat buhat maherbaani, So nice of you...

Quote from: Sonia01 on May 27, 2008, 01:46:37 PM

Bahut accha likha hai Syednaami jee Applause

Sonia01 jee, aapne bilkul meri hi pasand ka shayr chuna hai, aapki aamad aur waqt dene ka tah-e-dil se mashkoor hun... Shukriya


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syednaami

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Re: Tamanna-e-Dil.......

«Reply #19 on: May 27, 2008, 05:45:41 PM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on May 27, 2008, 01:29:46 PM

ek koshish poonam ji

wakt kee kya kahte hai wo
wkt rok lete hai aashik
aye dil lagane wale
hawao kaa kukh badl dete hai aashik

nahi bana pyaa tha jag me koi
taj tak bana dete hai aashik
wak to kee beesat kya hai
chand tak tod late hai aashik

netra..

Natrapa jee, Yeh itni umda koshish hai ki dil khush ho gaya, buhat badhiya...


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Pooja

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Re: Tamanna-e-Dil.......

«Reply #20 on: May 27, 2008, 09:23:41 PM »

bahoot khoob Punam, Sami and Netra ji!!


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deetri1

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«Reply #21 on: May 27, 2008, 09:25:45 PM »

punam ji
thanks for the explaination...


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syednaami

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«Reply #22 on: May 27, 2008, 09:31:44 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 27, 2008, 09:23:41 PM

bahoot khoob Punam, Sami and Netra ji!!

Daad ka nazraana humen qabool hai, -
Aap ki aamad ke hum bade mashkoor hain. -


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Pooja

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«Reply #23 on: May 27, 2008, 09:35:31 PM »

APKI PAHLI LINE SAMJH MAI AA GAI.
AB IS LINE KA ARTH BHI BATA DIJIYE:
Aap ki aamad ke hum bade mashkoor hain.


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syednaami

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«Reply #24 on: May 27, 2008, 09:54:11 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 27, 2008, 09:35:31 PM

APKI PAHLI LINE SAMJH MAI AA GAI.
AB IS LINE KA ARTH BHI BATA DIJIYE:
Aap ki aamad ke hum bade mashkoor hain.

Daad ka nazraana humen qabool hai, -
Aap ke aane par hum buhat aabhari hain. -

Yeh hamari khata hai ya saza, -
Khud hi qazi hain aur khud hi mujrim, -


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Pooja

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Re: Tamanna-e-Dil.......

«Reply #25 on: May 27, 2008, 10:05:37 PM »

bana kar khud ko mujrim, khud he judge hue baithe hai
Ya allah, kis ada se ajj, dil sakhat hue baithe hai!!!


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syednaami

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«Reply #26 on: May 27, 2008, 10:12:06 PM »

Unko laga woh sakht ho gaye hain buhat, -
Mud kar yeh bhi na poochha khairiyat to hai. -


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Pooja

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«Reply #27 on: May 27, 2008, 10:31:29 PM »

jinko samjhate rahe hum apne majboot kandhein
unhone yah kis tarah ki baat kar daali
hum to hai mash.hoor pahle se he andhon main
apne kis najariye se yah baat kah daali tongue3


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syednaami

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«Reply #28 on: May 27, 2008, 10:46:15 PM »

Woh ab bhi mazboot hain pahle jaise, -
Unki aql men koi naraaz tha kaise, -
Yeh khabar unko bhi na thi to kya kare, -
Woh to phir bhi unko awaaz dete rahe -


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punam

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«Reply #29 on: May 29, 2008, 08:01:08 PM »

Thanx Mann ji...

Netra ji aap bahot khoob kosish kiye hain...bahot acha likhe...

rashed ji thanx...

syed ji...hoshla koun kis ka afza raha..? aap humare ..
thanx a lot...

pooja di... thanx

deetri ji chalo aap ko samjha saki main...


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