tan ke har taar main tu.... manju

by manjum on June 20, 2011, 04:10:03 AM
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Tan ke har tar main tu sath suron sa bajta hai.
Dil ka har mahaul tere hone se hi sajta hai.

Na kuchh khyal hai apna na khabar auron ki,
Meera ki tarah "mann" bas tera naam bhajta hai.

Bina mile hi tu mujh se mila rahta hai.
Bina chhuye hi har ang kyon larazta hai.

Manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2011, 04:37:05 AM »
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wah wah manju ji bahut sunder rachna.
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Tan ke har tar main tu sath suron sa bajta hai.
Dil ka har mahaul tere hone se hi sajta hai. hello2 hello2

Na kuchh khyal hai apna na khabar auron ki,
Meera ki tarah "mann" bas tera naam bhajta hai.

Bina mile hi tu mujh se mila rahta hai.
Bina chhuye hi har ang kyon larazta hai.

Manju "mann"

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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2011, 04:39:23 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya sureshji....bas ek koshish hai

sath rahiega......
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2011, 05:37:24 AM »
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manjum ji,

Nice thoughts..waah..waah.
Very good....keep it up..

All the best.

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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2011, 05:40:36 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya satishji....

yun hi sath rahirga....
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2011, 05:58:31 AM »
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bohut khoob manju
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2011, 07:01:43 AM »
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Tan ke har tar main tu sath suron sa bajta hai.
Dil ka har mahaul tere hone se hi sajta hai.

Na kuchh khyal hai apna na khabar auron ki,
Meera ki tarah "mann" bas tera naam bhajta hai.

Bina mile hi tu mujh se mila rahta hai.
Bina chhuye hi har ang kyon larazta hai.

Manju "mann"

kamaaal hai ji kamaal…
dardile kalam se aisa khumaar unexpectable tha…
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daad daad
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2011, 07:07:45 AM »
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Tan ke har tar main tu sath suron sa bajta hai.
Dil ka har mahaul tere hone se hi sajta hai.

Na kuchh khyal hai apna na khabar auron ki,
Meera ki tarah "mann" bas tera naam bhajta hai.

Bina mile hi tu mujh se mila rahta hai.
Bina chhuye hi har ang kyon larazta hai.

Manju "mann"




waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah manjum jiwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2011, 09:22:16 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya niralaji.... bas koshish ki hai....

sath rahie...
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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2011, 09:23:48 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya adilji....

sath raihega.......
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2011, 09:26:28 AM »
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baht Bahut Khoooob Anjuji..

Ishq Ke Khumaar Mein Dooba Hua Kalaam Mehsoos hua..

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«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2011, 09:35:26 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji...
bas koshi ki hai.. sab bahut kah rahe the kuchh ishq aur khushi par kahne ke lie... socha dekhte hain...

wese bahut mushkil hai....
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«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2011, 09:46:51 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji...
bas koshi ki hai.. sab bahut kah rahe the kuchh ishq aur khushi par kahne ke lie... socha dekhte hain...

wese bahut mushkil hai....

Anju Ji Sab Dil Ki Baatein Hai, Jab Tak Kuch Mehsoos naa kar Sako, Likh Bhi Naa Sakhoge..Aur Main Sach mein inn Bataon Ko Nahi Maanta, Insaan Jin Jazbaaton Ko mehsoos Karta Hai ussi par Likhta hai Aur waqt-Bewaqt Apni Soch,Apne Jazbaat Kuch Naa Kuch Likhwaati Jaati hai..
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«Reply #13 on: June 20, 2011, 09:55:33 AM »
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sach kah rahe hain aap khwaishji...
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«Reply #14 on: June 20, 2011, 01:33:28 PM »
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Tan ke har tar main tu sath suron sa bajta hai.
Dil ka har mahaul tere hone se hi sajta hai.

Na kuchh khyal hai apna na khabar auron ki,
Meera ki tarah "mann" bas tera naam bhajta hai.

Bina mile hi tu mujh se mila rahta hai.
Bina chhuye hi har ang kyon larazta hai.

Manju "mann"

Bahut khoobsurat Panktiyaa Likhi HaiN Aapne ... Manjum Ji!

Very Touching ... Dil Se Daad !!!!
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