~~~~ Tanahai ka alam ~~~~~

by BeNam on April 04, 2006, 02:37:38 AM
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Jise chaha woh hai nazaro se dur,
Kaisa ajib hai mahobaat ka dastur,
Kya kare shikava kisi se,
Ab toh tanahai unhe bhi hai manzur!

Chahat kis kadar tadapati hai,
Kar deti hai rone per majbur,
Tanhai ka alam kuch aur hota hai,
Na din ko chain na raato ko sakun!

Yeh Tanhai jaan le legi meri,
Ger tum na aye mere huzur!

-- BENAM---
Main akela nahi, teri yadon ke saye hai sath,
Jab bhi yaad ati hai teri, khuli ankhon se guzari hai raat!
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«Reply #1 on: April 04, 2006, 02:51:48 AM »
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bahoot khoob Benam jee......!!!

Dustur_E_isqh hi kuchh aisa hota hai
aajaaye dil kisi pe to aur tanha ho jata hai

tadpaaye  jitana bhi pyaar hume
dil ussee ke chaht mein aur  dooba jata hai

Aalam_E_shamo_shahar ka kahna JANAM
pal bhar bhi uske bina jeena duswaar ho jata hai
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«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2006, 04:20:22 AM »
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Jise chaha woh hai nazaro se dur,
Kaisa ajib hai mahobaat ka dastur,
Kya kare shikava kisi se,
Ab toh tanahai unhe bhi hai manzur!

Chahat kis kadar tadapati hai,
Kar deti hai rone per majbur,
Tanhai ka alam kuch aur hota hai,
Na din ko chain na raato ko sakun!

Yeh Tanhai jaan le legi meri,
Ger tum na aye mere huzur!

-- BENAM---
Main akela nahi, teri yadon ke saye hai sath,
Jab bhi yaad ati hai teri, khuli ankhon se guzari hai raat!


BENAM JI BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB... gazab ka likha hai aapne..khas kar yeh line dil ko choo gai ki.................
        tanhai ka alam kuch aur hota hai,
        na din ko chain na raaho ko sakun...
waqai bahut khubsoorat...... aur chitra ji aapka to jawab hi nahi...good
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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2006, 04:42:11 AM »
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bahut hi khoob.. kya lines hai..bahut hi khoob likha hai benam ji.. chitra bahut acchi shayari hamesha ki tarah..keep it up..
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«Reply #4 on: April 04, 2006, 04:48:34 AM »
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Tumhare bina dil mera ghabraaye jaata hai,
Na chain hai na araam hai bus tadaptaa hi jaata hai,
Nazre tikii hain raahon per teri furkatt ne itna sataya hai,
Ikk Ikk pal jeena dushwaar hua sa jaata hai,
Saansein ruki si dhakane pareshan kaisi uljhano mein mujhe daala hai,
Ae mere rehnumaa aa jao ab ke in ashqon ko na roka jaata hai....

gesu's tanhai!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2006, 04:55:57 AM »
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Benam bhai.. marvelous..!!!  Chitra n Gesu  as always superb!!!


Raat hai Tanha , Chand bhi Madhosh hai
Hath mein hai jaam,magar peene ka kisse hosh hai
Iss kadar akhein nam hai Intezar mein tere
Dil to pukar raha magar,juban khamosh hain...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2006, 05:03:25 AM »
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Fantastic Work BeNam bhai and All............. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2006, 05:10:30 AM »
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wah bahut khoob jeet saahib.. shukriya badnaam ji & jeet..
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«Reply #8 on: April 04, 2006, 05:16:45 AM »
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thanks Gesu N gaurav bhai ...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: April 04, 2006, 05:20:32 AM »
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bahoot bahoot Shukriya janaab.....tareef ke liye..!!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2006, 05:22:49 AM »
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Tanhaion ke aalam bhi ajeeb khel dikhlate hain....
Jo kabhi hua karte the kareeb ab woh door nazar aate hain......!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2006, 05:29:57 AM »
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Benam bhai.. marvelous..!!! Chitra n Gesu as always superb!!!


Raat hai Tanha , Chand bhi Madhosh hai
Hath mein hai jaam,magar peene ka kisse hosh hai
Iss kadar akhein nam hai Intezar mein tere
Dil to pukar raha magar,juban khamosh hain...!!!


Wah JEET kitni sadgee se se apne dil ka bataaya hai....!!

chand ko is kadar madhoshi banaa jati hai
tanhaaiyo mein jo unki yaad aa jati hai

ankho se sapne bhar aate hai asqh banke
jab dhdkane khamoushi se unhe pukare jati hai
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2006, 08:45:21 AM »
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Tanhai ka alam kuch es tarah humse bola..........
Pas nahi koi tere kiyun betha tu bilkul akela.........

Jawab meine tanahai ko kuch es tarah diya..........
Ab nahi hai woh pas mere jisko humne pyar kiya..........

Tanhai boli kab tak yeh shouk manaoege..........
Pakadlo hath kisika warna zindgi me aur tanha ho jaoge.......

Mein bola tanhai se, kiyun karun pyar mein kisi aur se..........
Pyar toh woh zazbaa hai jo niklta hai dil ki gehrai se..........

Meri tanhai dekh kar, tanhai bhi aur tanha ho gyi........
Kuch na boli wo aur bas ro gyi...........

Meine tanhai se pucha, mujhese kiya galti ho gyi..........
kiyun yeh ashko ki mala teri ankhonko bheego gyi.......

The wo tanha aur zazbaat uskey umar ayae the.........
Jo lagi thee chot uskey dil mein, bas wahi ghav ubhar aye the...

Dekh tanhai ki tanah zindgi ko mein bhi barbas ro gya......
Basa ke tanhai ko apni ankhon me, mein bhi aur tanha ho gya....
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«Reply #13 on: April 04, 2006, 09:08:23 AM »
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Tanhai ka alam kuch es tarah humse bola..........
Pas nahi koi tere kiyun betha tu bilkul akela.........

Jawab meine tanahai ko kuch es tarah diya..........
Ab nahi hai woh pas mere jisko humne pyar kiya..........

Tanhai boli kab tak yeh shouk manaoege..........
Pakadlo hath kisika warna zindgi me aur tanha ho jaoge.......

Mein bola tanhai se, kiyun karun pyar mein kisi aur se..........
Pyar toh woh zazbaa hai jo niklta hai dil ki gehrai se..........

Meri tanhai dekh kar, tanhai bhi aur tanha ho gyi........
Kuch na boli wo aur bas ro gyi...........

Meine tanhai se pucha, mujhese kiya galti ho gyi..........
kiyun yeh ashko ki mala teri ankhonko bheego gyi.......

The wo tanha aur zazbaat uskey umar ayae the.........
Jo lagi thee chot uskey dil mein, bas wahi ghav ubhar aye the...

Dekh tanhai ki tanah zindgi ko mein bhi barbas ro gya......
Basa ke tanhai ko apni ankhon me, mein bhi aur tanha ho gya....


Marvalous Bade bhai....kya khoob bayan ki hai Tanhai ke aalam ki Daastaan.......Very Nice.......Keep It Up
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«Reply #14 on: April 04, 2006, 12:57:39 PM »
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Tanhaio ke bhi ajeeb raste hain.....
Yahan milte har gum bahut saste hain.....

Kiya karte the kabhi jiska intezaar....
Aaj usi ka naam sunte hee inn Aankhon se Ashq baraste hain....
Tanhaio ke bhi ajeeb raste hain.....

Ab toh hum sunsaan andhere rasto pe manzilein Talaash karte hain.....
Milega koi toh humsafar yahan bas yahi sochte hain....
Tanhaio ke bhi ajeeb raste hain.........!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~~**Badnaam Shayar**~~
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