~~~~ Tanahai ka alam ~~~~~

by BeNam on April 04, 2006, 02:37:38 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 04, 2006, 04:19:43 PM »
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bahoot mast ho gyi tanhaai.....wah kya likha hai...!!!

jara jo saath le lo hume tum apni tanhaaiyo mein
hazaaro deep jal jaye ek saath shamiyane mein
tanhaai ka aalam aur bhi nikhar aayega sanam
har jarra iska doob jayega dil ki gahraaiyo mein
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«Reply #16 on: April 05, 2006, 05:02:49 AM »
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nice ones badnam ji , chitra ji and rock ji..
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«Reply #17 on: April 05, 2006, 06:54:03 AM »
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Sukriya Chitra..... appne , gaurav aur Rock ne bhi bhut hi achha likha hai... !!!

Har Din-Raat abb sajja lagne laggi hai
tere bina yeh duniya Tanha lagne laggi hai
Ashq gir kar doori ka ehsaas kra dete hain
Abb Yeh basant bhi mujhe,pat.jard lagne laggi hai...!!!
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«Reply #18 on: April 05, 2006, 07:12:04 AM »
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wah wah jeet bahut khoob....
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«Reply #19 on: April 05, 2006, 07:17:22 AM »
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Tumhari judai hamein ek saza si deti hai,
Marna aasaan aur jeena mushkil hai
Kuch aisi tadap yeh deti hai,
Dil-e-gehraayi se tumse milne ki hook uthti hai,
Kabhi to honge tumhare pehloo mein bus dil ko yahi umeed rehti hai...

gesu's tanhai!!!!!!
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«Reply #20 on: April 06, 2006, 03:02:19 AM »
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Thanks for such a wonderful response friends!  Each and every post is worth reading!

Tanaha dil ki her dhadkan hai,
Tere khawbo ka sahara de de,
Manzil ko dhundhati meri kashti hai,
Teri bahon ka kinara de de!

Tanaha guzara hai zindagi ka safar,
Issey thodi si reh-guzar de de,
Intazar ka alam soch, deewana hua hun,
Is dil ko jhuthi hi koi tasalli de de!

--- BENAM ----
Tanaha her mehfil, tanaha her rah meri,
Teri yaad main nikalati hai dil se her aah meri!
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«Reply #21 on: April 06, 2006, 06:21:15 AM »
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Bahut khoob benam ji...
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«Reply #22 on: April 06, 2006, 06:25:44 AM »
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Jhooti tasalliyan dekar hum roz is dil ko behalaate hain,
Umeed nahi tere aane ki fir bhi umeed lagaye bethey hain,
Intezaar karenge qyamatt tak tera tu aaye na aaye hum zidd mein adhe bethein hain,
Aazmaana hai khuda ko bhi aaj dekhein to zara woh aur kitne sitam dhaata hain,
Koi nahi mera yeh tanhaayiyon ka sahara hain,
Kuch saanson ki lakeerein kuch meethi yaadon ka sahara hai...

gesu's koshish!!!!!!
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«Reply #23 on: April 06, 2006, 06:37:29 AM »
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Quote from: "Jeet jee"

Sukriya Chitra..... appne , gaurav aur Rock ne bhi bhut hi achha likha hai... !!!

Har Din-Raat abb sajja lagne laggi hai
tere bina yeh duniya Tanha lagne laggi hai
Ashq gir kar doori ka ehsaas kra dete hain
Abb Yeh basant bhi mujhe,pat.jard lagne laggi hai...!!!


ho jab bhi mahsoos tanhai hume yaad kar liye karo
door nahi hoon itni ke tum ashq bahaa diya karo
raat ke baad subaha ,judaai ke baad milan hota jaroor hai
saawan bhi aayega ek din,pat-jhad ka gum na kiya karo
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«Reply #24 on: April 06, 2006, 06:42:54 AM »
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nice one chitra ji.....
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«Reply #25 on: April 06, 2006, 07:25:17 AM »
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Benam Bhai.. ek bar phir se aapki poem dil par dastak de gayi... wonderful !!!

Chitra n Gesu .. Thanks for appreciating

U both gals.. write very beautifully :D  app dono itna accha jawaab dette ho ..mujhe toh samjh nahi aata agge kya likhon... aur main patli gali se kheesak jata hoon .. he he :wink:
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«Reply #26 on: April 06, 2006, 03:26:39 PM »
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Jeet ji

Aag bahoot dekhi hai humne apke dil mein
mujhe bhi jala jati hai ye gile badan mein
usse aag ki bas ek chingaari bhadka do aaj
ke roshan ho jaye har sher is mahfil mein
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«Reply #27 on: April 06, 2006, 03:47:16 PM »
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Jeet ji

Aag bahoot dekhi hai humne apke dil mein
mujhe bhi jala jati hai ye gile badan mein
usse aag ki bas ek chingaari bhadka do aaj
ke roshan ho jaye har sher is mahfil mein



Yeh kaisi agg hai mujko lagi
Pani se bhi yeh bhuj na paaye
chale the jalane teri mehfil ko hum
tujhe dekhte hi khud ko hum yaad rakh na paye ...!!!
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«Reply #28 on: April 06, 2006, 04:19:59 PM »
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Jeet jeeeeeeeee

YE Isqh ki aag hai pani se bujhegi nahi
ek shabnam se dahki hai thamegi nahi
yaado ka karwa jo ab chal pada hai ab
ab to ye aag aur bade bina rahegi nahi

jalte raho....yu hi....isi mien hume sukun milta hai....kuchh to hai jo humesha rahta hia humare paas.....EK AAG
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«Reply #29 on: April 06, 2006, 05:01:25 PM »
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Thak gaya hoon chalte chalte
Sansein bhi bojh lagti hain

har 'pal' mujhe jalata hai
yeh kis manzil par main aagaya

woh be-khabar hai halat se meri
koi ja kar usse bata de

Ya phir khuda tu hi kuch aaisa kar
zehar mujko kahin se woh la de...!!!


tere  bane hai nishan khamosh rahon par....
tu anjani hi sahi.. magar raste toh mere hain.....
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